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A...Day...with...U !!! MANEET FF epilogue - pg 75 (Page 65)

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                 Part 10



he - milenge..
she worriedl - fir se..??
he burst into laughter so did she..
both left hand of each other
still laughing...
she - bye..
n started moving back..
he too laughing wave her good-bye..retreating his feet back...

both turned at d same time..
smiling..
started walking in opposite directions 
...n left for deir respective destinies...

...
dey walked walked n walked away from each other n stopped mutually...
like sumthing stopped dem..
dey couldn't walk anymore...
a sudden urge to see him last time..
a sudden smile which appears on his face watching her face...
she shook her head smiling n turned back..
he shook his head smiling n tunred back...

both turned at d sam moment n saw each other looking at each other...
a wide smile spreaded on deir faces like a magic..
n once again..
both started walking towrds each other..
dey walked n walked..


till dey stood in front of each other..

he raised his hand in front of her...
she looked at his pleasantly surprised...
d expressions of his face just blew her...
she was not understanding wat exactly is he asking for..
he smiled - mera mob..
she confused - huh.?
he - mera mobile abhi bhi tumhari bag me hai..
she just remebered..
she - ohhh...
she immediately took it out n handed it to him..
he - thnqq..
she teased - mobile ye jarurat nahi addiction ban chuka hai..
he smiled knowing she was giving him back his words..
both giggled...

she - subah se ek baar bhi yaad aayi tumhe tumhare mobile ki..
he nodded in no..
he - tumhe bhi thodi na yaad aayi ved ki...fir bhi tum vapas ja rahi ho na..usi tarah me bhi...achha bye..
he was about to go..
she - tumhara no. mujhe do na..likh leti hu..
he looked at her suprised..
n den smiled to himself..
she took out a pen from her bag n waited for him to tell his no. so dat she can pen it on her palm...
he - me tumhe apna no. dunga..fir tum usse apne hath par likhogi..fir jab tak tum ghar pohochogi..wo erase ho chuka hoga..

she smiled at dat..

he - waise bhi hum fir nahi milenge..usse achha hai ke tum aaj ka din apni yadon me rakhna..
she put d cap of pen back..
she - well..okkk
she put d pen back..
he - aur haan..tumhara cell check kar lo..tum wo subah me battery ke sath kuchh kar rahi thi na..shayad thodi battery save ho gayi ho...
she remebered dat..
she - arre haan..me dekh leti hun...
he - hmm..aur us khurana house wale ladke ko khud phone ya msg karke...shadi na karne ke reasons..
he giggled..
she - ha ha..not interested..
he teased - achha check karlo..uske missedcalls ya msgs aaye hi honge...usse bhi tumse milke ki chah hogi..
she - achh..aur mujhse milkar wo mujhse shadi ke liye haan bolega..kya garantee hai..?
he joked- accidents hote rehte hai...

her mouth fell right open - wattt

he - haan..kuchh logo ka aadat hoti..sidhe chalte chalte..jaan bujhkar khayi me girna..
she waked his arm..
he too laughed...
so did she..
he - made in delhi...
she shook her head smiling...


she - btw..tumhara naam kya hai...
he thinking - delhi..aur tumhara..
she too thinking - mumbai..
both laughed again..
n took leave of each other..

he started walking away from her..
while she was still standing deir..
she shook her head n about to go for her train wen her cell rang...

she picked up - hello...(pause).ohh hii..(pause)..par me to ab ja rahi hun..(pause)..delhi station..(pause)..i know i know..hume milna chahiye tha..me din bhar wait bhi kiya..(pause)..nahi abhi 15 min hai baki meri train ke liye..(pause)..station ke bahar..(pause)..okk..me aati hun..bye
she hanged..

as she came out of station..
she looked here n dere if anybody approching her..
jsut den her eyes fell on him..
dere he was trying to strt his bike..
she went to him..
he - tum yahan kya kar rahi ho...
she - jaise tum aaye the na subah me wo shop me shaving ke liye..usi tarah me aayi hun station par bday manane...
he - tum sidhe baat kar hi nahi sakti na..
she laughed - majak kar rahi hun baba..par tum abhi tak kyu ruke ho..gaye nahi..
he - bike strt karne ki koshish kar raha hun..ho hi nahi rahi..
she - kyu..
he - kyu kya kyu..din bhar hum ghum rahe the..petrol khatam ho gaya hoga..mene dhyan hi nahi diya...
she - ohh..arre tumhari batting bhi to baki hai na..
he twisted his lips - batting khatam ho gayi..chhotu ka call aya tha.hum haar gaye...me nahi to haarenge hi na..
she - i know..nwz..chal byeee
he made angry face - u r so mean..
she - mujhe kuchh kaha tumne..
he - haan tumhe hi selfish bol raha hun..
she - emse selfish kya hai..
he - mujhe batao me yahan kiske liye aaya hun..
she - tum yahan kiske liye aaye ho wo toh mujhe nahi pata...
his mouth fell right open..
she - haan par..mujhe chhodne aaye the etna me bol sakti hun...
he - hai na..to fir yaha meri bike strt nahi ho rahi..aur tum mujhe chhodke ja rahi hun...
she - arre wahan meri train hai...
he - aise hi..aisehi treat kiya tha subah me mujhe coffee shop me..pani ke liye bhi nahi puchha...
she - oyye hello..tumhare bill ke paise mene diye the..bhool gaye..
he - oyye..uske badle me mera kimati watch rakha tha..bhool gayi..
she smiled at his childish behavior..
he - aur fir atm se tumhe paise diye tha..na hum kisi se muft lete hai aur nahi dete hai...
she giggled..
he - aur tum platform par wait karne ki bajay..yahan kahan ghum rahi ho..train yahan aane wali hai tumhe lene ke liye...
she - arre..uska call aaya tha abhi..
he teased her smiling idiotically..

