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A...Day...with...U !!! MANEET FF epilogue - pg 75 (Page 43)

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by angelic_cute

cute nok jhok turns into fight 

nice update 



thnxx dear.. Tongue

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recap :
he - tum mujhe keh rahi ho..tum khud kitna sochti ho samne wale insaan ke bare me..mazak..insult..tum karo to thik..par wohi koi aur tumhare sath kare..to tumhe mirchi lagti hai...us ved ko tum aise hi dominate karti hogi..im sure..me ...me khud milunga us ladke se...jisse tum dekhne aayi ho..aur use kahaunga..ke tum se shadi karega..to pachhatayega zindagi bhar..barbad ho jayega...
...
saying so he started to walk angrily...
leaving geet alone wid tears..

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              Part 8


he walked angrily...
but he still wanted to shout on her...
he was not done yet...
he turned back angrily...

he - aur ye mat...
his words feded at dis sight of her...
his mouth fell right open watching her in tears...

he(to himself) - ro rahi hai...mar gaya tu ab..

he gulped hard...n ran back to her...
she was sheding tears mutely...
he shockingly - hawww...oyye..suuussuuunoo...ssunnooo..ro ro ro rororo rona ..rona rona mat..plz plzzz roro rona mat
she was still nuzzling her nose..wid tears in her eyes...
he - me.me..me mazak kar raha tha...
he checke his pocket for hanky..but he didn't hav..
he - mere paas hanky bhi nahi hai...
she quitely took out hanky from her purse...
he - tum plz rrona band karo..me mazak kar raha tha..suno tum..
he was hell scared wat if any1 vil see her cry n vil think he hav done sumthing wrong wid her...
just den a man walked near de...
d man looked at her n den at him...
he looked here n dere like nothing hapened..smiling idiotically...
d man gave him weired look n walked away..
he sighed - thnk god..chala gaya...
she wiped her tears n started walking..
he followed her - plz..dekho me mazak kar raha tha..suno na..
she stopped...
he - me sach me mazak kar raha tha...
he wanted to trun her towrds him to meet her eyes...
but he was hesitant to touch her...
he - aise mudo aise...haan..aise...aur mudo..aur mudo..aise aur mudo..aur mudo...
she meet his eyes
he - vapas lelo..wo ansu dekho fir se aa rahe hai..vapas bhejo unhe...
she calmed herself..to stop d tears...
he pleadingly - tumhe pata hai na me kaisa hun...me..me to kuchh bhi bol deta hun...hum dono etne der se sath me the toh...tum samajh rahi ho na..tum mujhe janti hona..me..kasam se...mere dil me kuchh nahi hai..me sirf majak kar raha tha..

she - bol dene ke baad sab aise hi kehte hai...
he confusingly - sab matlab..??
she - sab matlab sab...ved bhi...
he looked at her confused...
den thought for a min..n burst out into laughter...
she looked at him confuse n frowned...
he - achha suno..couples me to ye sab hota rehta hai..aur...
he again started laughing...
she was going to kill him now...
he laughing - mujhe laga..hehe..mujhe laga tum meri vajah se ro rahi ho...
he controlled his laugh - thnk god...
she tucke d loose strands behind her ear...

he - achha achha..mujhe batao..hum kis se jhagadate hai..??
she looked at him thinking wat is he asking...
he - batao na..hum kis se jhagadate hai..??
she - me kissi se bhi lad sakti hun..ruko dikhati hun...
saying so she started shouting..
she (to dat man who was looking at dem a min ago) - arre..oyye...edhar aao..edhar aao...
he got frightened...
he - tum kise bula rahi ho...
she - wohi jo hume ghoor ghoor ko dekh raha tha...
she again started shouting - abhi ke abhi edhar aao...kya ghoor ghoor ke dekh rahe the haan...
dat man got scared n started going faster...
he stopped her - arre..pagal ho gayi ho kya...tum kya kar rahi ho..
she - tum ne hi puchha na me kisse lad sakti hun..wohi dikha rahi thi ke me kisi se bhi lad sakti hun...
he - pagal..mene basically puchha..to basically answer dona...hum kisse ladte hai...??
she questioned back - kis se..??
he rolled his eyes...
she - mtlab..jisse humari soch nahi milti uss se..
he - wohi toh..aur hum kise ummeed rakhte humari soch ka manane ki..??
she looked at him catefully...
she - mujhe aisa lag raha hai jaise me school me hun..aur teacher mere oral exams le rahe hai...
he impatiently - bakwas band karo aur jawab do...
she - mujhe nahi pata..me etna nahi sochti..
he smiled...
he - me batata hun...apno se(he said genually)...jo apne hote hai na unse...
she listened to him carefully n thoughtfully...
he - jo log humare zindagi se kabhi door na jaye...ya jin logon ke door chale jane se hume taklif hoti hai na..hum unse ladte hai..
she - ho sakta hai..inme se tumhare dil me kaunsi feeling hai..??
he again got confused...
wat is he explaining to her..n wat is she saying...
goshhh...
dis galll
he confusingly - mere man me..mere man me aisa kuchh nahi hai na...
she - to fir bol kyu rahe ho...
he - tumhe manane ke liye...ved bhi to aisa bakwas karta hoga tumhe manane ke liye...
he said confidently...
she seriously - nahi...
his smile feded slowly slowly...
she - ved nahi hai ab meri zindagi me...
his smile feded completely...
while she lowered her eyes...feeling dat pain once again..
she smiled to herself n started walking...
he mutely followed her...
she - relationships me balance karna usse kabhi aaya hi nahi...bahot ladte hai hum har waqt...
he was listening to him thoughtfully n mutely...
she was opening up to him..n he didn't want to stop her...
he wanted her to pour her heart...
to throw away dat mask was fake attitude...dat lie..dat she is d most happiest 1...
...
she - me gussa ho kar chalne lagi..to wo bhi muh fer kar chala jata tha...bahot ladayiya...
she said sighing...
while he listened wid seriousness...
she - ruthna-manana..esme jo khushi hoti hai..wo kabhi samajh hi nahi paya...fir kuchh nahi..wo khud se kabhi call nahi karega..milega nahi...har bar mujhe uske pichhe pichhe jana padta...
he was understanding d pain in her voice...
he was actually mute for d 1st time...
she - galati uski ho..fir bhi mujhe hi manana padta tha...plz..plz..plz..sab me hi...
she smiled..wiping dat d layer of tear which just left by her eyes...
she - kab tak chalta aise...
she nuzzled her nose wid hanky not wanting to cry...
he walked closer to her...
he - fir..
she - fir kya...ek din mene muh fer liya...socha..basss..bahot ho gaya...ab aur nahi...wo bhi nahi aaya mujhe manane...
he sighed...
she smiled - jane do..chalta hai...
he raised his hand to put on her shoulder..but den held himself back...
he - listen..
she looked at him smiling - mujhe kuchh khaas farak nahi padta..
he - haan..lekin...
she - aur tum etne emotional mat hona plzz...
he - nahi me..
she smiled - aur mujhe..i really dnt need any sympathy ok...
he confused - me..??
she teased - haan..ladko ko aadat hoti hai na..ladki rone lagi to apna shoulder aage karni ki...ladki ro rahi rahi hai..do kandha...ladki ro rahi rahi hai..do kandha...ladki ro rahi rahi hai..do kandha...i can handle myself seriously...
saying so she checked d time again...
he was shocked of dis gal...
its actually impossible for him to understand dis gal..
she - bahot der ho gayi hume chalna chahiye..

