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STORY - 2

Bhutiya Ladki ka raaz

 

Written Update : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1490649

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Scene : Bureau

It was a relaxed day. Everyone was at their desk, doing their work when the phone rings.

ACP: Hello?

Voice: Sir, Volda university ke campus mein ek student ki maut ho gayi hai.

ACP: Student ki maut? Theek haim hum log aate hain.

 

Scene : University campus

The body was lying in a deserted area away from the hostel building. His classmates were standing around the body, crying.

ACP: Yeh ladka kaun hai?

One guy: Sir yeh Sanjeev hai, 3rd year Mechanical Engineering student. Kal raat der tak padhayi kar raha tha. Main uska room mate hoon. Main so gaya, aur subah utha toh Sanjeev dikhayi nahin diya. Phir ek cleaner ne aakar bataaya ki uski laash yahan park mein padi hui hai. Mujhe pata nahin woh hostel se baahar kab gaya tha.

ACP: Yahan college mein uski koi dushmani, koi jhagda kisi ke saath?

Room mate: Nahin sir, woh bohot shaant swabhaav ka ladka tha. Aur ek achcha student bhi.

ACP continued talking to the others. Daya and Abhijeet started checking the body.

Daya: Abhijeet, is ladke ke sar par chot lagi hai.

Abhijeet: Vivek dekho aas paas kahin khoon ki boonde hai kya'

Freddie ; SIR!!! Yeh dekhiye, is paththar par khoon ke nishaan hai.

Daya : Lagta hai yeh ladka raat ko iss raste se chal raha tha aur phisalkar gir gaya'. girte samay iska sar iss paththar se takraya hoga.

Abhijeet: Kisi ne use nahin dekha aur zyada khoon beh jaane ki wajah se iski maut ho gayi.

Daya: Mujhe toh yeh ek accident ka case lag raha hai.

Abhijeet: Haan, phir bhi humein confirm toh karna padega na'.Freddie, body ko forensic lab bhej do. Aur who paththar par jo khoon ke boonde hain, wh bhi le jaao. Salunkhe saab confirm kar denge ki yeh khoon isi ki hai ya nahin.

Daya walks around looking for any more evidences.

Daya : Abhijeet, ek minute yahan aao.

Abhijeet; haan Daya, kuch mila?

Daya(shows him some footprints on the sand) : Abhijeet, yeh chappal ke nishaan dekho. Yeh bilkul Sanjeev ke chappal se milte hain.

Abhijeet: Haan..lagta hai isi raste se aa raha tha.

Daya: Boss, ek baat notice ki? In jooton ke nishaano ke beech ki doori se lag raha hai, ki woh chal nahin raha tha, balki bhaag raha tha.

Abhijeet: Hmmm'aisa lag toh raha hai. Sanjeev lagbhag mere height ka hai'.main yahan chalkar dikhata hoon, dekho ki mere pairon ke nishaanon ke beech ki doori kitni hai.

Abhijeet walks normally, Daya measures the distance between the footprints.

Daya: 75 cm.

Abhijeet runs for a short distance. Daya again measures the distance between the footprints

Daya : 150 cm. Sanjeev ke chappal ke nishaanon ke beech ki doori bhi lagbhag itni hai.

ACP interrogating the people is perplexed to see Abhijeet running. He walks towards Daya and Abhijeet.

ACP: Abhijeet, yeh kya kar rahe ho?

Abhijeet: Sir, Sanjeev kal raat ko yahan chal nahin raha tha, balki bhaag raha tha.

ACP: Bhaag raha tha?

Daya : Haan sir, yeh dekhiye'..(and explains)

Freddie: Sir shaayad Sanjeev raat ko jogging kar raha tha.

Abhijeet: Kya keh rahe ho Freddie, raat ko 12 baje koi jogging karta hai?

Daya: Aur who bhi chappal pehenkar?

ACP(goes back to the room mate): Achcha yeh bataao, Sanjeev ko jogging karne ki aadat thi?

Room mate: Haan sir, woh har subah gym jaata tha. Uske jogging shoes ab bhi room mein hi hain.

ACP(to Daya and Abhijeet): Yeh har roz gym jaata  tha aur woh bhi jogging shoes pehenkar. Matlab woh raat ko yahan jogging karne ke liye nahin aaya  tha. Koi aur baat hai.

 

Suddenly an elderly man from the crowd came towards ACP. It was Prof Madhukar who taught at the university. He was an old friend of ACP.

