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Ye Ishaare Hawaon Ke..! THREAD 1 - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Abreshmina


hahahha.. 😆 i know unexpected tha... actually maine bhi ni socha tha ki i'l make d confession so soon but likhte likhte i just thought abhi hi confession acha lagega n it would be a surprise for all to likh dia... 😉 😆 n bout the chain.. he got it made n kept it with him so that he could give it to her whenever he decides to propose her.. n the time came... 😃
ohh gosh.. ye song kitna perfect tha... 😃 i have never heard of it... konsi movie..????
thank you for your lovely comment Ritzy di... 🤗


It is a wonderful song...here is the link -

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vjh20uFlzKI

 
 
it is from an old movie - Aap ti Aise na the
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved it
so now they confessed their feelings
waiting to see what next
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Posted: 12 years ago

WoW Abby I never expected dat dey will confess...
brilliant surprise dear...
I just loved it loved it loved it!!!!!!!
geet ki hug aur 'i love u' p maan ka reaction was gr8 but d real awesomeness was when he asked her to repeat her words...dat was super cute...
Abby tum to Delhi ki restraunt guide ban gai yaar kya menu choose kia hai...it is yummilicious...(mun mein paani aa gaya by god ;-)...)
it was really sweet how each of their choices matched...they indeed are soulmates...
oh Abby u r such a brilliant writer dear d way u described d surprise place was incredible...
awww I sooo luved d way he proposed her...it was unique n beautiful!!!!!
(got to read 2 unique way of confessions in a day...mera to din ban gaya :-D...)
her feeling familiar with his words soulmate n he felt his soulmate's prescence wherever she is was really beautiful...n den her understanding her feelings n saying yes to him was magical!!!!
oh I forgot to mention bout the locket it was beautiful!!!!
d way u described their hug...hats off dear...!!!!!
itna kuch bol dia but still I would say u made me go speechless with dis update...it took me few minutes to start d comment...
PS: I just love dis 1 so pls don't end it soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
 loved it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow loved it , was simply supereb 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: crazydevil87


WoW Abby I never expected dat dey will confess...
brilliant surprise dear...
I just loved it loved it loved it!!!!!!!
geet ki hug aur 'i love u' p maan ka reaction was gr8 but d real awesomeness was when he asked her to repeat her words...dat was super cute...
Abby tum to Delhi ki restraunt guide ban gai yaar kya menu choose kia hai...it is yummilicious...(mun mein paani aa gaya by god ;-)...)
it was really sweet how each of their choices matched...they indeed are soulmates...
oh Abby u r such a brilliant writer dear d way u described d surprise place was incredible...
awww I sooo luved d way he proposed her...it was unique n beautiful!!!!!
(got to read 2 unique way of confessions in a day...mera to din ban gaya :-D...)
her feeling familiar with his words soulmate n he felt his soulmate's prescence wherever she is was really beautiful...n den her understanding her feelings n saying yes to him was magical!!!!
oh I forgot to mention bout the locket it was beautiful!!!!
d way u described their hug...hats off dear...!!!!!
itna kuch bol dia but still I would say u made me go speechless with dis update...it took me few minutes to start d comment...
PS: I just love dis 1 so pls don't end it soon...


thank you so much Abgina appi... by god... u made me blush... laugh n smile with your comment... I loved it loved it loved it... 😉
haan ab I live in Delhi to jitna khaya hai likh dia... but then FF me to its Mumbai...hehhehe.. 😆
thank u so much.. i was very nervous bout d description yaar... cuz m quite bad at describing places... but i guess mai thik thak likha dia... 😃
unique confession... 2... haan I knw ur tokin bout seduction nah... sachhi uska confession to bohot hi zada awsum tha... 😃
n yeah.. m nt ending dis Appi... dnt wry... 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...
when she said it was like a friendly gesture i felt sad...
but the way they were spending their time it was nice...
almost all their choices was same and then bang...
maan proposed her the most romantic way and she accepted it...i just cant believe he did so...
waiting for next eagerly now...
hope nothing comes bw them in this journey
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Posted: 12 years ago
very very nice part 
maan k ijhar ka trika i luv it
maaneet mil gye 
nice wrk ABERESHIMA
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
loved every bit of it
sorry for commenting late
what to do me down with fever and cold 😕😭 yucks 🤢 i just hate this 😡😭
ok chaddo ji ,anyways no one is interested in patients 😕 except viruses and doctors 😆
oho maan was also confused by jhallis words 😲 u are not alone dude , it 's same here also 😆
ok the case was different as he was confused whether hug or not 😉
are babaji kaun hai woh stupid jo aise  golden chance ko drop karega 😉
oh no kya timing hai in dono ki 😕 always missing by a second
kudi was so fast in such matters  she broke the hug 😕 plz babaji make her super fast in other things also 😉
so it was friend wala i love you 😲 ok as eveyrthing starts from friendship na 😉
oho munda asked for his reward 😳 now that's msk 😆
geet's treat 😲 don't worry maan start practising right away afterall shadi ke baad you will have to bear much more than this 😉 it says na '' practise makes perfect '' 😆
aww they have same likes in food 😳 another signal from babaji 😉
maan was in cloud nine knowing their same- same 😳
maan took her to his favourite place 😊 oops geet took him 😆
loved your description about that place dear, it was so beautiful and serene
omg munda proposed her 😲  now that's the spirit boy 😉shubh kaam ko dher nahi karte 😆
his proposal was so romantic and so dreamy dear 😳 love it
oho he gifted her a beautiful chain 😳 munda was ready for the action ha , lage raho bhai 😉
finally jhalli said lovers wala i love you 😳 and she accepted his proposal 😳 loved it dear
wow they hugged 😳 how dreamy 😍 waise nice timing maan 😉
you did a great job dear 👏     eagerly waiting for next part 
thanks for the pm
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


Ah meri dhadkan ruk gayi...Maan just confessed his love and Geet accepted...beautiful...

their date...the lake scene and their confession was depicted very well..

thanx for pm Abby