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A...Day...with...U !!! MANEET FF epilogue - pg 75 (Page 18)

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its a real cute one!!!!!!
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             part 6

saying so she hanged...
she payed for d call n came out..
just den he reached to her...
he - garam garam club sandwitches..lo...
she - i dnt want it...
he - arre tum kha kar to dekho..muh me pani aa jayega...
she angrily - kaha na mujhe nahi chahiye...
he - kya huva..2 balls me 1 run bana na ho..aur ball wrong out de tab jaise gussa aata hai na...waisi shakal lag rahi hai tumhari...he joked...
she sighed trying to control her anger..
he - kisse baat kar rahi thi..ved se...
she lost now - vil u plz just shut up...
he was shut her real anger...
she - plz stop dis non-sense..plz...mujhe thodi si shanti chahiye...
saying so she walked out...
...
while he stood dere all alone...
wid his serious face...
watching her left..

...
dere was seriousness in her reaction..he knew dat...
sumwhere real anger too...
like sumthing bothered her...
he sighed...n looked down..
d moment his eyes fell on sand-witch...
he remembere dat she is hungry...
n he ran behind her...

...

she was walking angrily n fastly through d rush...
n was about to cross d road...
wen he reached her on his bike...

he didn't say a word n just looked at her...
she sighed n herself sat on d bike...
he drove off...

both reached PURANA QILA (delhi airforce air stripe)

she stood looking at d beautifull area..
while sat a litle far from her..watching d expressions of her face...
he knew...she was not staring at d beauty..
dere was sum serious thoughts playing in her eyes...
she was watching nothing but thinking sumthing...

she - kya ho raha hai..yahi samajh nahi aa raha...
he heard her speak more to herself...
he shouted - kiski baat kar rahi ho...?
she - me apni hi baat kar rahi hu...
he - mere khayal se to kafi thik chal raha hai...
he joked...
she - aisa tumhe lagta hai..or rather say..sabko yahi lagta hai...
he was playing wid a stone..but stopped hearing her reply...
he - matlab..
she - kya karna chahiye..wohi samajh nahi aata...
he - kis ke sath...
she - shall i speak..she asked annoyingly..
he - akeli..??
he again asked...
she - dat would be better...
he - as u wish...he laughed...

she sighed n again looked in d direction she was standing at 1st place...
he shook his head laughing...
he - tumhe pata hai..aisi jagahon par aane ka nuksan bhi hai..
she smiled...
she - hmm..aisi jagahon par aakar hum khudke bare me kuchh jyada hi sochne lagte hai..kafi phylosopfical pan jate hai...
he - oyyee..hume aisa bilkul nahi lagta...

saying so he started walking towrds her...
he - ye shayad tumhari prob ho...
she looked at him..
he reached to her...
he - prob is dat u r from mumbai..tumhe mumbai me aisi jagahen dekhne ko milti nahi na...wahan to jahan dekho buildings..noise..rush..log hi log...
he speaded his hands completely...
he - ye dekho..ese kehte hai...real nature..aur aisa jagahen banati hai is delhi ko aur bhi special...
she didn't speak...
he - esiliye..ye sab tum logon ko ajeeb lagta hoga..but for us..its quite natural...

...
she - tumhe kabhi bhi bechaini mehsoos nahi hoti...
she asked sincerely...
he smiled - never..
she - sure..??
he - sure matlab..100% sure...

she looked straight into his eyes...

she - to fir thodi der pehle chandni chauk me tumhe kya huva tha...

he laugh feded a bit...
he smile lowered..
like he was just caught...

he - kya huva tha...
she smiled at him...
she - tum hi kyu nahi bata dete ke kya huva tha...
his smile was litle more feded now...
he - chandni chauk me..umm..haan..tum crowd me kho gayi thi...
he said normally..
she - bass..etna hi..
he litle relucantly - haan..aur kya...
she looked at him  - me kahin kho gayi hu..esse tum bechain nahi huye the...
he - bechain...
he tried to take it as a joke..
he shook his head laughing...
he - nahi toh...tum bhi na..
she - me tumhe mil nahi rahi thi..esse tum pareshan nahi ho rahe the...
he - nah mujhe nahi huva..
he replied hurriedly...
she -  sach me..??
he - arre..tumhara mera kya rishta hai..?
she - me tumhe mil nahi rahi..ye baat tumhe sach me pareshan nahi kar rahi thi...
she asked amused..
such a lier...she thought

he was litle annoyed now..
he knew..he was tensed not having her...
but he didn't want to accept coz dat was like casual...
he felt protective..

