Ye Ishaare Hawaon Ke..! THREAD 1 - Page 81

wow Abi...kya baat hai...

Originally posted by: crazydevil87

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thnk u sooo much n luvya loadzzz ma sweet lil sis...muaaahhh...
now update ka kya kehna it was juz fabulous really enchanting n truly mesmerising...:)
luved d way u described d way dey were feeling each other in their arms maan smiling contently n geet admiring him...
i luved d bit where u wrote wind wanted to capture maan's smile dat was awsome...
luved geet's answer wen maan said kya dekh rahi ho it was extremely beautiful...
loved d poetry yaar amazing it is...
again thnks for writing d mesmerising song sequence...
luved every bit of d sequence...har move har gesture was really really beautifully described n ur pics added d extra bit to captivate...
haye luved deir convo while having dinner n den wow me blushing dat was some kiss...hehe
luved geet whispering i love u maan to herself...n maan ki poem actually reshu ki poem ka to jawab hi nai...
superb job done reshu...beautifully written...
luvya loadzzz...muaahhh...

heehhe... thnq so much Appi...
poetry to u knw me nah.. likhte likhte pta ni kaha se aa jati hai.. hehehhe...
luvya 2.. wo bhi bohot sara... hehehhe.. muuuaahhh... ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Hey abby... U knw sumthing i jst finished reading all d parts till 17 in one go nd was abt to go to sleep as it 2.40 of nite.. wen i gt ur PM Regarding new update nd den i jst cant resist myself nd started reading d nxt part...

U knw sumthing wen i started reading dis i whacked myself umpteenth tym for nt reading or rather say nt knwing abt dis amazing piece till nw... Ur FF had literally hooked me nd dis is really a gud thing... I luv each nd every update of urs right 4m dere first meet to dere confession to dere ahem ahem dreams to dere pure love... Everything was jst outstanding

ok nw cuming to dis update it was simply superb nd outstanding... D true love b/w dese two is truly remarkable which lacking a lot in todays world nd u showed it beautifully... Nd nt to forget d song sequence it was so good nd BTW its one of my fav song so i had double reasons to lyk dis part... Too gud dear... Keep writing lyk dis only nd do continue soon... I'll wait eagerly 4 ur nxt update

P.S. Me cummenting thru cellphone derefore no smilieys bt i totally luved it nd will edit my cumment once get ol thru pc

hheehehe... thnq so much Aakriti for ur comment... made me smile wide lyk dis... 😃 😃

hehhehe... dnt whack urslf.. ab padh lia na koi ni.. hehehhehe... ab aage se dnt lose track.. hehehhe... 😆

aaahhh.. me neva knew my FF ws dat captivating.. hehehhe... m vry vry happy to knw dat... 😃 😃

n rahi luv n romance ki baat.. to trust me .. sab maaneet ki den hai.. isse pehle i neva thot of luv n ol... ab to i daydream about my luv lyf... hhehehehe... 😆

yeah .. me will keep writin... 😃 bt sry PG k wajah se khaali weekend me hi update kr paungi... 😔

nw cumin to ur 2nd comment.. hehhehe...
me glad u luvd my poetries... dats one thing even i luv.. hehehhe... poetry is lyk my passion.. to me.. it cums from within... hehehe.. sry mai thora jazbaati ho gai... 😆

n bout d likes.. yeah me get dissappointed.. bt me nt gonna stop writin cz i knw thea r my awsum wale frnz who wanna read it.. hehhe... nw dat list of awsum frnz includes u too.. haina..?? 😉 hehhehe...

n yeah me cn neva get bored of ur bhaashan cz mai khud bhi aisi hi hun.. bohot bolti hun... hehehhe...
but fir abhi i shud stop.. sona hai.. hehehhe...

luvya loads... ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

that was soo cute !

thx a lot... 😊

Originally posted by: maaneetfanatic

1st of all...thanks for the dedication..means a lot Abresh🤗

Then..as for the update..it was phenomenal😲

Seriously Maan singing the song for Geet..and then you putting the pics to display their desires was just the cherry on top😛

