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MG/Arhi FF-Suffocation Part 22 UPDT! pg31/ DEC 27 (Page 17)

Shopau Senior Member

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged

Part 15

Location: School Of Architecture, Delhi; Time: 12: 45 pm;

There was a sudden knock on the door and they realized that someone is trying to open the door.  Khushi smiled thinking finally she would be out of the locker room. She was about to respond and let the authorities know about her presence when she felt a sudden pull in the other direction. Arnav dragged her in the shower and closed the curtains.

Khushi: Kya kar rahe ho? She said so in a high pitch, astonished by his behavior.

Arnav: Shhh! Apna mooh band rakho. Khud toh college join karne se pehle hi nakali jaogi, saath hi mujhe bhi nikalvaogi.

Khushi:  sorry! She pouted like a little cute baby.


Sweeper: sirji, yahin se awaaz aarahi thi.

Dean: par yahan toh koi nahi hai.

Sweeper: main sach keh raha hoon sir' kissi ladki ki awaaz thi.

Dean: tumhare kaan baj rahe hain. Boys locker room mein se ladki ki aawaz kaise aayigi?

Sweeper: Sir, kahin bhoot-pret ka chakkar toh nahi?

Khushi couldn't control her laughter and burst into a laugh. But just then Arnav kept his hand on her mouth. But the dean and the sweeper were able to hear the sound of her laugh.

Sweeper: sssiiirr, mm..main keh rr..raha tha na bbb'bhut'bhutani.LOL

Dean: Shutup! Aur jao woh shower room mein chek karo koi hai toh nahi.

Arnav and Khushi stared at each other hearing this. The sweeper was approaching them and they had to think quickly. Khushi's mind was blank. Fear was visible on her face. What if the Dean finds her here in the boys room. She was not getting this admission for sure. Her dreams, career, reputation ' everything was at stake.  

The sweeper started opening the curtains. Khushi closed her eyes tightly. Just then she felt all of Arnav's body weight on to her self. Her back pushed further into the wall with Arnav towering on to her. He pressed himself further onto her in order to hide himself along with Khushi as much as possible. Khushi felt something on her belly. It didn't took her long to figure out it was his manhood. She fisted on to his black and red jersey feeling shy. Her breath was uneven and even her best try of not blushing could not hide the tomato red colour on her cheeks.

The sweeper (shopau names him "kabab mein haddi") was too scared of opening the curtain. He opened it half and then just left it the way. He ran back to the locker room door and told the dean that no body was there. The dean and the sweeper left unlocking the locker room door.

Arnav slowly moved away from her and noticed how she still clutched on to his t-shirt, her eyes closed and her rosy cheeks. Wait a minute! Was she blushing?Embarrassed He couldn't help but smile. Everytime he noticed his affect on her she looked too cute. But he liked to tease her more. She looked even cuter with her cute pout that she made when annoyed with him.

Arnav: Ajeeb ho yaar tum?

Khushi snapped open her eyes and left his t-shirt immediately. Khushi: Kya?

Arnav: Aur nahi toh kya? Tum do dino mein mujhe do baar mil chuki ho par dono baar galat jagah par.

Khushi: excuse me? She said so frowning with her eyebrows shooting up.

Arnav: Kabhi tum mujhe kissi aur ke 'bedroom' milti ho toh kabhi kissi ke 'shower room' mein!

Khushi looked down embaressed. 
Arnav: I wonder tum agli baar mujhe kahan milogi? He said so smirking at her. Khushi was too surprised at his question.

Khushi: Shutup! She pushed him away and walked outside away from him hiding herself. Or should I say hiding her 'blushing' self.


Khushi reached the registrar's office and completed her formalities. She then called Geet to ask her till what time would she be free?

Geet: Khushi I'll reach there in like 10 min. tu mujhe gate par hi milna.

Khushi: ok Di. Bye!

Geet: bye!


Location: Khurana Mansion; Time: 3:30 p.m;

Arnav returned to the mansion all geared up to get everything finalized. According to Daadi and his plan, they were to leave for the Handa haveli in the evening for the wedding date to be fixed. But nothing at home seemed to be a house where a wedding was to take place. He saw Maan sitting on the sofa reading a business magazine. He went towards him.

Arnav: Hi Bhai, how was your day?

Maan: Good! He said so still looking in the magazine.