ACP: Arey Madhukar, tum? Kaise ho?

Madhukar: Main theek hoon. Subah subah kisi ne bataaya ki Sanjeev ki maut ho gayi hai toh main dekhne chala aaya. Bohot brilliant student tha. Kal sham ko der tak library mein baitha tha. Keh raha tha ki GRE ke liye prepare kar raha hai.

ACP:  Hmm'bechara Sanjeev'..iske maa-baap ko khabar pohonchani hogi(looks sad)

Madhukar: Pradyuman, itne dino baad mile ho,  mere cabin mein aao'..chai piyo.

ACP(thinks for a second): Daya, Abhijeet, tumlog aas paas dekho kuch aur milta hai kya. Main professor saab ke saath jaa raha hoon.

Scene : Prof Madhukar's cabin.

ACP : Madhukar, ek baat bataao, yeh ladka Sanjeev, iski koi dushmani thi kisi se? Koi jhagda kisi aur students se?

Madhukar: Nahin, Sanjeev aisa ladka nahin hai. Woh sirf apne kaam se kaam raktha tha.

ACP: Uska room mate keh raha tha ki woh ek brilliant student hai'.

Madhukar : Haan'pichle semester exams mein topper tha.

ACP: Toh is wajah se kisi ke koi dushmani toh nahin'.????

Madhukar: Keh nahin sakte'.main actually humare university campus ke baare mein tumse kuch kehna chahta tha.

ACP: Achcha? Kya baat hai?

 Madhukar: Humare campus mein ek aatma rehti hai.

ACP: KYA!!! Aatma!!!! Tum bhi mere junior Freddie jaise baatein kar rahe ho!!!!! (starts laughing)

Madhukar: Pradyuman, main bhi in baaton mein vishwaas nahin karta. Lekin pichle 1 saal mein 5-6 baar yahan ek ladki ki 'aatma' dikhai di hai. Pehle main sochta tha ki kisi students ne sharaarat ki hogi aur humne yeh baat seriously nahin li.

Phir 8 mahine pehle ek raat ko yeh aatma dikhayi di aur ek student use dekhkar bohot darr gaya tha aur usse hospitalize bhi karna pada. Uske maa-baap ne police mein report likhwayi thi. Phir 4-5 din 2 constables yahan patrol kar rahe the lekin unhe kuch dikhayi nahin diya. Aur unhone case bandh kar diya.

ACP: Uske baad woh aatma kabhi dikhayi di?

Uske baad humare night-duty ke staff ne bataaya hai ki woh aatma kabhi kabhi dikhayi deti hai. Lekin koi kuch nahi kar saka kyonki police wale manne ko tayyar hi nahin hai ki yahan koi bhoot hai.

ACP: Yeh koi bhoot whoot nahin hai, koi hai jo students aur staff ko darana chahta hai.

Ek baat bataao, kya tumhe aisa lag raha hai ki is bhoot ka Sanjeev ke maut ke saath connection hai?

Madhukar: Main keh nahin sakta lekin college ke canteen ka ek aadmi aaj subah mujhse keh raha tha ki kal usne us bhoot ko dekha tha.

ACP: Achcha, bulao uss aadmi ko.

Scene :  A room in the campus. ACP, Daya and Abhijeet along with canteen employee Shriram.

ACP: bataao Shriram, tumne kal kya dekha?

Shriram(scared out of his wits): Saab, kal raat ko canteen mein power chali gayi'.aur boys hostel ke building ke oopar ek bohot lambi aurat ka saaya dikhayi diya''..woh'woh'.building jitni lambi thi saab!!!! Main darr gaya sur khidki band karke so gaya. Aise pehle bhi bohot baar hua  hai saab'..light chali jaati hai aur hostel building ke oopar woh aurat dikhayi deti hai.

Abhijeet: Sir, Daya'(calls them aside) Building jitni lambi aurat kaise ho sakti hai sir? Yeh koi kahani bana raha hai.

Daya: Aur sir, agar uss waqt light chali gayi thi, toh woh light kahan se aaya jisse building ke oopar uska saaya pada.

ACP: Koi ek powerful light on kar raha hoga aur us light ke saamne woh aurat chal rahi hogi.

Abhijeet: Sir, kahin yeh Sanjeev ne us aurat ko pakadne ke liye toh nahin bhaaga aadhi raat ko?

