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A...Day...with...U !!! MANEET FF epilogue - pg 75 (Page 4)

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 8:44am | IP Logged
interesting concept
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 9:41am | IP Logged
congrats on new FF...
thanks for the pm...
cont soon...

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Loved the concept, can't wait for the update, conitnue soon.

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Interesting concept, waiting for updates...

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
lovly concept

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
CONGRATS on the new FF...Party

interesting concept...

waiting for it to start...

thnx for PM...

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               part 1


7:35am
delhi railway station

every where noise noise n only noise...

a old man was picking stuffs from ground...
people sum here n sum dere seeping dere tea..waiting for trains...
an middle aged lady running through crowd to catch d started train...

a train arrives...

" kabhi kabhi samajh nahi aata...
...kisi na khaas pal me...
...kaise kho jata hai MANN achanak..."

sum people talking on cells just arrived from trains...
doggies roaming here n dere unnecessarily...
an old couple sitting in a corner waiting for train to go back to deir native place...

" kaise khil jata hai...
...jane anjane se ehsaas...
...kuchh ajeeb sa lagne lagta hai..."

a gal waiting for sum1...her expression very well shows whom she is waiting for...
a couple sharing common ice-cream..suddenly strts running as dere train arrives...
a group of frnd..laughing giggling..cuming out of half stopped train...

" nata jood jata hai..
...ek nayi soch ka...
...mithasa rishta...
...kabhi na tut sake jo..."
 
a gal in her 20s...came from just stopped train...
walking fastly..making her way out of plat-form..just to get herself rid out of d crowd...
wearing a white-perfectly fitted top wid a dark dreen designery skirt till her toes...
a fancy belt to give perfect look to it...
small green n white dialmond ear-rings...
her whire milky skin was shining more in sun-light...
her straight hairs wid a beautifull belt hanged in it were shining in golden shade...
and a black belted watch giving her a perfect look...

...
sumhow made her way out...raising her hand..for any rikshaw to stop...
a rikshaw stopped...
gal - ville streets...??
as d rikhsaw-man nodded his head in yes..
she instantly grabbed herself in rikshaw...
n it started...
...
she stopped d rikshaw in middle...
just to ask where is d place she wants to go..
as d stranger gave her rough track..
rikshaw again started...
making his way further...

...**********...
...**********...
 
a boy in his 22s...
hit d fast cuming ball so hardly dat d fielders ran aftr d ball...
while he started running from stumps to stumps for d needed to runs...
d opposite team was still running behind d ball...
whiel he ran for his runs...
it was a 4...
he screamed in happiness...yesss
team - u alwz rock buddy...
boy - tell me sumthing new...
...
opposite member - match is not over yet dude...
boy - chal..nxt ball taak..chal...
d baller moved at his place...
boy - kitna baki jitne ke liye...
team - a ball..2 run..
boy - no tension guys..chal ball daal..

while a rikshaw just stopped beside dem...
...
gal came out of rikshaw n walked towrds d boys...
stood right behind him...
d baller did his work...
he was about to hit d ball..

wen she uttered - excuse me...

d sudden voice broke his concentration...
n d ball directly hit d stumps...

BOLD OUTTT

...
everything stopped for a moment...
her mouth went right open...
while he went in a state of shock for a min...
...
he looked up to meet her eyes...
whiel she looked at him still in shock n mouth open...
both looked at each other eye to eye...

...

...

thnq for welcuming my story wid all ur lovely comments...

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prve prt - introduction   N nxt prt -  part 2  

love
MISHTY



Edited by Angelic_mishty - 04 December 2011 at 2:56pm

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