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Dancing With Your Love Chapter 22 pg 106 4/1 (Page 4)

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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by piya2025

Hey nice part..I liked few bits very much.. but just a sugg ;) Dont used Ms.Baat cutter,Ms.dehradun like that ,I mean in such mean time calling her by this names was a bit odd.But,overall I liked,Update soon ;)




Thanx for being honest, it helps me to write better. Thnx. I will surely think abt it

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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Omg that was awesome!!! aww poor kria.. i lobed ...rey's dialouge about romaira n chabilal!!!!plzz update soon. Embarrassed
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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
^ I thought you 'd mind lol but glad that u didn't. & yeah what happened na I was so mich into it but while reading that point it felt a bit too filmy & ciuldn't connect but later part was nice & well written :)
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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
aweesumm!!!Clap love da accident part nd rey carrying kria all along!!! <3
keep it up... update soonBig smile
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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
WOW dat was AWSUM updateThumbs Up...luvd d way Rey was trying to wake up Kriya...very cuteEmbarrassed...plz update soon d next partBig smile
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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
OMG wow plz continue soon Cry rey and kriya
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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 5:06am | IP Logged
am really excited to know wat happens next
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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 6:04am | IP Logged
wow! awesome update! plz cont soon! ClapSmile

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