ACP: Ho sakta hai...woh jo koi bhi hai, humein use pakadna hoga, kyonki shaayad Sanjeev ki maut usi aurat ki wajah se hui hai.

Phone rings. ACP moves aside and takes the call..

ACP: Haan Salunkhe?

Salunkhe: Uss paththar par jo khoon ki boonde mili thi, woh Sanjeev ke hi hai. Sanjeev ke sar par chot ka nishaan hai. Lekin'

ACP: Lekin kya?

Salunkhe: Sanjeev ne nakhoono mein kisi aadmi ke khaal ke tukde hain. Lagta hai jab uski maut hui thi, wahan koi aur tha.

ACP: Matlab yeh khoon hai?

Salunkhe: Yeh toh keh nahin sakte. Shaayad kisi aur student ke saath hathapayi hui aur yeh apne aap paththar ke oopar gira, ya kisi ne jaan boojhkar ise paththar ki taraf dhakel diya.

Daya : Sir, humein us 'bhoot' ko pakadna chahiye.

ACP (cuts the call): Agar hum sab log yahan aake baith gaye toh woh 'bhoot' ya ladki jo bhi hai, bhaag jaayegi. Yahan Sachin ko kisi ne nahin dekha hai. Use is kaam par laga do.

Abhijeet(calls Sachin): Sachin, tumhe aaj raat ko ek kaam karna hoga'.(and explains)

 

Scene : Bureau 'Next morning

ACP walks in and goes to his cabin. Abhijeet follows him.

ACP: Kya hua Abhijeet, university ke bhoot ke baare mein pata chala?

Abhijeet: Nahin sir, abhi tak Sachin ne phone nahin kiya. Maine use bataya tha ki bhoot ka pata chalte hi mujhe phone karo.

ACP: Kahin so toh nahin gaya?

Abhijeet: Sir, Vivek university campus gaya hai use dhoondne, lekin kisi ko kuch pata nahin hai sir. Wahan koi Sachin ko nahin pehchanta aur humne kisi ko nahin bataaya tha ki Sachin raat ko wahan aane wala hai.

ACP: Tumne Sachin ko phone kiya?

Abhijeet: Haan sir, lekin uska phone switched off hai sir. Mobile company se pata chala ki university me raat ke 2 baje aakhri baar phone on tha. Daya uske ghar gaya hai dekhne.

 

Daya walks in.

ACP: Kya hua Daya, Sachin mila?

Daya: Nahin sir, Sachin ghar mein nahin hai.

Abhijeet: Toh phir kahan gaya woh?

 

At that time, phone rings.

ACP: Hello? Kaun, Insp Kishore? Haan main ACP Pradyuman CID.

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KYA!!!! Dekhiye, woh humara officer hai. Aap use chod dijiye.

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Achcha theek hai, main apne officers ko bhejta hoon.

 

Scene : Police station

Abhijeet and Daya walk into the tiny police station in the university campus meant to handle any bandhs, rallies or ragging cases within the campus. It had an enthusiastic-looking Insp Kishore and 2 constables. Sachin was sitting on a bench. The moment he saw Abhijeet and Daya, he got up and was about to say something. But Abhijeet and Daya gave him one serious look and moved on to speak to the inspector.

Abhijeet(flashed his badge): Main Sr insp Abhijeet CID se.

Kishore: Good morning sir, baithiye.

Abhijeet: Bataayiye kya hua tha? Humare officer Sachin ko arrest kyon kiya?

Kishore; Sir, Raat ko 12 baje kuch students ne yahan par phone kiya tha. Yahan sirf constable Chandu duty par tha. Usne bataaya ki yeh ek ladki ke peeche gun lekar bhaag rahe tha.

Daya: Haan'.woh duty par tha, aur who ladki shaayad ek khooni hai.  

Kishore: Humein kaise pata chalta sir, inke paas badge nahin hai. Kuch students ne complain kiya aur Chandu ne FIR likhwayi. Tab hi inhone kaha tha ki woh ek CID officer hain, lekin badge na hone ke wajah se constable Chandu ne inhe arrest kiya.

Abhijeet (turns to Sachin): Kya Sachin, yeh kya keh rahe hain? Kya hua? Tumne humein phone kyon nahin kiya?

Sachin: Sir, us constable ne mujhe phone karne hi nahin diya. Mera mobile aur gun le liya aur kaha hi subah tak intezaar karo.

Daya: Lekin tumhara badge kahan hai? Tumhe pata hai na CID officer ko humesha apne paas badge rakhni chahiye?