he - koi jabardasti hai kya...
she - tum sach me bechain nahi huye the...
he - ek hi baat tum kitni baar sunna chahti ho..nahi huva..nahi huva..nahi huva
he said annoyingly...

while she smiled shooking her head...

she - kitne ziddi ho tum...haan...
he watched at her confused..
hav she decided to take out everything going on in his mind...

she - jo dil me hota hai..woh juban par kabhi nahi hota...jo bolte ho..woh dil me kabhi nahi hota...
he stared at her surprised...
she just read him like a open book..
its been just fews hrs dey met..n dey know each other like...
like ages...
he was wordless...to reply...

she continued wid same amusement - tum ek..baten dusri..aur soch me kuchh aur hi...
he sighed..feeling annoyed d way she was exactly showing him his mirror image...

she - hamesha ek khel chal raha hota hai...
he - kis ke sath..
she smiled - khud ke sath..
he had no words
rather say he didn't want to...

she continued - samne wale ke samne aoni aisi image bana dete ho ke..samne wala tumhare dil ke andar zak kar dekh hi na paye...
he - mujhe der ho rahi hai...
saying so he was about to leave..
but her words stopped him...
she - bhag rahe ho...
he looked at her wid lots of emotions running in his mind...
she smiled - bhag rahe ho na...
he sighed...
she - bataona..chandni chauk me..jab me tumhare sath nahi thi..tab tum bechain huye the...kya tha wo sab...

he opened his mouth to reply her...
but he had no words..
still he replied - kya laga hai tumne kab se..chandni chauk..chandni chauk..ek hi topic par adi ho..ok..mujhe pareshani huyi thi..huva tha me bechain..happy now...

she - nahi nahi..dnt finish d topic...
he - arre par tum sabit kya karna chahti ho..
she - tumhara jhoot..
he - wattt..excuse me..khabardar jo mujhe jhoota kaho tha..no way im a lier...
he replied angrily..
she smirked...
he litle slowly now - huyi thi mujhe taklif..huva tha me bechain...
she smiled looking away...
he - but but...but..dat was bcoz..tum meri responsibilty ho...esiliye me...
he sighed...
she looked back at him...
he - agar tumhe kuchh ho jata toh...
she watched his expressions...
he - i mean..mumbai ho ya delhi...mere sath koi b es tarah goom ho jata toh...toh..toh me aise ho bechain ho jata...
he sumhow complete his baseless statement...

she amused - wowww
he looked at her confused...
she - pehli baar hum ne kisi baat par same view banaya...
he - kis baat par...
she - mumbai delhi topic par..
he - impossible...hum dono ka same view..impossible..
she looked at him litle onfused...
she - arre..par subah coffee shop me bhi toh tumne kaha tha..ke humara view same huva karke...
he - wo mera opinion tha..mera decision nahi..
she smirked...
he more annoying - mujhe tumhare jaisi ladkiyan bilkul pasand nahi...

saying so he started to leave..
she made very confused face n followed him...
she - matlab...
he - matlab..nahi pasand..
she - tum kehna kya chahte ho..
he - tumhare nature ki...pal me kuchh to agle hi pal me kuchh aur...
she smiled - ohhh...
he - mujhe bilkul nahi pasand aisa nature...
she teased him - hm..to fir kaisi ladkiyan pasand hai tumhe..??
he didn't reply...
she - tum jiske paas gaye the..waisi wali..wo ajeeb...
he looked at her angrily...
while she smirked...
he - oyye..hello..dat was d 1st time..dats y..1st time me ajeeb hi lagta hai...
she - ohh..to 2nd ime me ajeeb nahi lagta...?
he looked away...
dats it..she caught him..yesss...
he - dusri baar...ough...
she reached his face immediately - dusri baar kya...
he - dusri baar wo ladki...
she - koi aur hi thi..
he looked at her confused n angry...dnt know wat to answer..
he - koi aur matlab..do u think of me a flirt...
she ignored - naam bataona uska..
he - kiska..
she - woh dusri wali ka...
he - ough..he was getting irritated d way she was teasing him..
he - naam me kya hai..naam jaisa naam hota..tumhara naam mera naam...heyy btw..tumhara naam kya hai...
she - dnt change d topic...jaldi naam batao..
he started walking back.. - naam me kya hai...
she followed - dekha dekha..mere bare me sab puchh liya..aur khud ke bare me kuchh bhi batana nahi chahte...
he kept quite..
she - i was right..u r a lier..a big lier..
...
he whispsred getnly - SUNCHI...
she - kya kaha tumne...
he repeated - sunchi...
she - ye kya hai...
he smiled - naam..
she walked towrds him expressionless...
she - kis ka..
he smilingly looked at her - dusri wali ka..
she looked at him shocked...
he smiled - but..my 1st true love..
...
she looked at him for a sec...
n started giggling..
he looked at her confused like wat just happened to her...

