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                 Part 9


he - tumhe ek complement dena chahunga...
she smiled - me bahot pyari hasati hun..yahi na...
he smiled - nahi..
she looked at him knotting her eye-brows...
he smiled - tum jab hasati hona..toh bahot pyari lagti ho...
...
an excitement ran through her spine..
her expressions changed from smile to sumthing else..she didn't know...
a smile..a blush..a confusion..a amusement..a surprise..a shock...everything seemed to form in dat single statement of him...
she had nothing to say...
n both...
...just kept looking at each other...
...wid unlimited emotions flowing in d air of new shade of LOVE !!!

...
suddenly deir eye-contact broke..n both looked opposite to each other...
thinking wat just happened between dem...
did he just complement me...she thought...
did she just blush..he thought...

kyu chhod diya usse...????

came a sudden question from her as she was just trying to change d topic..
he knotted his eyes-brows..thinking..whom she is speaking about...

she looked at him..
she - kyu chhod diya sunchi ko..??
he sighed - wohh..pehli baat..mujhe pata tha..dadi nahi manegi..humari shadi ke liye..mene try kiya n dadi was convinced just for d sake of my happiness...par.
she cut him - par..??
he smiled - shadi ke baad..dadi ya kisi relative ke sath nahi rahungi..ye kehne lagi...
she - fir..
he puzzled - fir kya..mne keh diya..dis is so not possible..
she - kyu..??..aaj kal..its common..
he more puzzled - common..
she casually - haan..i mean..shadi ke baad..ladai jhagade hona..aur tab alaga hone se achha hai..ke pehle hi alag ho jao..
he shockling - pehle hi alag ho jao..?? apni dadi se alag rehne ki tayyari kar lu..
she - bilkul..
he - kiske liye..??
she - ghar basane ke liye..
he cut her - ghar chhod do...
he joked feeling disbelieve of her words...
he - ghar basane ke liye ghar chhod dena..
she sighed knowing wat he meant..

he - jis dadi ne..ya kissi bhi maa-baap ko lelo..jo apne bachho ko bada karne me..uski padhayi-likhayi..uska jivan savarane me apni puri zindagi bita dete hai...ussi ko chhod ke apna naya ghar..apni nayi duniya basani chahiye...??..ek ladki ke liye..??

she - uss ladke ke liye..kya wo ladki apna ghar nahi chhodti...

he - woh samaj ki reet hai...

she - arre..jaise usse reet mante hai..waise hi isse bhi maani chahiye..
he looked at her all puzzled...

she - wp ladki..apna ghar..apni family..apna sab kuchh chhodkar ek paraye ghar chali aati hai...kispar bharosa rakhkar..?? uss ladke par hi na...
he was not understanding dis gal at all...

she - usse badha karne me bu uske maa-baap ko wahin parehsniyan aur taklife hoti hai..jo ek ladke ke maa-baap ko hoti hai...
he - par iss sab bargaining me...me apni dadi ko kyu chhodu..??
she - arre..it doesn't mean ke humesha ke liye chhod do..vacations..functions..ke time par jakar waqr bitana...
he - really..matlab..shadi ke baad..biwi full time n parents half time..is it ?
he laughed..
she - ab ye tumhari soch par depend karta hai..
he - ye achha hai...
she giggled...
he - kahin ved aur tumhari jhagadon ki vajah aisi hi kuchh to nahi thi...
she - ue bi ek thi unme se..par uske kayi sawalon ke jawab mere paas nahi the...wts my fault..??
he - aur tumhare sawalon ka kya..??
she - sabhi sawalon ke jawab nahi mile..par ese meri zindagi me koi break nahi aa jata...teyya kar liya..aur ho gaye alag..
he - etna asan hota hai.. ??
she - etna mushkil bhi nahi hota...
he looked at her amused...
dis gals is sumthing...
understanding her means understanding world...
she is way too much soffisticated...
she - ab ek baat batao...hum pyar karte hai..??