Sachin: Sir, bohot lambi kahaani hai sir. Pehle aap mujhe yahan se nikaaliye.

 

 

Abhijeet looks at Daya. Daya gives a nod.

Abhijeet: Insp Kishore, aap inhe chod dijiye, yeh humara officer hain. Yeh yahan ek khoon ke investigation ke silsile mein aaya tha.

Kishore : Haan sir, aur sorry'.. aap bhi samajh sakte hain'.main saboot ke bina inhe kaise chod deta? Main bhi yahan naya hoon sir, yahan ke CID officers ko nahin pehchaanta.

Abhijeet: Theek kiya aapne. Ab humlog chalte hain. Thank you.

Kishore hands over Sachin's gun and mobile back to him. Abhijeet, Daya and Sachin walk out of the police station and get into the quails.

 

Scene : Qualis

Abhijeet, Daya and Sachin going back to bureau.

Daya: Ab bataao Sachin, tum arrest kaise ho gaye?

Sachin : Sir, jaisa aapne kaha, main kal sham ko yahan ek student bankar aaya. Canteen mein dinner karne gaya. Uske baad''..

 

FLASHBACK.

Sachin was sitting in the canteen around 8 PM, having dinner. The canteen was crowded and there was hardly any space  for anyone. There were 3 empty  spaces on Sachin's table, so 3 students came and joined him with their plates.

One Guy: Hi, may I join you??

Sachin: Yeah sure'

Guy : Main Sunil. Aapka naam?

Sunil: Main Sachin.

Sunil: Aapko yahan pehle kabhi nahin dekha' aap student hain?

Sachin : Haan, main yahan research student hoon.

Sunil: Arey waah, main bhi research student hoon. Kaunsa subject hai tumhara?

(Sachin was caught off-guard).

 Sachin: "Protein crystallography in biomolecules".

Sunil: Baap re, kya subject chuna hai!  Achcha, tum hostel mein rehte ho?

Sachin: Nahin, main bas library se books borrow karne aaya tha.

Sunil: Lekin tumhare paas koi books nahin hai.

Sachin: Main dinner ke baad library jaane wala hoon books borrow karne.

Sunil: Very good, main bhi wahin jaa raha hoon. Ek saath chalte hain. Tumhare paas bike hai? Library 9 baje band hoti hai, usse pehle pohonchna hai.

Sachin was irritated.

Later, Sachin and Sunil were walking towards the library. Sachin was thinking of some way to shake off this guy. He pretended to get a call.

Sachin: Hello'.haan theek hai, main aa raha hoon'

Sunil, mujhe kahin jaana hai, main library nahin aa paaonga. Bye.

Sunil(annoyed, suspicious): Theek hai, good night.

Sachin started his bike and sped off. He parked the bike some distance away and returned to the empty ground surrounded by the hostel, canteen, and admin buildings. He hid himself near some bushes and waited for something to happen.

Around 11:30, something happened. There was a power failure in the entire area. A sudden light flashed on the  building and there was a lady's shadow on the building. Sachin tried to see where the light was coming from. It was difficult to say as he was surrounded by trees. The light and the lady stayed there for some time and then it went off. Within a few minutes the power was restored in the area. Then Sachin saw a lady walking fast on the opposite side of the ground. He assumed that this could be the lady whose shadow was seen on the building.  He ran after her. The lady saw an unknown guy chasing her and started running. But she was slower than Sachin and when she saw that Sachin was about to catch up with her she started shouting 'bachaao bachaao'.

Some students arrived there. 3-4 of them caught Sachin. He wanted to defend himself but didn't want to attack any student, so didn't do anything.

Lady: Hey, tum mera peecha kyon kar rahe the? Main abhi police ko bulaati hoon.

Sachin : Tum aadhi raat ko yahan kya kar rahi thi?

Lady: Tumhe isse matlab?

Sachin: Matlab hai. Main ek Cid officer hoon.

 

And shakes off the guys.

One guy steps forward. (One of the other guys who had sat at Sachin's table)

Guy: Lekin canteen mein to tum keh rahe the ki tum ek research student ho'????

Sachin: Woh'main'.

Guy; Tumhare paas ID card hai?

Sachin: Haan hai, CID ka badge'.yeh dekho'.

'.and puts his hands into his pocket and finds it missing. Sachin panics and looks around. He doesn't find it on the ground.

Guy: Jhoot bol raha hai yeh'pakdo isko!!!