he - ved ka..? patch up ho gaya..congos..
she - arre..nahi..me woh khurana house wale ki baat kar rahi hun..
he - wattt..omg..to fir..kya kaha usne..
she - usne kahan wo yahan mujhse milne aa raha hai..bahar rukne ke liye kaha..
he - aur tum ruk gayi..??
she - haan..waise bhi 10 min hai abhi mere pass..to mene socha milne me kya burayi hai..aur me aayi bhi to usi vajah se thi na..
he looked at her in disbelive..
she - aur aawaz kafi decent lagi uski..
he smiled..so did she..
he teased - hmm..kahin shadi tey to nahi ho jayega..
she smiled - tey vageira kuchh nahi..me just mil rahi hun usse..
he - bet..??
she - kis liye..?
he - tum usse shadi ke liye haa kaho gi..
she giggled at him like he is just imposible..
he - dekha..mujhe pata tha..
she kept laughing joined by him..
she - oyye..ye jyada ho raha hai..ok..tumhare na is stupid behaviour ki vajah se sunchi ne tumhe chhod diya hoga...
he giggled knowing she is trying to hide her blush behind dis fake anger..

he - suchi chali gaye..usse jane do..par tumhara face pe yo pink shade aaya hai..wo usse khurana ke liye hai na..
she giggled not knowing how to react to his tease..
he - achha..mujhe usse milaogi na..
she - kyu..?
he - tum din bhar mere sath rahi esiliye us ved ko bhool payo..aur esi vajah se tum usse khurana se shadi ke liye haan keh rahi ho..
she giggled - wattt
he - u hav to give m credit...oyye dekho wo aa gaya..
she immediately tunred back..straightening herself..but no1 was dere..
he burst into laughter...
she turned bak laughing..

she so much wanted to kill him for being to teasy..
he - dhak dhak..dhak dhak..dhak dhak...kya baat hai..
she waked him again..
she laughing - tum chup karoge..
he - achha..ab shrmana band karo..use call karo aur pucho kahan hai..warna tumhari train mis ho jayegi..
she - arre nahi na..jab uska call aaya..to jo battery save ho gayi thi..wo bhi khatam ho gayi..
he gave her his cell..
he - mere cell se kar lo..
she took his cell n searched in her bag for d number..

he - arre tumne thodi der pehle try kiya tha..tumhare no ke niche wala no..dialled list me hoga dekho..

she - arre haan...she called on dat number..


he looked at her in amusedment..

there were so many emotions playing on his face..
he looked away trying to hide his smile..
she - busy..again busy..
he - ohh..
she gave his back his cell..
she - me chalti hu..announcement ho gayi..meri train chhut jayegi..
he nodded wid his expressive face..
saying so she started to walk..
but again stooped..
sumthing just striked her...
she moved back..
he looked away..
she - oyye..ek min..ek min..mera no tumhare cell me kaise aaya...mene to tumhe apna no nahi diya...
he smiled..
he - dats not importnt...


she looked at him puzzled..
he - tum ye socho ke ussi no se wohi no kaise lag sakta hai...
she thought of it..
she - kaise possible hai..ussi no se wohi no kaise lag sakta hai...nahi lag sakta...how stupid..khud ke cell se koi khud ko call karta hai...nwz chal byeee..

she again started to walk..
but stopped...wid his voice..
he - tumne lagaya..ussi no se wohi no..
...

her expression changed to utter shock..a pleasant shock...
her breaths forgot how to breath..
he - wo bhi ek baar nahi..2 baar..essi cell hai..yahi no..

reality stucked her so hard..
she didn't know wat to think n how to think...
oh goddd
omggg
is it true..
wattt
her mouth becale o-shaped...
while he smirked n walked towrds her...
she looked at him in shock of her life...
she wanted to say sumthing..but her tongue betrayed her...
he looked at her wid his most sincere smile..

he - tum ne hi kaha tha na...usse mere paas ana chahiye tha..mujhe prupose karna chahiye tha..fir me decide karungi...
she was still speechless...
it was most pleasant shock of her life..
her pink cheek couldn't hide it..



he - dekho..me tumhare samane khada hun..WILL U MARRY ME... ??

she looked at him without blinking...
his last words entered like romantic theme in her ears
his expressive face...
n d reality...
she was so shocked to react...

he smiled at her situation..
he tried to make her understand how it happened..