WATTT

asked he shocked...
he - ab ye kab teyy huva...??????
she angrily - mera matlab hai...tum sunchi se..me ved se...hum ek dusre se pyar karte hai...
he sighed in relief...
thnk goddd...i was about to get heart attack...
she - tum ladko ko na..har haqq jatana hota hai..
he made baby face...
she - ye pehano..wo mat pehano..ye karo..wo mat karo..abhi ke abhi kiss karo..n blah blah...
he looked here n dere...n cleared his throat...
she - tab kahan chala jata hai..tumhara pyar aur culture...aur agar yaho haqq ek ladki jatana chahe...tum esme galat kya hai..??
he - mujhe lagta hai ke iss prob ke liye..dono equally responsible hai..
she smiled idiotically - i dnt think so..
he - me sabit kar sakta hu...
she - go ahead...
he - alright..mujhe batao shadi ka matlab kya hai..?? 
she smiled - pata nahi..
he - yahin se to shuruvat hai..
she waited for answer..
he - ho sakta hai..ke aaj concept badal gaya ho..par pehle ke jamane me..bhagwan ke ashirwad se..bado ki duvaon se aur agni ko sakshi rakhkar ek pavitra bandhan bandh jata tha...
she - es tarah ka waste of money aaj bhi hota hai..
he - aur uske baad honeymoon naam ke ek concept hota tha...
she - wo to aaj bhi hai..

he - haan..par aaj kal..shadi se pehle hi ek dusre ke bahot karib aakar..hum us pal ki mithas ko kam kar dete hai...aisa nahi lagta tumhe..

she sighed..trying to understand his point...

he - rishton k maja dhire dhire samajhne me hota..us pal ka ehsaas..wo pehla sparsh..dat 1st hug...

she - of two people who dnt know each other...
he - bilkul maanta hu..ek dusre ke liye ajnabi..par..ek dusre ko shadi ke baad jaanane pehchanane lagte the...
she smiled at his thoughts..

he - bhid me chalte waqt anjane me hone wala wo hathon ka sparsh...wo sharmana..ek dusre ke liye wait karana...(he smiled to himself)..chhink ne ki aadat se lekar..khane me kitna namak chahiye..sab kuchh dhire dhire sikhte jana...wo sab kahin kho sa gaya hai...

she - arre par aaj ke jamane me..wo ladka ladki..shadi se pehle hi ek dusre ko samajhana chahte ho..to esme kya galat hai...

he - me batata hu na ke galat kya hai..pehle 100 shadiyon me 5 ya 6 shadiyan tutti thi...par aaj 100 shadiyon me 10 ya 20 shadiyan bachti hai..aur 80% tutti hai..n u know d reason..?? 
she waited for his nxt set of words..

he - kyunki hum rishton ko khulane hi nahi dete...us rishte ko samajhne se pehle hi uska maja kahin kho gaya hota hai...
she - me to kehti hai..ye todana jodana..ese achha ke ke shadi hi na karo..
he puzzled - huh ?
she - chhink se lekar namak tak janane ke iye kya karo..shadi..??
she said laughing...
he - ohh..so d bottom line is tum shadi nahi karogi..aur tumhe ye yakin hai ke jo ladka tumhe sambhal sake..wo abhi tak paida nahi huva aur na kabhi hoga..
she giggled - aisa tumhe lagta hai...
saying so she started walking followed by him...
he - to fir shadi kyu nahi...
she - kisse ?
he - tumhe...
she - mene aisa kab kaha...
he puzzled - arre abhi toh keh rahi thi...
she laughed - wo meri soch thi..mera decision nahi...
he - kitni ajeeb ho tum yaar...
she tunred to face him..
she smiled - me aisi hi hun..jis taraf wave..us taraf swiming..jiye to bhi khud ki marzi se..mare to bhi khudki marzi se...
he - huh..?..
he just couldn't understand dis gal at all...
he asked - tum bhagwan me bhi vishwas rakhti ho ya nahi..
she - me khud me vishwas rakhti hun..dats for sure..
he - khud se etna pyar..not good..
she - not dat bad as well...kisi aur se pyar karega khud ko dard dene se to achha hi hai...
he looked at her carefully n den smiled...
he - ab tum made in delhi lag rahi ho..
she giggled...
she - btw..delhi me '    ' kahan hai..
he - par tum ne to kaha ke tumhe khud me vishwas hai..
she - haan toh eska matlab ye nahi ke mujhe bhagwan me vishwas nahi hai..
saying so she laughedn started walking...
he sighed at dis mad gal n followed her..

