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MG/Arhi FF-Suffocation Part 22 UPDT! pg31/ DEC 27 (Page 19)

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Posted: 12 November 2011 at 12:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by payalpari

Originally posted by Shopau

Originally posted by payalpari

awesome ...
what happen in the past ...
maan is really confusing if he loves her then why he is not accepting it damit ...
Hey Payal!
First of all thankyou for commenting and liking the updates Smile
Also I know my readers are getting a bit confused but U all will get to know about his behavior along with Geet. Geet will start figuring out why Maan is behaving like this and will make him confess his love soon.
Keep readingSmile
 
Thanks a ton once again
Lots of love
Shopau
u r welcome dear ...
just one more question where is maan's parents and other family members?
and with the talk between arnav and maan it was clear that maan loved geet 5 years back also but din't say it to geet bcz of some reasone if my guess is rigth then its bcz of his parents only... 
Ahh!!
Well you are reading the FF attentively Smile
I would say you are on the right trackWink One more thing-- HE STILL LOVES HERBig smile
OK OK no more relevationsWink
Keep reading
His Family would be revealed in the next updateBig smile
love
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Posted: 12 November 2011 at 1:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _mahi_

Hey darlin Hug
i read the updates last night Big smilebut couldnt  reply due to some personal issues lolLOL
sorryOuch
so yeah.. Tongue
loveliest updates hun!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed geet being shocked at maan's approvalShocked was lil shocking for meShocked coz even though she knows that maan doesnt love herConfused.. she still is in love with himTongue so she must be a lil happySmile but she was adamant to ask maan about his intentiosConfused.. oh well.. heheLOL .. im excited about the moments of MaaNeet Winkmore than ArHiLOL coz ArHi are falling in loveEmbarrassed but MaaNeet dont even know what is the real relationship between themWink..
n the jaadu hai nasha haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed... awww that was so cute..Day Dreaming
for a moment i thought maan will take geet in his arms Blushingand will express his loveEmbarrassed
but maan is maan lolLOL
geet being in the pool with him was just mind blowingClapClapClap.. cant imagine anything better than that before marriageStarStar
n maan asked chameli to call geet "bhabi" ShockedShockedwowwClap.. possessive in a way heheWinkWink
n wohooo ArHi planning a vacation wowwBig smile.. that sounds romanticEmbarrassed.. even though the families will be thereSleepy.. ArHi will get a chance to come closerWink ... mmm that is just tooo romanticBig smile.. n i m sure they will do something to bring MaaNeet together..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
thanks a lot for the beautiful updates sweetheart..Big smileBig smile
loved the promo as well.. ClapClap
n not to mention the pm you sent meEmbarrassed.. thanks bunches..Tongue
craving for more.. LOL
love Hug
Mahi    Embarrassed
Hey Darling
Honestly I am out of words Big smileEverytime I read your comments I am on cloud nine TRUST ME!Big smileBig smileBig smile Okay so back to the comment NO SORRY REMEMBERAngry he heLOL
Thanks (oh well no thanks) but still thks for likimg the updatesEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Regarding Geet being shocked well she never could imagine him saying yes to the marriage so thats why she's shockedShocked Also that was the only option left for her as she didn't want to get married to him unless she's sure tht he loves herEmbarrassed But the sametime loves him a lot and cannot think of anyone else than himEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
And yah! I loved the pool scene too... wanted to make it a little more passionate but thought it was too earlyTongue So next time would be a better oneEmbarrassed HOLIDAY on its wayWinkWink
And again no THankyou but stll u r always welcome honeySmile
Love
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Posted: 12 November 2011 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Why our sherni fight 4r her love wat will that idiot do... Being a girl i believe ki maan ko hard work karana chahiye to get geet...

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 4:31am | IP Logged
Waiting for nxt update