3-4 guys catch Sachin and search him and find a gun.

Guy: Hey, iske paas gun hai!!!

4-5 people scream, the loudest being the girl whom Sachin chased.

Sachin: Arey aap log meri baat suniye'..

Another guy: Yeh zaroor koi chor ya terrorist hai. Police ko bulao!!!

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FLASHBACK ends.

 

Scene : Present ' Qualis.

Daya and Abhijeet listen to the story and can't suppress a little laugh. Then they come back to business.

Abhijeet: Sachin, tumhe theek se yaad hai ki tumhare paas badge tha, ya tum apna badge ghar par bhool aaye the?

Sachin: Nahin sir, main yakeen ke saath keh sakta hoon, jab main canteen mein dinner kar raha tha, tab mera badge mere paas tha.

Daya: Ek baar wahan jaakar check karte hain, shaayad badge wahan jhadiyon ke beech gir gayi hogi.

Abhijeet, Daya and Sachin search the area but don't find the badge anywhere near the area where Sachin had hidden.

Daya: Abhijeet, iska matlab hai ki jab un students ne Sachin ko pakad rakha tha, toh unme se kisi ne Sachin ka badge uske jeb se nikaal liya.

Abhijeet: Sachin,Tumhe kisi par shaq hai?

Sachin: Sir, ek ladka tha jo humare table par baitha tha'usi ne sab logon ke saamne bataaya ki main jhoot bol raha hoon. Shaayad usi ne mere badge nikaal liya.

Shaayad who boy's hostel mein se hi aaya tha. Wahan use pakad sakte hain sir.

 

Scene : Hostel.

Abhijeet, Daya and Sachin search the entire hostel but were unable to find the guy who had accused Sachin.

Daya; Sachin, yeh ladka hostel ka ladka nahin tha. Shaayad baahar se aaya tha. Lagta hai usne jaan boojhkar tumhe phasaaya hai.

Abhijeet: Sachin, tum bureau mein jaakar us ladke ka sketch banvaao. Yahan ke logon se poocho ki kisi ne use pehle dekha hai kya.

 

Scene : Bureau

Sanjeev's parents had come to collect his body. ACP tries to console Sanjeev's father.

ACP: Dekhiye hum zaroor aapke bte ke khooni ko pakdenge aur use sazaa dilayenge. Lekin aap ek baat batayiye'kya kabhi Sanjeev ke aapko bataya ki uska kisi ke saath jhagda hua tha ya uski ragging hui thi ya aisa kuch'??? Kya who kisi baat ko lekar pareshaan tha?

Sanjeev's father: Nahin sir'aisa kuch nahin tha'.lekin parson raat ko main usse phone par baat kar raha tha'uski aawaz break ho rahi thi'shaayad mobile signal ka problem tha. Sanjeev ne kaha ki who building ke baahar jaakar phone karega, lekin uske baad uska phone nahin aaya.

ACP(calls Daya and Abhijeet aside): Sanjeev shaayad apne pita ko phone karne ke liye building se baahar aaya aur phir usne kisi ko kuch karte hue dekh liya.

Daya: Lekin Sanjeev ne aisa kya dekha hoga?

Abhijeet : Kahin us ladki ko toh nahin jo bhoot bankar sabko dara rahi hai.

Sachin: Sir'.maine kal us bhoot ka photo liya apne mobile se.

ACP: Toh ab tak chup baithe ho? Hum bhi toh dekhe ki bhoot kaise dikhti hai.

Sachin shows the photo of the building with a large, clear shadow of a woman over it.

ACP: Ise Salunkhe ke paas le jaao'aur pata karo ki asli ladki ki height kitni hai , woh building se kitni door thi aur uske peeche se yeh light kis taraf se aa rahi thi.

Sachin leaves.

After an hour or so, Salunkhe calls.

ACP: Haan Salunkhe, kya hua? Achcha? Theek hai, hum log aate hain.

 

Scene : Forensic lab

ACP: Kya pata chala Salunkhe?

Salunkhe: ACP saab yeh koi asli ladki nahin ho sakti.

ACP: Matlab, yeh sachmuch bhoot hai?

Salunkhe: Arey nahin yaar'.mere kehne ka matlab hai, yeh shadow kisi light se nahin banaaya gaya hai.

Dekho'agar is building ke oopar itna sharp image aana chahiye toh ladki ke ekdum paas honi chahiye. Lekin Sachin keh raha hai ki building ke paas usne kisi ko nahin dekha.