I absolutely loved this update, and I bet from now on Maan and Geet are going to have a hard time controlling their desires😳😳

Now I can't w8 for next weekend, and yes hun I can w8 as much as you want me to for your updates, as long as you make then juicy, spicy and long, weekend pe update chale ga..nahi...dhodenga😆

Love you hun, and thank you once again for the kind dedication😍

aww..u dnt hv to thank me.. aapka hi dil tha jldi se nxt update padhne ka.. to maine jldi se likh dia.. hehehhe... wrna direct weekend par hi krne ko socha tha.. heheheh...
n photos... baap re.. badi mehnat ki unke lie pta h... pehle jo photos daali.. half of dem werent wrkin... den 2nd tym wern i ws puttin diff photos.. to mera net band ho gya.. den 3rd tym maine galti se tab band kr dia... den 4th tym.. maine glti se usi tab pe image khol di... 5th tym jaake update ki editing ho pai.. me hd to do editing again n again.. hehehe... tired...
hehehhe... long updates to mil jaenge.. promise... 😃

luvya 2 loads... muuuaahhh... ❤️

Originally posted by: soni4eva

wondaful update soo cute n romantic

cnt w8 2 read more plzz cont soon

fanx 4 da pm x 🤗

thnq so much... 😊
but me sry.. u'l hv 2 wait 4 d nxt update til d weekend arrives... 😔
luvya.. ❤️

Originally posted by: ritzy09

wow Abi...kya baat hai...

 

tere har lafz pe bha wah kehne ka man aaya

 

i just love your poems specially the ones Maan write in his diary...ek baar saari posts mein se Maan ki diary poems post karni padegi...i am sure everyone will marvel when they will read it together...I will do it next time i get some time

 

 

update was awesome...so sweet...the feeling of lying in each other's arms...haye woh bhi din the...lekin bache hone se pehle...jab one can just laze around in their partner's arms...I miss it so much...mujhe mere sundays yaad aa gaye 😳

 

he he he...what a thought...sorry mein thoda personal mode mein chali gayi thi...

 

I loved thier desert too...poor guys kitna tadpa rahi ho tum unhein Abi...bechaare pehle phisalte hain, phir sambhalte hain...

 

mast date tha...

 

waiting eagerly for more lekin ab tho sirf weekend pe update milega nahi 😕

 

 

par jaate jaate chaar line movie ke song se udhaar leke -

 

dil dhoondhataa hai, fir wahee furasat ke raat din
baithhe rahe tasawwoor-ye-jaanaa kiye huye

jaadon kee narma dhoop aaur aangan mein let kar
aankhon pe khinch kar tere daaman ke saaye ko
aaundhe pade rahe kabhee karawat liye huye

yaa gamreeyon kee raat jo poorawaaeeyaan chale
thhandee safed chaadaro pe jaage der tak
taaron ko dekhate rahe chhat par pade huye

barfilee sardiyon mein kisee bhee pahaad par
waadee mein gunjatee huyee, khaamoshiyaan sune
aankhon mein bheege bheege se lamhe liye huye

aww... thnq thnq thnq Ritzy di... aapne waah waah kr dia.. mera likha safal ho gya.. hehehe... 😃

aahhh.. me glad u luv d poems.. me luv dem too... hehehe.. 😆 n schhi ur gonna make an alag se post for ol d poems..????? 😃 me wil luv it.. heheheh...

n aapki personal thingi sunke maza aaya.. hehhehe... mai to neways maaneet ko dekhne ke baad se apni luv lyf ke baare me dream krti rehti hun.. hehehhe... 😆

ab pyaar kia haina Ritzy di... to tadapna to banta hai... hehehe... 😉

n i luv d song dedication.. perfect.. hehehhe... 😃

luvya Ritzy di.. muah... ❤️

Wow awesme update..just lovng their romantic moments...

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Wow awesme update..just lovng their romantic moments...

thx Mona... 😊

superb update