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shopau

Hey Darling
Honestly I am out of words Big smileEverytime I read your comments I am on cloud nine TRUST ME!Big smileBig smileBig smile Okay so back to the comment NO SORRY REMEMBERAngry he heLOL
Thanks (oh well no thanks) but still thks for likimg the updatesEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Regarding Geet being shocked well she never could imagine him saying yes to the marriage so thats why she's shockedShocked Also that was the only option left for her as she didn't want to get married to him unless she's sure tht he loves herEmbarrassed But the sametime loves him a lot and cannot think of anyone else than himEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
And yah! I loved the pool scene too... wanted to make it a little more passionate but thought it was too earlyTongue So next time would be a better oneEmbarrassed HOLIDAY on its wayWinkWink
And again no THankyou but stll u r always welcome honeySmile
Love
Shopau
awww... that is soo sweet of youEmbarrassed then stay on cloud nine..Big smile lemme get my ladder n will join you thereLOL
oh okey.. no sorry no thankyouEmbarrassed
oh yeah rightBig smile.. i totally forgot about their complicated relationship but LOL silly me!!Tongue
yeah i know that she loves maan a lotTongue n thts why i said that she must feel a lil happy somewhere deep inside her heartEmbarrassed
i know right.. it wasnt that passionate but anything about MaanEet is just lovely!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
n im sure yuh will give us many more of their intimate momentsEmbarrassed
update soon hunnieBig smile m dying to know about his familyBig smile
love yah Hug

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
i just love the way you've blended all characters in.. I prefer this arnav compared to IPKKND but i do miss our typical funny desi and cute Geet and Khushi.. :(
 
But what a great job.. superb :)

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 1:45pm | IP Logged

Part 19

Location: Handa Haveli; Time: 8:45 p.m;

The Handas along with Savitri Devi were busy planning for the wedding, when savitri devi heard Rano talking to RP.

Rano: Didi, najaane Savitriji kya soch rahi hongi' Geet istarah sabke saamne Maan se milne chali gayi'

RP: Tu fikar kyun kar rahi hai Geet samajdar ladki hai. Pareshaan mat ho.

SD: Rupinder theek keh rahi hai Rano.
Rano smiled embarisingly realizing SD had listened to their conversation.
SD: Hum toh Geet se bahut khush hain. Yeh toh uske sanskar hai ki woh sabko batah kar hi Maan se milne gayi, chhupke nahi.  Phir bhi agar aapko fikar ho rahi hai toh hum Arnav se kehte hain Maan ko phone kaarne ke liye aur undono ko yahan bulane ke liye. Dinner yahin kar lenge?

Rano: Ji!

Daadi went and told Arnav to call Maan and ask him to get Geet along with him to Handa Haveli and to tell him to have dinner with them.

***

Location: Khurana Mansion; Time: 9:00 pm;

Maan stood next to the pool smoking when his phone rang. It was Arnav.

Maan: Haan Chhote? He said rather irritated.

Arnav thought of teasing his brother hearing him sound so annoyed.
Arnav: I am really very sorry Bhai but I guess aapko apni iss extraordinary romantic date par fulstop lagana parega. He said with a naughty smile on his face.

Maan: What?

Arnav: What nahi Why pucchiye? Aur Why issliye kyunki unlike THE KHURANA family, Handa Family kaffi traditional hai. Aur agar aadhe ghante mein Bhabhi yahan nahi aayi toh bohot bari problem khari hone wali hai!

Maan: Theek hai, main Geet ko ghar bhejta hoon'

Arnav: Bhejta hoon nahi, Aap lekar aayiye unhe. Half an hour! Come soon!!!

Maan: Hmm. Bye.

Maan put the cigarette in the ash tray and moved towards his room. The room door was closed though not locked. He entered and went straight to the wash room. He took a quick shower and came out with a towel tied around his waist. The water droplets droped from his hair on to his chest and back making him look super sexy. He quickly put his cologne and was about to turn around to the dressing room  when he saw Geet standing in front of the mirror struggling with the zip of her royal blue colour kurti. She wore one of Annie's churidar which Chameli had got her. The zip was a really long one and was still open till the starting of her back curves. Her back's full view was exposed to his eyes. His hands itched to feel the milky white skin under his long fingers. The strong male scent reached Geet which had immediate effect on her senses making her thoughts go wild. Geet looked at Maan in the mirror and her fingers immediately stopped struggling. Maan's feet without his consent started walking towards her with both their eyes fixed on each other in the mirror. As he reached her he caught both her hands which were holding the zip on her back and slided those in her front, slipping his hands on her waist along with them.Geet inhaled a deep breath. Maan left her right hand and slowly caressed her waist till he reached the hook of the zip still not removing his intense gaze from her eyes' reflection in the mirror.

Geet tried her best to control her brain and tried explaining to him why she was in his room. His intense gaze along with the strong and sexy male scent was making her feel dizzy and she could already feel some wetness between her thighs.
Geet: Woh main'
But she stopped as she felt him pressing her lower back just above her dangerous curves using his knuckels as he held the zip in his hands. Maan bent down and whispered in her ear.

