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Dancing With Your Love Chapter 22 pg 106 4/1 (Page 7)

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SwaRonluver666

dude...is sharon kria's sis in ur ff...n nice update...cool...thanks for the pm



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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 10:14am | IP Logged
awesome dude awesome this was just wow . sharon donates blood... wow...
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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Princess_Khushi

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<font color="#003399">Chapter 3--</font>
<font color="#003399">Awesome amina</font>
<font color="#003399">Loved the way you described the tension</font>
<font color="#003399">I could actually feel it.</font>

<font color="#993399">What? KM's blood doesn't match Kria's???</font>
<font color="#993399">How can that be possible?!</font>

<font color="#330000">Are you going to put Sharon as Kria's sister in here?</font>
<font color="#330000">SwaRon sweet eye lock was nice</font>
<font color="#330000">And ViHa was great as well.</font>

<font color="#996666">Last scene was very emoitional</font>
<font color="#996666">Loved it.</font>
<font color="#996666">Hoping to have Kria in her usual self soon</font>
<font color="#996666">Get well soon Kria!!!</font>

<font color="#cc6633">Over all, fantastic update</font>
<font color="#cc6633">Loved it.</font>
<font color="#cc6633">It
was worth the wait ;)</font>

<font color="#663333">One thing, If possible do go back once you've typed the update to check for typo's</font>
<font color="#663333">It'll only help you improve your writingWink</font>

<font color="#009933">Love, Khushi</font>
<font color="#009933">Xx</font>



Well keep thinking, thnx for telling me. It helps me very much. Thnx for liking

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazysky

awesome dude awesome this was just wow . sharon donates blood... wow...

Thnx for liking
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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetshine

WHOA...ye kya DHAMAKEDAR update thaShockedClapClap
ok YAYY first one to commentLOLBig smile
OMG Rey nd Sharon donate deir blood awwwEmbarrassed...no guess y Sharon's blood grp matchesLOLWink
But dat was an AMAZING updateThumbs Up...really awsum...aww Vicky drops Neha home how cuteDay Dreaming
but d most TOUCHING scene was d endingEmbarrassed...WOW dat was really beautiful...d pain Rey felt 2 go near her nd to c her in dat condition espcially her not talking at allUnhappy...it was SAD but beautifulDay Dreaming
cnt wait for ur next updateBig smile...hope Kria gets well soonEmbarrassed
nd thnx for d pmBig smile





Thnx for liking. First time i have writed something so emotional. And i am happy that a succeded in it.
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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kriyanshlover

Originally posted by Princess_Khushi

res
EDITED**

Chapter 3--
Awesome amina
Loved the way you described the tension
I could actually feel it.

What? KM's blood doesn't match Kria's???
How can that be possible?!

Are you going to put Sharon as Kria's sister in here?
SwaRon sweet eye lock was nice
And ViHa was great as well.

Last scene was very emoitional
Loved it.
Hoping to have Kria in her usual self soon
Get well soon Kria!!!

Over all, fantastic update
Loved it.
It was worth the wait ;)

One thing, If possible do go back once you've typed the update to check for typo's
It'll only help you improve your writingWink

Love, Khushi
Xx



Well keep thinking, thnx for telling me. It helps me very much. Thnx for liking

I have an idea. But dont wana guess it ... Ur most welcome... Glad to help. WIll keep on telling in future also Smile
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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
i loved how you showed reyam's dosti together it was soo sweet and i love the different couple scenes and rey is just picturing him and kria but best was when he's talking to kria update soon!!! Smile
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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
awesome, brilliant part
 continue soon

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