Main samjhaata hoon. Vivek, zara lights off karo. Abhijeet, apna gun mujhe do.

Abhijeet: Kyon doctor saab, andhere kisi ka khoon karne wale hain, kya?

Salunkhe: Nahin kuch dikhaane wala hoon.

Is deewar ke 2 metre ki doori par light ka source hai. Main ab is gun ko deewar se 10 cm ki doori par gun rakhta hoon. Dekho iska shadow kitna sharp hai.

  

Ab main is gun ko deewar se 40 cm door tar le jaata hoon. Dekho yeh shadow kaisa hai'.

 
 

ACP: Yeh toh double dikhayi de rahi hai.

Salunkhe: Haan'iski wajah hai 'diffraction' of light. Agar is lakdi ka shadow utna hi sharp hai jaisa Sachin ne apne mobile se  liya hai, toh yeh ladki building se zyada door nahi ho sakti'aur agar yeh building ke paas hoti, aur agar uska shadow building jitna lamba tha, toh ladki bhi building jitni lambi honi chahiye.

ACP: Woh kyon?

Salunkhe: Jab ek object deewar se door jaata hai, toh uske shadow ka length badhta hai. Aur blurred ho jata hai.

Iska ek hi matlab hai. Yeh koi shadow nahi hai. Kisi ne ek cinema projector se is image ko building ke oopar focus kiya hai. Shaayad kisi saamne wale building se.

Abhijeet: Cinema projector se'??? Lekin koi ek college campus mein yeh sab kyon karega sir?

ACP: Ek kaam karo'.tum log is saamne wale building me jaao aur dekho ki wahan koi cinema projector hai kya. Lekin kisi ko mat bataana ki tumlog kya dhoond rahe ho.

 

Scene : Admin building

Daya, Abhijeet, Vivek and Freddie walk around looking for a cinema projector. Finally they reach one locked room at the end of a corridor. Abhijeet uses his knife and slowly opens it. They all enter and find that it was an old store room  filled with tonnes of old answer scripts, application forms etc, but there was a tiny window at the end of the room and before that ' an old movie projector. Daya opened the window and found that the hostel building was clearly visible from the window and the place was not very far from the open ground where Sanjeev's body was found.

Abhijeet: Toh yeh hai woh projector.Freddie, is projector mein se ungliyon ke nishaan utha lo.

Daya: Lekin Abhijeet, is projector ka Sanjeev ke khoon ke saath kya connection ho sakta hai?

Abhijeet: Aur ek baat hai'jab yeh projector on hota hai, toh poori building mein power chali jaati hai'toh phir is projector mein power kahan se aati hai? Zara dekho vivek'..

Vivek searches through the sacks of old answer scripts and reaches the power socket which was connected to a UPS.

Vivek: Sir, yahan UPS hai sir.

Daya: Iska matlab yahan koi power off karta hai aur koi aur yahan se image project karta hai.

Abhijeet: Is poore area mein 10 minute ke liye power chali jaati hai. Iska matlab koi main switch off kar raha hoga.

Freddie, main switch ke oopar se bhi finger prints utha lo.

Daya: Lekin hum in finger prints ko kiske saath match karenge? Yahan toh hazaaron students, professors aur baaki ke employees honge'.

Abhijeet: Haan woh baat toh hai'.zara socho'.koi yahan se ek UPS lagaakar us building ke oopar ek ladki ka image project kyon karega? Kya maksad ho sakta hai?

Daya: Kisi ko daraane ke liye koi itni bandobust nahin karega.

Abhijeet; Aur phir raat ko 12 baje is building ke andar kaun aayega? Security ke paas register hoga'dekhte hain.

 

They go to the security guy sitting near the entrance of the admin building and check the register.

Daya: Yahan parson raat 20 log building mein kaam kar rahe the???

Security: Haan sir'.parson raat ko 12 baje se 4 baje tak kal  ke exam ke question papers ki printing ho rahi thi.

Abhijeet: Kya? Exam ke papers?

And it hits both of them. They move aside.

Daya: Parson raat ko yahan exam papers print kiye jaa rahe the. Lagta hai koi exam ke papers leak kar raha hai. Yahan power off karta hai aur yahan se ek bhoot ka image dikhata hai. Jab logon ka dhyan us bhoot par jaata hai, toh yahan se chupkar ek question paper nikaal leta hai.