n both started walking to deir destivation..
talking..
fighting..
giggling..
laughing...
n just an unconditional walk...

...

d bike's speed increased cutting d cold n strong winds cuming in between...
wid her hopped on it wid him...

as dey reached '   '
she entered in while he went to park his bike...
wen he entered...
he saw her calm form sitting in front of god wid her eyes closed n hands raised in front...
dat calm gesture was very different side of her dan d chattar box...
he smiled of his thoughts n too bend in front of god in submission..
both looked at each other n went to tie mannat ka dhaga...
both tied deir respective dhagas wid deir personal requests to god..
n came out...

he - left sight delhi station..right sir khurana house for d reason u came..where wud u like to go...
she - delhi khatam ho gayi..?
he - delhi kabhi khatam nahi hogi...tumhare mumbai jane ka samay ho gaya hai..
she smiled - ek akhari coffee..?
he watched her carefully..
he - no..
she looked puzzled..
he smirked - 2 log ek coffee kaise pee sakte hai..
she laughed..
he - pat wat about bill..
she looked at him n knowing wat he meant..she started laughing again..so did he..

as d bike again took its speed..
dey reached d same coffee shop..

dey ordered for 2 coffees while he was busy making air-plane of paper..
she shook her head smiling..
he - achha..tumhara fav hero kaun hai..
she doing sumthing in her bag...
she - tum..
he lookd at her puzzled..
she smiled at his puzzled face...
she - mujhe fims dekhana kuchh khas pasand nahi..ghumana pasand hai..
he smiled..
he - ved ne tumhe kabhi delhi nahi ghumaya..
she looked at him..
he - waise bhi tumhara nature dekh ke wo bhi dar jata hoga..
she - wo bhi matlab..
he - wo bhi matlba WO BHI..
she looked at his expressionless..
he - ok..ok..jaise me dard gaya usi tarah wo bhi darta hoga..
she didn't smile n looked back to watever she was doing in bag..
he giggled to himself..
he - aaj din kaise gujara pata hi nahi chala na...
she - mujhe pata chala...
he looked at her like wat is it with her...
y she alwz hav to say sumthing different compare to his opinion..
he twisted his lips looking away making sad face..
she smiled shooking her head..
she - mera matlab tha bahot achha gaya aaj ka din..
he looked at her n smiled...
but his hormones were urging him to b naughty...:P
he - to fir...he said in a teasing voice..
she looked at him..
he - ab kya karogi uska..
she - jo zindagi me hai hi nahi uske bare me kya sochna..
his teasing smile tunred to genual smile..
he - me wo tumhara khurana house wale ladke ke bare me baat kar raha hu..
she - me bhi usiki baat kar rahi hu..
he nodded his head like okkk
he - ek baat puchhu..
she looked at him dumbfounded...
he looked at her..
he - wattt
she laughed - permission..??? etni respect..not expected..
she giggled..
he too tried to hide his giggle..
he - thoda personal question hai..dats y permission..
she didn't say anything..
he - hum delhi walo ka nature hi...
she raised her hands in surrender like ask watever u want but plz dnt strt delhi-mumbai again...
he laughed - ab tak to tum ye sab samajh hi gayi hogi..
she smiled shooking her head..
she - puchho..
he - tum ved ko bhul nahi sakti..esiliye woh khurana house wale ko mana kar rahi ho...hai na..
he asked quite sincerely..
she sighed - hmm..
he - aaj din bhar me ek baar bhi tumhe ved ki yaad aayi..
she looked at him wid quite unfamiliar emotions..
for sum reasons he couldn't meet her eyes wid dose expression..
he prefer to look away so did she..
she looked back in her bag so did he got busy trying to make fly his paper air-plane..
but den keep it back knowing wat is he doing..
he did look at her in between..ofcorse not letting her know..
both had nothing to say or hear...
dey quitely had deir coffees n left from dere...