she repeated d name - sunchi...

n wid dat..she burst in laughter...
laughing n laughing n laughing like a mad...
not able to control d laughter in any way...

he made agry face...
he - isme hasne ki kya baat..mumbai naam dekhne ke baad pyar karte hai...
she sumhow controlle herself - nahi re..sorry haan..
he was yet not convinced..
she - nahi re..tum koi gf hogi ye mene socha tha..uske kuchh naam bhi soche..like antara..meghna...and all...but sunchi...wid dat she again started laughing like creazy...

he made more angry face..
she controlling knowing dats wrong...
he knew how difficult it was for her to control dat laugh..
but sumwhere he was getting annoyed...
she litle laughing..litle controlling d laugh - kaha mili...sunchi (she so much wanted to laugh) kaha mili...
he smiled - delhi me hi..
she smiled too 
he started walking nowhere lost in himself..

he - japanese thi woh..
she walked behind him - woh to me naam se hi samajh gayi...hmm.. toh kaisi thi..sunchi...
he lost in himself - mast thi..pyari pyari anhkhen..tomato ki tarah laal laal gaal..wo gulab ki pankhudiyon ki tarah uske oth...bilkul pari jaisi..
she smiled noticing him lost in himself...
he - me pehle jahan rehta tha na..wahan pe paas me rehti thi..kabhi kabhi dekhte the hum ek dusre ko...fir ek deen mulakat huyi...
he was telling so truthfully...
she was also lost sumwhere in d story...
she - kisi bahane se tum hi mile hoge..dnt lie..
he smiled at himself...
he - kafi jaan gayi ho tum mujhe..
she smiled - woh to hai..pyar pehle kisse huva...
he - dono ko eksath hi huva...
she - dats so sweet...awww

he smiled - par mujhse jyada use meri likhi huyi poems se pyar tha...
she was surprised...
she - kya..poems..tum kavitayen banate ho..kya baat hai yaar...
he - kyu..me kavita nahi likh sakta...
she - mene aisa thodi na kaha..i meant..she japanese..u indian..samajhne me thodi mushkil huyi hogi na...

he shook his head in NO...

lost in himself...
he - kavitey samajhi nahi jati...samajh jata hai ehssason ko..us apne pan ko jo kavita me chhipa hota hai..

she smiled wid dis new person wid so much different nature...

she - mujhe sunaoge koi...
she asked excitedly...

he just smiled n looked at d beautifull view ahead...
rather say lost in his rythm n music...
 
...

d winds started roaming litle more wildly..making beautifull sounds...
dere smiles...dere warm started to get mixed wid d rythm of d winds...
nature started to look more peacefull...more calm..more serene..more pure...
everything started to look more beautifull...
like atleast for sum moments...
but both forgot everything..
why she is here...
n wat she is doing...
he forgot everything..
his batting..his frnds...he was lost in d beautifull memory of his past...
while she got lost...
as she heard him sing...
...n his voice gave words to beautifull music of dose cold winds...

...

Dekho...
...chhodke...
...kis raste vo..jaate hain...

Saare...
...raste...
...vaapas mere dil ko..aate hain...

his melodious voice ran through her spine...giving her a very different n warming feeling...
she did feel d purity n innocence in his voice...

while he was totally lost in himself...
his own words made him remember wen he hav created dose words...

Please...

Nahin saamne...
 
Nahin saamne...
...ye alag baat hai...

Nahin saamne...
...ye alag baat hai...

she could feel d deepth of dos words...
like dere were not just words which he was uttering...
dey felt like memories spreading deir magic once again...
like d smell of beautifull flowers of eir emotions..
like d warm of deir togetherness...
dere was love..
pure love in his voice...
 

Mere paas hai...

Mere paas hai tu...
...mere paas hai...

Mere paas hai tu...
...mere paas hai...

his own words dragged him to dose moments...
when she was dere to listen to dese words..n give real meaning to it...
dose words were used to feel meanless to him aftr she left...
but 2day...
for sum reason...once again he hav uttered dose words...
for dis strange gal..