Abhijeet: Aur shaayad baahar kisi ko bech deta hai. In 20 logon ko bureau mein lekar jaate hain.

 

Scene : Forensic lab.

All the 20 people give their finger prints one after the other. Finally 2 of them match. One ' with the fingerprints on the projector and the other with the one on the main switch.

ACP: Achcha, toh tum log ho'Bataao'.main switch off kyon kar rahe the?

Guy1: Main switch? Kaunsa main switch???

Daya(with a sarcastic smile) : kaunsa switch???

(SLAAAP)

Guy 1: Saab'mujhe maaf kar dijiye saab'.mujhe paise milte the is kaam ke liye. Har baar switch off karne ke liye mujhe hazaar rupaye diya jate the.

Daya: Kaun deta tha yeh rupaye?

Guy 1: Pata nahin saab'.mere ghar mein ek envelope aata hai.

Now they tackle the other guy.

Abhijeet: tum us store room mein baithkar projector operate karte the??? Kiske kehne par?

Guy2: Saab mujhe kuch nahin maloom. Ek din ek aadmi ne mujhe phone karke mujhe bataaya ki mujhe yeh sab karna hai. Mujhe is kaam ke liye 1 hazaar rupaye milte hain saab.

Daya : Lekin tumhe is projector operate karne ke baare mein kaise pata hai?

Guy2: main ek cinema theatre mein kaam kar chuka hoon saab.

ACP: Ab bataao'tumhe pata kaise chalta hai ki switch kab off karna hai aur projector on karna hai?

Guy 1: Saab hume ek sms aata hai.

ACP : Kaunse number se? Dikhao apna phone.

(Sees)

Arey, yeh toh yahoo messenger se aaya hai, kisi mobile phone se nahin.

Daya: Aur woh bhi alag alag naam se. Yeh aadmi bohot chaalak hai sir.

Abhijeet: Sir (calls ACP aside): Sir ek aadmi switch off kar raha tha aur doosra projector ke paas baitha tha. Toh koi teesra hai jo paper nikaalta hai. Woh inhi logon mein se hoga sir.

ACP(in low voice): Salunkhe ko Sanjeev ke nakhoono me se khaal ke tukde mile the'toh zaroor khooni ke shareer par kahin chot ke nishaan honge. In sab ko check karo.

Daya: Sab log ek line mein khade ho jaaao. Aur apne shirts utaro.

Some of them protest. But finally they are forced to take off their shirts.  Daya walks around looking at each guy and finally stops near one guy who had clear 4 long scratches on his back.

 

Daya: Yeh chot kaise lagi tumhe?

Guy: Mm..mma'in'.bike se gir gaya.

Daya: Bike se girne se aisi chot lagti hai? (SLAAAP)

Guy: Haan saab main hi exam ka paper chura raha tha. Jab bhoot dhikhai deta tha, toh mai 'bhoot-bhoot' chillakar sabka dhyan uski ore hatatha tha'.aur chupke se ek paper apni jeb mein daal leta tha.

ACP: Aur woh paper kise dete the tum?

Guy; Main woh paper hostel ke ek khidki ke baahar pade National geographic ke September 2005 edition mein rakh deta tha. Mujhe nahin pata ki wahan se woh paper kaun nikaalta tha. Har baar exam se ek raat pehle woh purana National Geographic wahan zaroor pohonch jaata tha saab.

Abhijeet:  Sanjeev ka khoon kyon kiya tumne?

Guy: Uss raat ko main exam paper lekar hostel ki ore jaa raha tha toh Sanjeev ne mujhe pakad liya.Mere haath mein exam ka paper dekh liya. Woh mere baare mein complain karne wala tha. Hum dono ke beech hatapayi hui'maine use dhakka diya aur woh mar gaya saab'.main uska khoon nahin karna chahta tha. (and breaks down )

ACP: Tumhe paper leak karne aur ek student ke khoon ke liye giraftaar kiya jaata hai. Freddie, le jaao ise.

Abhijeet: Sir, ab humein exam paper churaane wale ko pakadna hoga sir. Woh har baar National Geographic ka 2005 September edition hostel ke baahar rakhta tha'.hostel mein check kar sakte hain ki yeh edition kiske paas hai.

 

ACP: Ab tak use pata chal gaya hoga ki humne is aadmi ko arrest kiya hai, toh woh us magazine ko apne paas nahin rakhega.

Sachin:Sir, mujhe pata hai ki woh National Geographic wala kaun hai.