...
once again d bike took its speed moving through a non-traffic road.heading towrds delhi station...
she was litle confused wid herself..
she looked at d familiar male sitting in front of her driving bike...
sumthing about him made her think of him unintentionally...
she was not sad but not happy as well...
she looked away not understanding wat is happening to her..
she finally wore her glasses trying to get out of dose stupid confused state..

...

DELHI STATION..

station was more crowded compare to morning...
d same place she enetered delhi..
sum people were still reading news-paper..
doggies were still deir irritating people..
dere were still many people rushing for deir respective trains..
dere were still couple enjoying deir togetherness..
everything was d same
except her...
she was not alone dis time..

he was standing on platform waiting for her..
while she came back to him completing needed things..
he - exactly 20 min hai tumhari train k liye..
she - i heard dat..
she gave him a paper
it was d same paper on which she was writing sumthing when dey were sitting in coffee shop..
he - ye kya hai..
she - me ye shadi kyu nahi kar sakti..eske kuchh reasons likhe hai is paper par...
he - ohh..
she - wo khurana house wala ladka hai na...uske darwaze par stick kar dena..
he - adha litre milk types..
she giggled n so did he..
she - lo..(he handed him)..communication ka naya rasta sikhaya hai tumhari delhi ne..
he - to fir..humara delhi sikhane me ustad hai..
she - unnecessary..??
he - how unnecessary..sikhana aur sikhaana humare delhi ki style...
she - samajh gayi..samajh gayi..
both looked at each other b burst into laughter remembering how dey were fighiting for mumbai delhi since morning..
both looked at each other again n suddenly stopped laughing..
a silence spreaded between dem...n both looked away..
both were looking here n dere..
both looked at each other again n smiled weakly..
she - mujhe etni shanti pasand nahi..
he sincerely - kahan hai shanti..?..kitna crowd hai.railaway annoucements..look do u find ny silence anywhere..
she smiled..
he - batao na..kaha hai shanti..

just den her train arrived...

she raised her hand for a hand-shake..
he pointed at himself lik do u want to hand-shake wid me..
she nodded giggling..
he - soch lo..agar mene hath pakad liya to kabhi nahi chhodta..
she laughed more n raised her hand again..
she - thnx for everything..
he smiled n shakes her hand wid his..
he - milenge..
she worriedl - fir se..??
he burst into laughter so did she..
both left hand of each other
still laughing...
she - bye..
n started moving back..
he too laughing wave her good-bye..retreating his feet back...

both turned at d same time..
smiling..
started walking in opposite directions 
...n left for deir respective destinies...

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Posted: 22 January 2012 at 3:12am | IP Logged
its faboulous yaar love conversation both have points really kiski side lo nahin kah sakte

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nice update
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Posted: 22 January 2012 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Hi misty
I lvu all u r FF
I hardly get time to reply
But I have read all u r FF me too feel sorry 4 not commenting cause m busy v busy so can u plzzz
Add me to u r PM list so that would be easy for me
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Posted: 22 January 2012 at 3:35am | IP Logged
sare points justified hai...kiske side loon samajh mein nehi araha hai...
thank u fr d lovely update...

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Posted: 22 January 2012 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tamanna1391

its faboulous yaar love conversation both have points really kiski side lo nahin kah sakte

thnxxx tammy dear... Tongue


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