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Ye Ishaare Hawaon Ke..! THREAD 1 (Page 125)

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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
Hey abby... U knw sumthing i jst finished reading all d parts till 17 in one go nd was abt to go to sleep as it 2.40 of nite.. wen i gt ur PM Regarding new update nd den i jst cant resist myself nd started reading d nxt part...

U knw sumthing wen i started reading dis i whacked myself umpteenth tym for nt reading or rather say nt knwing abt dis amazing piece till nw... Ur FF had literally hooked me nd dis is really a gud thing... I luv each nd every update of urs right 4m dere first meet to dere confession to dere ahem ahem dreams to dere pure love... Everything was jst outstanding

ok nw cuming to dis update it was simply superb nd outstanding... D true love b/w dese two is truly remarkable which lacking a lot in todays world nd u showed it beautifully... Nd nt to forget d song sequence it was so good nd BTW its one of my fav song so i had double reasons to lyk dis part... Too gud dear... Keep writing lyk dis only nd do continue soon... I'll wait eagerly 4 ur nxt update

P.S. Me cummenting thru cellphone derefore no smilieys bt i totally luved it nd will edit my cumment once get ol thru pc

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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
that was soo cute !

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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
Oops i forgot to mention abt ur poems in my prev. Comment... Dear dey were superb nd u knw i read it again nd again even after finishing d update nd enjoyed dem throughout d update...

U r really a gud writer dear... Pls keep writing lyk dis only nd dnt b disheartened wid d no. Of likes... U knw it took almost 1 whole year wen i started getting satisfied no. Of likes on my FF's... So jst b patient nd keep writing... U had d power to hook someone in ur ff so never overlook it ok dear...

K i guess i had given u lots of gyaan... Kya kare india me muft ka gyaan bahut milta hai lolz... Bt b4 u get bore wid my gyaan nd start throwing tomatoes on me i think i should put full stop to my speech lolz... Uff i really speak a lot hai na... No wonder my IF friends call me basanti... Anyways nw i shld seriously stop as its 3 of d mrning nd i had to get up early so gud nite swt drms nd ya once again awesome update... Do continue soon... Bye Luv u...

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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
wondaful update soo cute n romantic
cnt w8 2 read more plzz cont soon
fanx 4 da pm x Hug

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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
1st of all...thanks for the dedication..means a lot AbreshHug

Then..as for the update..it was phenomenalShocked

Seriously Maan singing the song for Geet..and then you putting the pics to display their desires was just the cherry on topTongue

I absolutely loved this update, and I bet from now on Maan and Geet are going to have a hard time controlling their desiresEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Now I can't w8 for next weekend, and yes hun I can w8 as much as you want me to for your updates, as long as you make then juicy, spicy and long, weekend pe update chale ga..nahi...dhodengaLOL

Love you hun, and thank you once again for the kind dedicationDay Dreaming


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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 3:01pm | IP Logged

updated ma comment on pg125

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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
wow Abi...kya baat hai...
 
tere har lafz pe bha wah kehne ka man aaya
 
i just love your poems specially the ones Maan write in his diary...ek baar saari posts mein se Maan ki diary poems post karni padegi...i am sure everyone will marvel when they will read it together...I will do it next time i get some time
 
 
update was awesome...so sweet...the feeling of lying in each other's arms...haye woh bhi din the...lekin bache hone se pehle...jab one can just laze around in their partner's arms...I miss it so much...mujhe mere sundays yaad aa gaye Embarrassed
 
he he he...what a thought...sorry mein thoda personal mode mein chali gayi thi...
 
I loved thier desert too...poor guys kitna tadpa rahi ho tum unhein Abi...bechaare pehle phisalte hain, phir sambhalte hain...
 
mast date tha...
 
waiting eagerly for more lekin ab tho sirf weekend pe update milega nahi Confused
 
 
par jaate jaate chaar line movie ke song se udhaar leke -
 
dil dhoondhataa hai, fir wahee furasat ke raat din
baithhe rahe tasawwoor-ye-jaanaa kiye huye

jaadon kee narma dhoop aaur aangan mein let kar
aankhon pe khinch kar tere daaman ke saaye ko
aaundhe pade rahe kabhee karawat liye huye

yaa gamreeyon kee raat jo poorawaaeeyaan chale
thhandee safed chaadaro pe jaage der tak
taaron ko dekhate rahe chhat par pade huye

barfilee sardiyon mein kisee bhee pahaad par
waadee mein gunjatee huyee, khaamoshiyaan sune
aankhon mein bheege bheege se lamhe liye huye

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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazydevil87



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thnk u sooo much n luvya loadzzz ma sweet lil sis...muaaahhh...
now update ka kya kehna it was juz fabulous really enchanting n truly mesmerising...:)
luved d way u described d way dey were feeling each other in their arms maan smiling contently n geet admiring him...
i luved d bit where u wrote wind wanted to capture maan's smile dat was awsome...
luved geet's answer wen maan said kya dekh rahi ho it was extremely beautiful...
loved d poetry yaar amazing it is...
again thnks for writing d mesmerising song sequence...
luved every bit of d sequence...har move har gesture was really really beautifully described n ur pics added d extra bit to captivate...
haye luved deir convo while having dinner n den wow me blushing dat was some kiss...hehe
luved geet whispering i love u maan to herself...n maan ki poem actually reshu ki poem ka to jawab hi nai...
superb job done reshu...beautifully written...
luvya loadzzz...muaahhh...

heehhe... thnq so much Appi...
poetry to u knw me nah.. likhte likhte pta ni kaha se aa jati hai.. hehehhe...
luvya 2.. wo bhi bohot sara... hehehhe.. muuuaahhh... HeartHug

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