saying so she started to walk...
he just looked at her walking..wid his shocking eyes...
she just poured her whole heart in front of him..
but she was as strong as b4 while walking...
like it doesn't matter for her anymore..
she actually amused him to d core

...

both on his bike...
wid him driving at d speed of 60..
as he was driving..
she suddenly shouted - stop stop stop..
he stopped - kya huva...
she - tumhara cell baj raha hai..shayad...
he - dikhao..
she immediately took out his mob from her purse 

[note - do not get confused..dat how she hav his mob...if u remember d story from d begining..in 2 or 3rd update..he gives his mob to keep in her purse saying..it may fall while driving..do dnt get confused]

he checked his mob...
she - kiska hai...
he - arre chhotu..meri batting baki hai wahan pe...
she hesitantly - if u dnt mind can i make a call...
he teased - kisse haan..ussi ko jisse milne aayi ho..haan haan...
she rolled her eyes...
she - phone karke dekh leti hun..ke vo aaya ya nahi..warna me fir se uss ke ghar jau..wo ghar band ho...
he - ohhk..tum call karo..i just b back..
she - tum kahan ja rahe ho..
he - i dnt wanna bcum kabab me haddi..
she rolled her eyes..
he laughed n left..

she took out d number given by her mom...n dialled...
but she was not getting it..
she tried again but no use..
she sighed n looked for him...
d sight of him put a smile on her face...
he was playing wid a small puppy...
she smiled n walked towrds him..
he noticed her..
he - kya huva..ho gayi baat..
she - nahi na..busy aa raha hai..
he teased - tum usse try kar rahi ho...aur wo tumhe try kar raha hoga...
she - mujhe lagta hai..mujhe ek akhari baar uske ghar jakar dekh lena chahiye..
he looked at her surprised..
she made weired face - wattt
he teased - ohh hoo..hmmm..tumhara etni koshish dekh kar mujhe aisa lag raha hai...ke tum usse haan keh dogi...
she took dat small puppy in her hands...
she teased him - kaise jaan lete ho mere man ki baat haan..
he rolled his eyes...
she - achha..wo sunchi..
he looked at her...
she - usne tumhe na keh diya..ya tumne usse chhod diya...
he put d puppy down...
she looked at him carefully..
he smiled...
he seriously yet smiling - mene hi keh diya usse...kaha chali jao baba..
she listened to him genually..
he mocking - mera kya hai..aisi 100 ladkiyan khadi kar sakta hun...
she smiled - aur..dekho ge ek ki taraf bhi nahi..
...
both looked at each other n started laughing...
it was more of a giggle..
but for sum reason dey felt to do so..

he - tumhe ek complement dena chahunga...
she smiled - me bahot pyari hasati hun..yahi na...
he smiled - nahi..
she looked at his knotting her eye-brows...
he smiled - tum jab hasati hona..toh bahot pyari lagti ho...
...
an excitement ran through her spine..

a smile..a blush..a confusion..a amusement..a surprise..a shock...everything seemed to form in dat single statement of him...
she had nothing to say...
n both...
...just kept looking at each other...
...wid unlimited emotions flowing in d air of new shade of LOVE !!!

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 22 January 2012 at 3:01am

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Fabulous update
me first Dancing Party
I think that boy is maan 
geet told her past
very cute this maan 
loved it


Edited by kahkashansakina - 21 December 2011 at 1:57am
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Maan playing with ...
& his words like kabab me haddi

Geet is    or Maan has no hanky so sad.
Nice update dear...
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lovely update
cont soon
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awesome
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thanks for updating this after a long time.

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