Dancing With Your Love Chapter 22 pg 106 4/1 - Page 3

res Edited by Princess_Khushi - 12 years ago

Hey nice part..I liked few bits very much.. but just a sugg ;) Dont used Ms.Baat cutter,Ms.dehradun like that ,I mean in such mean time calling her by this names was a bit odd.But,overall I liked,Update soon ;)

Originally posted by: piya2025

Hey nice part..I liked few bits very much.. but just a sugg ;) Dont used Ms.Baat cutter,Ms.dehradun like that ,I mean in such mean time calling her by this names was a bit odd.But,overall I liked,Update soon ;)

Thanx for being honest, it helps me to write better. Thnx. I will surely think abt it

Omg that was awesome!!! aww poor kria.. i lobed ...rey's dialouge about romaira n chabilal!!!!plzz update soon. 😳

^ I thought you 'd mind lol but glad that u didn't. & yeah what happened na I was so mich into it but while reading that point it felt a bit too filmy & ciuldn't connect but later part was nice & well written :)

aweesumm!!!👏 love da accident part nd rey carrying kria all along!!! <3
keep it up... update soon😃

WOW dat was AWSUM update👍🏼...luvd d way Rey was trying to wake up Kriya...very cute😳...plz update soon d next part😃

OMG wow plz continue soon 😭 rey and kriya

am really excited to know wat happens next

wow! awesome update! plz cont soon! 👏😊