Arnav: Aaj hum teeno saath mein lunch karne wale the na? toh Daadi aur aapne lunch kar liya kya?

Nakul came out with a glass of water for Arnav.
Nakul: Maan sir ne toh kar liya' par Daadima mana kar rahi hain.

Arnav: Kyun? Confused
Maan turned the page of the magazine behaving as if nothing of his concern was being talked about.Sleepy

Nakul: Woh Maan sir ne sham ko Handas ke yahan jaane se mana kar diya hai.
Arnav shocked looked from Nakul to Maan and literally shouted Kyaaa????ShockedShocked

Maan looked up at Arnav and Arnav swallowed and gave a cheeky smile to him.Big smile
Arnav (self thought whispering with frown on his face): Gayi bhais pani mein!!!

Maan: Kuchh kaha tumne?Dead

Arnav: OuchNahi Bhai, I mean haan bhai. Woh main keh raha tha ki main Daadi ko khana khilakar aata hoon. I mean, mein koshish karta hoon.

Maan: Hmm.  (Looking back at his magazine.)


Arnav entered Daadi's room which tray of food and a glass of juice. Daadi sat on the bed wearing a offwhite saree with all her jewels removed. She looked extremely sad. Arnav bent down and looked at her face.

Arnav: Daadi?
Savitri Devi looked up at him and asked: oh ho! Tu hai?

Arnav: Haan toh aapko kiska intezaar tha?

Daadi: Maine socha Maan hai.

Arnav: uh hun' bhool jau. Hitler ko kisiki bhook pyaas se koi matlab nahi. Aur aapko koi naya idea nahi aata?LOL Ab toh Hitler ko bhi pata hai ki aap natak kar rahi ho. Issiliye nahi aaye aapko khana khilane ke liye.

Daadi looked the other way in attitude.

Arnav: toh ab uss kathor dil hitler ko chhoro aur iss bhavuk hriday(dil) wale pote ke saath khana khao.Big smile

Daadi: Mujhe nahi khana!

Arnav: oh ho! Daadi'
He sat down on the bed and started feeding daadi. Though Daadi tried avoiding, she finally started eating.

Maan came in and saw them both eating happily. He stood at the door and smiled while observing them both. Suddenly Daadi saw him standing there. She immediately tried to cover up.

Daadi: woh toh tu itni zid kar raha haina, issiliye main kha rahi hoon.
Arnav smiled. Daadi: Agar tu yeh na kehta na ki mere bina tu nahi khayega, toh main kabhi na khaati. Arnav gave a confused look.Confused

Arnav: Huh? Maine aisa kab kaha?LOL
Maan smiled further more understanding their drama.Smile

Daadi whispered to Arnav: Maan dekh raha hai iss taraf.
Arnav: Oh shoot!

Maan sighed and went off. Arnav noticing it sighed a relief. He turned back to Daadi and continued.

Arnav: Dar ti ho? Aap bhi?LOL

Daadi: tu nahi darta?

Arnav: main toh chhota bhai hoon par aap toh Daadi ho?

Daadi: Arre uss Hitler se kaun nahi darta? Arnav: ha ha! Daadi aapne Bhai ko hitler bola.

Daadi: Filhal yeh socho ki usse shaadi ke liye manaye kaise? Shaam ko shagun lekar jaana hai Handa haveli. Kare toh kya kare?

Maan: Kuchh karne ki zaroorat nahi hai.Dead
He stood at the door with straight face and arms crossed across his chest.

Next:Maan's final decision & Geet in KM
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Note: Maaneet's past will take some time to be revealed so that the FF moves at a fast pace. please wait for just some more updates Smile

Edited by Shopau - 03 November 2011 at 5:30am

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-Zara- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
i loved this arhi part! lololol

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
great update and great name Hitler Singh Khurana

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komlika IF-Rockerz

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Awesome Clap

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 5:22pm | IP Logged

loved the update...

thanks for the pm..:)

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 5:31pm | IP Logged
awesome part sweetheartClapClap
loved the ArHi proximity..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed khushi blushed aww... that was so cuteTongue
really loved this updateStar.. specially the bhootni part haha ROFL that was so funnyLOL
MSK is defo a hitlerWink hahaha loved the bond between dadi and arnie.. that was sooo sweetEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
thanks a lot for the pm hun.. Hug

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
awesome... superb ...

thnx 4  d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Awesome update

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