Originally posted by a little faith
Farah,
I loved how you edited that opening sequence, with Arnav as those light flash, those red waves, like his mind those bright sparks in and amongst all that volatile temper, as you build up to that moment @0:14 and her eyes which you layer with those lyrics,
teri nazrein ek darpan. Excellent.
I loved the contrast for
mann ki yeh khabrein ek pal chin as she closes her eyes, and he opens his, building up to that moment when finally their eyes
speak @0:31 pinpoint perfect at that undulation of the singer's voice, and that sentiment
Adharon ne kuch na kaha re then as his eyes begin to pay her attention @0:38
Naino ne focusing his intensity, getting up,
keh diya. Excellently done!
I loved that effect @0:54 for the cross over from the female singer to the male, that slight jerking movement too in the scene, accentuating the whole moment.
I like the choice of scene @1:20, for
Gummsumm gummsumm rehne wali with Khushi's reflection in his window, unaware of his sight upon her, Inspired!
You caught that note, that smallest of lulls in the song @1:51, which you layer
rutt aayi hai as they collide, very beautifully done. I loved how that instrumental portion fitted so well with the scenes, those flowing sounds as her duppatta caresses him, @2:18, then @2:30 as those strings come in to enhance awkward and unknown feelings. Nicely done.
I loved, JUST LOVED that moment you created @2:40 for
Gupchup gupchup dil mein aaya , Khushi asking with all her heart, love, life and light, as Arnav comes into the frame, her eyes closed, she can not see that he is that means to all that she desires. Just wonderful! THat sequence for
sajna swaang rachaiya re from 2:41 to 2:43 was elegant, which you continue on for
Pal pal har pal jiski chaya apna paar lagiya re finely done.
I liked that moment @3:45,
Naino ne keh diya, an echo of the beginning of the song and your vm, but layered with history more intense, as the singer sighs and yearns, expressing those movements in both. Excellently done.
Farah, excellently composed and crafted. I loved it. WIth love Sabah
Oh my gosh! Thank you so much for such an awesome reply. I am soo happy! 😳 You've really picked up on all those moments that I kept on editing and re-editing JUST to get it right on the beats, thank you! Your reply is amazing, you've taken so much time to analyse the whole video and well, it's really made it worth my while to make it 😃 So glad you enjoyed it Sabah, much appreciated 👍🏼.
