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SUNSHINE (MG) Epilogue PAGE 136 (9th/Nov/2011) (Page 33)

ammu5 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 4:04am | IP Logged
wow maan worried ?? beautiful update

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SahSah IF-Sizzlerz

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The updates were really beautiful...
loved them...u awesome di...
keep writing

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Part 10

Sasha called Tasha on her mobile asking where was Geetika and what did MK say, and was told that the stupid girl was still inside and as the blinds were drawn nothing can be said what is happening, just as she was ending the call she saw Geetika coming out of the cabin in a dazzled state and not knowing what could have happened she guessed that Geetika had received a strict warning as she was also carrying an envelope in her hand and instead of going to the 5th floor she headed to the exit of the building, Sasha was on cloud 7 very, very happy at the success of her plan.

As Geetika sat in the taxi she called Pinky informing that she was going home, than she took the envelope out of her bag and wondered what was in it, Maan has given her that envelope as she was leaving her cabin it was quite heavy, she slowly opened it and found her Kangan in it, she looked at it and then she looked at her wrist and remembered that while typing last evening she had put it aside and must have forgotten; she smiled at the jewel which was now priceless. All the way to her home she was smiling.

Gungunaati Hai Yeh Hawaayein, Gungunaata Hai Gagan
Gaa Raha Hai Yeh Saara Aalam, Zoobi Doobi Parampam
(Zoobi Doobi Zoobi Doobi Pampaara Zoobi Doobi Parampam
Zoobi Doobi Zoobi Doobi Naache Kyun Paagal Stupid Mann) - 2
Shaakhon Pe Patte Ga Rahe Hain, Phulon Pe Bhanware Ga Rahe
Deewaani Kirane Ga Rahi Hai, Yeh Panchchhi Ga Rahe
O O O Bagiya Mein Do Phulon Ki Ho Rahi Hai Guftgu
Jaisa Filmon Mein Hota Hai Ho Raha Hai Hubahu
(Zoobi Doobi Zoobi Doobi Pampaara Zoobi Doobi Parampam
Zoobi Doobi Zoobi Doobi Naache Kyun Paagal Stupid Mann) - 2

In the evening Pinky came to her rushing, she was so worried that she made Adi drop her instead of taking the bus, and the poor lover did as she asked him to, and she did not even offer him to come in and said goodbye.

Haan Rimjhim Rimjhim Rimjhim San San San San Hawa
Tip Tip Tip Tip Bunde Gurrate Bijaliya
Bheegi Bheegi Saari Mein Yuun Thumake Lagaati Tu
Jaisa Filmon Mein Hota Hai Ho Raha Hai Hubahu
(Zoobi Doobi Zoobi Doobi Pampaara Zoobi Doobi Parampam
Zoobi Doobi Zoobi Doobi Naache Kyun Paagal Stupid Mann) - 2

'Geetika, where is she Aunty' she asked Rano, and the older lady shrugged saying, 'in the room, may be she is not well, sh eis not quite responding to anything I am asking her' worried Pinky entered the room to find Geetika staring at the Kangan, "Geetika, what happened?'no response 'Geetika!' no response "GEET!' the dazed girl looked at her friend and smiled and pulled her in a hug, startled Pinky touched her head to check if she had fever 'Geetika what happened? why did you all of the sudden came home? where were you? why did you not come for presentation? what did Maan sir say?' Geetika smiled, 'one by one dear' and slowly narrated the whole incidence half the time blushing.

Ambar Ka Chaand Jamin Par Itaraake Ga Raha
Ik Tim Tim Tuta Taara Aur Ithalaake Ga Raha
Hai Raatein Akeli Tanaha Mujhe Chhu Le Aake Tu
Jaisa Filmon Mein Hota Hai Ho Raha Hai Hubahu
(Zoobi Doobi Zoobi Doobi Pampaara Zoobi Doobi Parampam
Zoobi Doobi Zoobi Doobi Naache Kyun Paagal Stupid Mann) - 2

Pinky looked at her with an astonished expression, 'Geetika, look at me' but the poor soul just blushed more, 'Geetika he hugged you, wow' Geetika blushed more, she turned from pink to red, 'OMG Geetika you are blushing so much just like heroine from 70's, I am sure you would have died if he would have kissed you' Geetika hit her friend and blushed harder.

Zoobi Doobi Doobi O Doobi Paagal Stupid Mann Pamaparara
Zoobi Doobi Zoobi Doobi Pamapara Paagal Stupid Mann.

The coming days flew like a jet for Geetika, she hardly noticed people around her, she ritually wore the Kangan, every time MK looke dat her or smiled at her she was in dreamland, Sasha shouted on her, overworked her, pointed out mistakes in her work; but she was immune to her behaviour; each time she saw MK she forgot everything, she worked mechanically always in his thoughts.

Same was MK's plight, he searched for reasons to go to the 5th floor or call her for some random presentation, he instructed Sasha that as this immature girl needed attention, he would be glad if she worked directly under him, and stupid Sasha assuming that MK was really irritated made things easy for him.

May 2010,
Only a month was left for the student training period, after that if there work was satisfactory they would be appointed at KK for 1 year, Pinky suggested that Geetika should butter Sasha, which she started doing.

One day while Sasha was discussing some project with MK, the phone rang, taking the phone MK gave in a huge smile, 'you jerk, where are you' ... 'no, just take your luggage, you are not staying at the hotel, I am just coming to pick you up'... 'yes will be there in 20 mins' and after hanging the phone he addressed Sasha who was looking at him in awe, 'my friend, Dev Mathur, he studied with me since 1st year, it has been 20 years, I'll just go you take care here' and he left.

After he left Geetika came in to take his sign on certain papers 'Ma'am, sir is not there?' Sasha said. ' can't you see for yourself' she sighed and asked, 'when will he be back?' Sasha answered annoyingly, 'IDK' Geetiak kept the papers and left.

so girls are you liking it...and enjoying it am sure you are  so many replies 
you all are so lovely readers and you all write so nice comments   and so on ...
thank you  and keep motivating to type this is for you all

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comment on as to what do you think about the this part
waiting to hear from you all not like Zoombie but like your SHRUTI DI

part 11

Edited by smj1977.shruti - 30 September 2011 at 9:35am

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 9:02am | IP Logged
part 10
small part...
ok lemme stop cribbing...
nice one dear...
Sasha i think is taking in the other way...
wow Geet is always in lalaland when Maan is around and Maan too for some reason or the other wants Geet to be near him...
hope hes good in this...
cont soon dear...

PS - am stalking u...

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Geet and Maan both doing Zoobie doobi in their thoughts and finding means to see each other thats so sweet
Loved the update
Continue soon dear

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seemamary IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Loved it as was a small part but expect a long part in the next update, hope to see soon maan proposing geet.

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