Abhijeet: Kya? Tumhe pata hai?

Sachin : haan sir'.woh ladka Sunil jo canteen mein mere saath baitha hua tha'.uske paas ek National Geographic magazine tha. Woh ek research student hai.

ACP: Yeh ladka university press se paper churata hai aur exam ke kuch ghante pehle baahar students ko woh paper bechkar paise kamaata hai. Isiliye humare desh ke university ke degrees ko koi weightage nahin diya jaata. Yeh system hi kharaab hai.

Yeh Sunil kaunse department mein research karta hai?

Sunil: Maine nahi poocha sir.

ACP: Koi baat nahin, university ke records se pata karo ki yeh Sunil kis department ka hai.

 

Scene : University

CID team goes to the university and checks all the possible Sunils in the university and Sachin finally identifies the guy who was a research student in the Nuclear Physics department. They reach the lab.

Professor: Aap log kaun hai, is lab mein kya kar rahe hain?

Daya: Hom log CID se hain. Hum yahan Sunil ko dhoond rahe hain.

Professor(looks at the students): Sunil shaayad aaj nahin aaya.

Daya: Aapko pata hai woh kahan rehta hai?

Professor: Main apne students ka address nahin apne paas nahin rakhta'.inme se kisi ko pata hoga ki woh kahan rehta hai.

One guy: Sir mujhe pata hai.

Abhijeet: Chalo humare saath.

 

Scene: A row of small houses.

CID Qualis comes to a halt. CID team with the other student comes out.

Student: Sir, Sunil yahan house no 15B mein rehta hai 3 aur ladkon ke saath.

Abhijeet: House no 15B, chalo.

They reach the house, ring the bell, knock, but there is no response. Vivek goes towards the window and tries to open it. Through a small gap he sees smoke coming out.

Vivek: Sir, yahan kuch jal raha hai.

Daya looks at Abhijeet. Abhijeet gives the 'go-ahead' expression.

...

'

CID team enters the house.

Vivek: Sir, yahan koi magazine jal rahi hai.

Abhijeet: Magazine? Lagta hai wohi National Geographic hoga.  Lekin Sunil hai kahan?

They suddenly hear a window being opened and a 'thud' sound of someone landing outside.  They rush towards the window and see Sunil running away at full speed.

 

CID team gives chase and finally catches him

 

 

 

Scene : Bureau.

Sunil: Haan'.maine university ke exam papers churaya. Ek ek paper ke 10000 milte the mujhe. Lekin yeh idea mera nahin hai. Yeh 'Victory Coaching classes' ke director ka plan hai. Uske institute me  kuch students ko woh top 10 ranks guarantee karta hai. Uske liye woh 5 lakh rupaye fees leta hai. Phir woh exam se ek din pehle mujhse paper lekar un students to deta hai ' readymade answers ke saath. Un students ko top ranks mil jaate hain.

ACP: Tumhe kum-se-kum 8-10 saal ki sazaa hogi.

Later, the CID team arrests the director of 'Victory coaching classes' and brings an end to the paper leak saga.

 

********

Some gyan:

Stiff competition takes students to such levels of desperation that they are resorting to short cuts. Time and again, question papers of even the toughest and biggest entrance tests and university exams have come out in the open before the exam.

Police catch smaller fish. But after initial action, hardly anything is done to reach the mastermind. As a result, lakhs of students suffer almost every alternate year due to various admission scandals. The education mafia, which runs the seat-fixing racket and is involved in leakages, however, continues to operate with impunity.

A medical student seeking anonymity said how agents have offered him question papers of entrance tests. "In medicine, the number of seats is far too less when compared to that of aspirants. Students reach a level of desperation as age is a major factor. You might start reappearing for exams and end up with your juniors. Nowadays, it's out in the open. I was approached by agents with offers," he said.

 

"Today, expectations from students are too high. Parents set such big benchmarks for their wards that they're almost impossible to meet, let alone exceed. Once they get enrolled in a course for which they are not cut out for, things get worse. If one is really interested in the subject, then expectations do not become a burden. If not, the vicious cycle continues," says M S Thimmappa, educationist.

 

"In this era of cut-throat competition, this trend is not really surprising. As of now, we have accepted examinations as the only means to assess a student's capability. This forces them to perform better in the rat race," feels Nirnanjan Aradhya, Centre for Child and Law, NLSIU.

 

(Source: Times of India website)

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