Ok..so I did read something..even though its so old...but seriously !
First off...nice usage of words..nice story..and yes i do love how you play and jiggle with words...
but then again this is mere fiction...how many time do you think this really happens in real life...i meant the happy ending ! Half d tym it jz ends at crush...doesn't it ??
Never mind...nyc read.. !
Cheers,
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