he - mere hi ghar ka adress mujhse hi puchha...
a soft smile cripped on her lips remembering dat...

he - mene socha..ek ajeeb shuruvat ho hi gayi hai..to kyu na ek naya experiment kiya jaye..ladki dekhne ka...
her smile slowly slowly started to increase..

he - dekho..tumhare samne hu me...SHADI KAROGI MUJHSE...

she slowly blinked her eyes as d words his her again..
she pointed her index finger at him..
but was not able to speak..her pink cheeks were so irritating her..
she waked his arms..
he - ouchhh..wats dat..
she started hitting his wid her both hands..
he had no option but run..
n she ran behind him wanting to wak him till he fell on knees and prupose her more romantically...
she smiled of her own thoughts...

he running - r u mad..?

she - r u maddd..?

he - ye kaisa answer hai..
she - tumhe yahi ans milega...

both eventually stopped panting...
she - kya jarurat thi ye sab karne ki..
he - jarurat matlab..tum hi mili nahi ke delhi ke bare me bolna shuru kar diya..
she - aur agar shadi ho gayi..to yahi sab chalta rahega..
he - kyu nahi hona chahiye..
both were panting..
he - aur ho..humare delhi ki bahu banana hai na..to tumhe delhi ki respect karni hogi..
she - aur agar tumhe mumbai ka jamayi banana hai..to mumbai is d best bolna hoga..
he - wo hum dekh lenge..par uske liye pehle conffirmation chahiye hoga..
he said teasingly again trapping her in his words..
she - kiska conffirmation..
he - me mumbai ka jamayi banane wala hun is chiz ka conffirmation..
she - achha..she said casually..
he looked at her naughtily..
she den realised wat he meant..
she - mera matlab..ohh..i mean..wo me apni mumma se baat kar lungi..
he - oyye hello..bolungi nahi..ye lo cell aur abhi baat kar lo..
she took d cell..
she - haan to bol rahi hu na..me kya darati hun..

she called her mother..
she - hello mumma..(pause)..haan me.woh..(she was not able to speak in front of him so started walking..n he smiled n followed her)..haan wo me mili usse..(pause)..haan mumma unhe..(she rolled her eyes n while he raised his collar)..haan..haan..me unhi ke cell se baat kar rahi hun..(pause)..haan..ab sab baat tumhe cell par hi karni hai kya..(pause)..me ghar aakar batati hun..byee..
she hanged..

she give him back his cell..
kind of blushed n moved away from his...

he couln't believe his eyes..
she just blusheddd
omggg..

he walked to face her..
he - owo..ye bhi aata hai tumhe...
she giggled - aata vagaira nahi..wo mumma kuch keh rahi thi..esiliye..
he teased - kya mene suna nahi..
she giggling - mumma ne kuchh kaha es liye..
he too looked away giggling to himself..
he - ek baat kahun..
she - mujhe pata hai..
he - kya..
she - yahi ke me jab sharmati hun to bahot pyari lagti hun...
he smiled n nodded in no..
she looked at him surprised..

he - tum bahot pyara sharmati ho..

a soft blushy smile spreaded on her cheek..n she smiled looking down..
she felt like a new feeling just entered her life n filled every lack..she ever had...
he looked at her blushing face n smiled to himself..
he never knew his life would take such a great turn..
both were just perfect for each other..

he - i love u....

she looked at him wid d most beautifull epressions of her face...
she blushed like anything..giggled like anything..
she - mumma se baad karne ke baad fir tumhe answer milega..

saying so she started to run...
he ran behind her...
and
in nxt moment..
she find herself pulled in his strong arms..
she looked at his surprised...but looked down..
he kept her tight in his embrace wid his 1 arm..n raised her chin wid d fingers of his 2nd hand...

both looked at each other...
he nuzzled his nose wid hers..
while shr turned into darkish pink color ...
he romatically - ye sunne ke liye subah se tumhe pamper kar raha hun..
she - haan..she said naughtily..
he naughtily - achha..he nuzzled his nose more dominantly overs hers..
she - meri train chhut jayegi..
he - tumhari train toh chhuti hi samajho...
both giggled in each other's embrace..
he looked deep into her eyes...
n gently brushed his lips overs hers...
her lips tunred red wid single burning touch of his skin..
she looked at him wid so many emotions..
he just blew away...
he kissed her lips dis time wid all his love n care n lingered over deir...
as his lips touched hers...
 magic spread over d world..
as d most beautyfull pair in d world became each other's forever..
she too responded wid same love...
...
he whispered over her lips - " MAAN...MAAN SINGH KHURANA.."
...
she smile n snaked her hands over his neck - " GEET..GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA..."
...

both looked at each other...
maan loved her ans so much dat he just raised her up in high..picking her up by her waist...
while she too flew in air..
confident dat he can never hurt her...

n both got deir MANZIL...
...unknowingly...
...and unintentionally...!!!!!



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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 15 February 2012 at 7:32am

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awesome part
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thanks mishty , wonderful story.
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that was a lovely end...

amazing...just love him fro teasing her...he knew all the time...but he wanted to know her better...

will be waiting for epilogue...

thnx for PM...

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