Maan: Just shut up! maine tumse kucch puchha nahi hai.  He said in a really husky voice while pressing a little more on the same spot which made Geet close her eyes. He slowly pulled up the zip along the mid line of her back putting a little pressure using his knuckles. As he pulled the zip up he could feel her shivering in his hold. And everytime he put pressure or slowly massage with the back of his hand, on her sensitive back, she pressed her lips together to not let the moan escape her mouth. He closed the zip and bent forward again finding Geet's eyes still closed and whispered.

Maan: Get ready! Humme aadhe ghante mein tumhare ghar pohochna hai.
Geet caught the edge of the dressing table in order to support her body weight the moment he left her. He went in the dressing room to get ready leaving her breathing heavily and aroused!

***

Location: Handa Haveli;

Even though the Handas had about 10 servants just for the kitchen work, Rano was a passionate worker when it came to working in the kitchen. RP had always been much more social and outgoing whereas Rano still loved to take care of the household work. As Arnav entered the kitchen he found Khushi helping Rano in serving the delicacies in an extremely inviting manner. 

Rano: Arre Arnav Beta tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Hum toh bahar aahi rahe the?

Arnav: Aapse cooking training lene aaya that Aunty? Aaj aapke haath ka khana khakar na mujhe yakin hogaya hai ki aap world ki best cook ho.
Arnav said while looking at Khushi. Though he was talking to Rano he was constantly looking at Khushi, unknown to Rano. Khushi could feel his eyes on her but deliberately ignored him to the best of her capabilities. She knew he was there for her and smiled inwardly.

Arnav: Par lagta hai aapke paas toh already ek assistant hai.
Khushi shot a glare at him and he winked at her giving his cheeky smile.

Rano: Abhi tak toh tumne sirf snacks khaye hain, abhi se itni taarif? She said smiling at him.

Khushi: Maska lagaaya ja raha hai Maasi, Phasna mat.
She said smirking.

Rano sighed smilingly and patted Arnav's cheek. Rano: Always a charmer!
She smiled and left the kitchen.

Arnav: So Madame Uncionsious!
Kitchen mein baithi baithi snacks hi banakar khush hoti rahogi Ms Khushi Unconsious, ya phir dessert ka bhi koi intezaam hai.

Khushi: Haan Haina! Kaju katri hai, rasgulle hain, milk cake hai aur Jalebiyan'
She said superexcited but stopped seeing Arnav looking at her his eyebrows raised up and and a smirk on his face.
Khushi: Wait a minute! Are you making fun of me???

Arnav: Un huh! No I m not making fun of you. Main toh tumse sirf itna pucchna chahta tha ki tum Bhai aur Geet ki, I mean apni Dids ki shaadi ki date fix hone par hi itni khush hoti rahogi ya phir aage ke plan ke bare mein bhi socha hai tumne?

Khushi: Aage ka plan? Matlab? She asked with a cute little confused face.
Oh God he could have just kissed those pouting lips right now! Hmm.

Khushi: MATLAB??? Khushi said jerking Arnav out of his thoughts.

Arnav: Haan??  Haan! Matlab ki Bhai aur Geet ko 2 ghante nahi hue akele mille hue aur in ghar walo nein aise chehre banaliye hain jaise ki woh ghar se bhaag gaye hon.

Khushi: Haan woh toh hai'

Aranv: Woh toh hai KYA? Kucch karna nahi chahiye humme?

Khushi: Ha Ha Ha! Joke tha ye? Kya karenge hum?

Arnav: Arre idhar aao yaar! He whispered his plan in Khushi's ear and her facial expressions changed from being sleepy and non nterested to being curious, to being excited and then to be on the verge of shouting out of happiness and excitement.

Khushi: Yipeee!!! Khushi shouted on the top of her voice with her hands up in the air.
Arnav made a face like "yeh toh gayi kaamse" Ha Ha!

Arnav: Paagal ho gayi ho tum? Ghar walo ko invite kar rahi ho plan fail karne ke liye?
Khushi shook her head for a no cutely.

Arnav: Ab chalo Bahar!

Next: Arnav meets Geet Officially!!!Smile
           Vacation plannedBig smile
 
Plz Plz Plz press like button and do comment Big smile Most of my readers aren't commenting or likingCry Please it would be a great motivation if you could atleast write a one linerSmile
 
 
 
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Edited by Shopau - 27 November 2011 at 10:40am

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
nice update dear...i just don't get to understand maan in their first meeting i thought maan really loved geet but seeing him now i'm not sure...maybe something behind it...please continue soon!

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