Mere saath hai...
... Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart ...
...mere saath hai...


both were trying to search broken string of d bind dey shared once..
she remembered her relationship wid ved..
once she loved him...
now..thngs r very different...
but still..d smell of dat emotion still haunts her sumtime in loneliness...

he remembered of dat strange relation he shared wid sunchi...
but now things r not same anymore..
she moved on her way..
n...to his way...
but still dose pretty eyes till stared at him in his dreams..


Tera naam maine...
...liya hain yahaan...

Mujhe yaad tune...
...kiya hai vahaan...

Tera naam maine...
...liya hain yahaan...

Mujhe yaad tune...
...kiya hai vahaan...

she still rememberes how dere lovely fights slowly turned into serious fights...
she alwz loved to b pampered..but he never did...
she would take him name again n again..
but wherever he is..he may b sumtimes misses dat dose calls of her...

he still remember...
everytime..he would make a poem..he would call her n show her...
n wen she would praise him..he feel like whole world is in his hand...

dose unmatured feeling of teenage...
however dey were...
but still dey teenage had sum magic...

Bade zor ki...
...aaj barsaat...

Bade zor ki...
...aaj barsaat...

suddenly it started raining...
very slow raining...
both looked at each other n laughed...
for sum reason..
both didn't feel like getting a shade for hiding..
dey wanted to get wet in dat beautifull slow n rythmic rain...
like it was d rain of deir old memories..showering on dem once again...

Mere paas hai tu...
...mere paas hai...

Mere paas hai tu...
...mere paas hai...

Mere saath hai...
... Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart ...
...mere saath hai...

both sat on a solid rock...
nature..d area..everything looked so beautifull...
on top of dat his pure n serene voice...
it all looked magical...
dey felt complete..aftr so long...
d battle going in deir minds for so many days..so many months..started to fed slowly slowly...
started to get washed by d rain of love...


Bichhad ki bhi mujhse...
...juda to nahin...

Khafa hai magar...
...bewafa to nahin...

Bichhad ki bhi mujhse...
...juda to nahin...

Khafa hai magar...
...bewafa to nahin...

things hav change...people hav changed...
dey r not to gether anymore...
but does dat mean..everything dey felt..everything dey shared...
watever it be..emotions..understanding..love..care..does dat all ended in fraction of sec...
we can forget people..but can we forget emtoions...?
can we throw dose feeling out of our heart...?
can we...??

we can get angry of d person we love...
but can we hate him...?
can we hate dat person till d height dat d person doesn't exist for us...?
can we...?

Mere haath mein hi...
...tera haath hai...

Mere haath mein hi... 
...tera haath hai...

though dey r not physically together...
but dere heart still know each other..
still beat for each other in loneliness...
dey try to make demselves so busy so dat dey vil not get time to listen to dose heart beats...
cause dey dnt want confront d truth...
dat dey feel...
dey still feel...
...dey still feel sumthing..sumwhere in dat heart...

Mere paas hai tu...
...mere paas hai...

Mere paas hai tu...
...mere paas hai...

Mere saath hai...
... Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart...
...mere saath hai...

slowly slowly rain stopped...
bringing dem bak to reality...
both looked at each other n smiled...
both were knowing wat was going in each others heart...
he knew she must b missing ved...
she knew he must b missing sunchi..

from where dey came...hwo dey meet...
n now ey here...
sharing deir memories wid each other...
life bcums so different sumtimes...
we do things unconditionally..unintentionally..unknowingly...
we just do it...without thinking much...

Mere paas hai...
... Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart ...
...mere paas hai...

Mere saath hai...
...  Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart ...
...mere saath hai...

Mere paas hai...
...  Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart ...
...mere paas hai...

n wid dat...
both started walking mutually..to d way dey want...
dey were walking with each other...

d music...d rythm..started to fed slolwy slolwy...
lower..lower...
n finally...it vanished...

no1 was following d other 1...
for sum reason ...
dey liked dis walk...
but didn't aceept...
neither dey needed or wanted...
dey just walked...

n left for deir track...

...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 04 December 2011 at 3:00pm

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nice update
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That was an emotional one!!! after their continuous masti all of a sudden itna emotions!!!it was great reading...

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Awesome update
Loved it very much..both are very sweet couple..
Do continue soon
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superb part
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continue soon

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awsome update dear...
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