STORY CONTEST - 5 (RESULTS ON PAGE 26) - Page 11

I had put a few questions in the reviews for daya ke dulhan and daya ek.quatil...
No one answered... I know one writer for sure... Donno the other
Waiting for the answers to the confusing points in the case

So please clarify doubts...tomorrow this time we'll have the results ceremony.

I wonder why 7 people have used bomb-centric cases...it seems to be a very popular theme. 😆 Next time we hold a contest, we'll say there should be no bomb-oriented theme.

Heheheh ab kya chipaana ... the story with no research .. aka Daya Ki Dulhann is mine 😛

I didn't want to attempt this ... but I had written 50% of the story so finished the rest ... in 5 hrs 😛 ... toh uske anusaar toh theek hi likha hai 😆

Ravi I know you might have guessed mine 😛

Bhavs... I missed the K factor in your story... I wish you hadnt edited of all the drama which were telling about in the beginning of the story contest 😆

hehehe that drama was pre 2nd visit effect and the product was post meet effect 😆 ... I found the original a bit stupid to speak actually ... the marriage stuff and the whole ceremony happening and calling it a drama ... but then I realised yeh sab likhna  mere bas ki baat nahi ... the first duo scene and the scene at Ansha's place or whatever chote mote leg puling scenes .. bahut papad belne pade likhne ke liye 😆

I wanted to leave this story but had no time to start another one so proceeded with this.



@astonish ... hehehehe this was the drama i was speaking off ... yeh bhi mujhe OTT drama laga 😛
Edited by Bhavanab - 12 years ago

I wonder if you would have ever dared to write Abhijeet ki Dulhann ka raaz..

Ok I'll clear your doubts astonish ... yeah my story had some confusions !!

The guy who met Ravlish was Rizwain ... and Rizwain was seen by the Nariyal guy and as I wrote Ravlish went with the Nariyal guy.

Ansha was the one standing under the tree who shot the Nariyal guy aka Ravlish ... from behind when Ravlish was talking to Rizwain. And Rizwain was the guy who pulled him and left him near the tree.

Salunkhe tells the person who shot Rizwain was shorter than him while the one who pulled him to the tree was taller. 😊


@Vis ... don't you give FW any ideas !!!! I'll kill them if they make one such epi ,... but yeah maybe I can try 😛

It woud get worse than OTT with my emotions involved too 😆

Edited by Bhavanab - 12 years ago

Hmm... Nice... When a case is aired... We can see who is who... Yahaan toh likhna padtha hai na...
It wasnt that clear in the story as you explained just now... May be shortage of time 😊

Writing a story is much more difficult than making an episode or movie. By reading one's words, the other person has to be able to form a picture before their eyes.