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Mera Phela Phela Pyaar MG ff On Hold (Page 64)

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Posted: 12 March 2012 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Nice update
Kahi prithvi, omi aur Naina geet ko India beje ne ka plan toh nahi bana rahe Hinal (my thought)
Update soon
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Posted: 18 March 2012 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
awesome part

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hey
gr8 part..
cont,sooon
 
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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 7:12am | IP Logged
Part 12

London,
The next morning as Geet came down after getting ready she saw Prithvi shouting on the phone n got really worried as Prithvi never shouted n if he was shouting there must be something serious.

After Prithvi finished his call he went to Geet n said "Geet mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai"

Geet "Bhai pheli aur akhri baar mera naam Drashti hai aur Geet nahi. Aur agar aapne phirse woh naam bola toh main aapse baat nahi karungi"

Prithvi "Acha baba sorry. Ab chal mere saath mere study main"

Geet "Theek hai" n they went to his study.

Prithvi "Drashti ab tumhari jaan khatre main hai aur main tumhe yaha nahi rehne dunga. Tum aur Pari wapas India ja rahe ho aaj raat ki flight se aur waha pe tum Drashti ke naam se hi rahogi. Maine sab intazam kar ke rakha hai tum logo ke liye aur tum log London tab tak wapas nahi aunge jab tak woh criminals ka case khatam hojata. Aur mujhe koi behas nahi chaiye"

Geet "Bhai main nahi ja rahi wapas. Aap jante hai waha kya huva tha phir bhi..."

Prithvi "Drashti mujhe pata hai ke tumhare liye yeh asaan nahi hai aur na hi Pari ke liye lekin ab uss hadse ko 5 saal hogaye hai Drashti aur tum ab agae bhi badh chuki ho lekin abhi mere liye tumhari safety ki parva hai. Isiliye tum aur Pari India ja rahe ho bas" n left the study.

Geet closed her to stop the tears which were coming to her eyes remembering that incident but she controlled it n left to her room to pack her bags.

In the evening after Geet n Pari had packed n were ready to leave Naina came n hugged them n told "Dont worry sab theek ho jayega" n patted their cheeks.

As Prithvi came to hug them Geet went from there making a excuse n Prithvi felt very bad but he didnt show n hugged Pari  told her to take care n not worry about anything.

Geet strictly told Prithvi n Naina to stay at home n only Omi to leave them at the airport. After reaching Geet kissed Omi n told him bye n checked in n after sometime they boarded the flight.

As Omi was driving back he hit the break as the signal was red n as he did so there was a blast.

Flight,
Geet was feeling very restless as if something wrong was going to happen n she felt guilty that she didnt even hug Prithvi bcoz she was angry on him to send her back to India.

London,
Prithvi n Naina rushed to the hospital as soon as they got the news that Omi's car had blasted.

As they reached they saw Omi in ICU n the doctors were rushing n they saw that his whole body was burnt. The doctors then came out after 10 mins n said "We're sorry. We couldnt save him n his face is fully burnt."

Prithvi couldnt believe it n went in n pulled Omi n said "Omi dekh bohut hogaya mazak ab tu chup chap uth ja. Dekh agar tu abhi nahi utha na toh main Drashti se bol dunga ke woh tujhse shaai na kare" but he didnt get up.

Naina rushed to Prithvi n held him back n said "Prithvi sambhalo aapne aap ko. Agar aap hi aise tuth jaenge toh Drashti ko kaun sambhalega haan???"

Prithvi turned n hugged him n wept very badly. After a few mins he broke the hug n said "Main Drashti ko kaise batuanga yeh???"

Naina "Prithvi Drashti ko India pochne do uske baad hum sochenge ke hum kaise usko batayenge. Theek hai phele chalo hum doctors sebaat karte hai ke hum body ko kab claim kar sakte hai???"

Prithvi "Haan theek hai chalo" n held her hands tightly n they left to meet the doctors.

They talked to the doctor n talked n then they did all the final rituals.

India,
As soon as the flight landed Drashti switched on her mobile n called Omi but he was not picking up the call n then she called Prithvi who picked it up.

As she was talking she came out of the airport with Pari after collecting the luggage. Prithvi was talking about everything n trying to delay in informing her about Omi's death. Naina pressed Prithvi's hand to support him n he took a deep breath n said "Drashti mujhe tumhe Omi ke baare main kuch baat karni hai"

Geet "Haan bhai main bhi aapse abhi puchne wali thi ke Omi kyu mera call receive nahi kar raha??? Woh theek toh hai na???"

Prithvi "Drashti actually huva yeh ke... Jab woh tumlogo ko chod ke wapas ghar araha tha... tab uska...acc...accident hogaya aur...woh nahi...nahi bacha"

Geet "Bhai aap bhi Omi ke saath rehke acha mazak kar lete ho lekin mujhe yeh mazak bilkul bhi pasand nahi aaya"

Prithvi "Main mazak nahi kar raha Geetu" Geet was shocked hearing it as she knew Prithvi would never joke for long with her n hearing this news she just fainted.

As she was about to hit the floor two hands grabbed her n held her. Pari who saw Geet fainting took the phone from her hand n said "Hello..."

Prithvi "Pari Geetu ko kya huva??? woh theek toh hai na???"

Pari "Nahi bhaiya Di toh behos hogayi hai. Kya huva bhaiya???"

Prithvi "Nahi Pari Omi nahi raha. Main tumhe sab baat main bataunga phele tum Geetu ko ghar leke jao aur doctor ko phone kardo jaldi aur ghar pochte hi mujhe call karna"

Pari "Theek hai bhaiya" n cut the call n went to the man who had held Geet n said "Excuse me kya aap mere help kar sakte hai Di ko car tak le jane main plz"

The man nodded n carried Geet in his arms n took her to where a car was waiting for them n said "Kya main aapki koi aur madat kar sakta hu???"

Pari "Thank u for ur help n can u plz call a doctor mujhe yaha koi doctor nahi pata"

The man nodded n called a doctor n told Pari's address after she gave him a paper with their address n told the doctor to reach there n then he followed Pari's car in his bike.

London,
Prithvi "Naina main kya karu??? Main India ja sakta hu abhi kyuki yeh case chal raha hai??? Aur waha Geet kis halat main hogi aur Pari woh sab kaise sambhalegi yeh sab???"

Naina "Prithvi tum shaant ho jao. Drashti theek hojayegi aur Pari ke saath Raj hai na woh kal hi India pooch raha hai. Hum usko bol dete hai ke woh unke saath hi rahe jab tak sab theek na hojaye"

Prithvi "Lekin Naina woh dono waha aaj toh akeli hai na"

Naina "Prithvi tum abhi kuch nahi kar sakte kyuki agar tum abhi flight loge toh bhi kal hi pochoge. Plz tum shaant ho jao kya Drashti ko acha lagta agar woh tumhe iss halat main dekhti toh??? Nahi na toh sambhalo aapne aap ko"

India,
Pari n Geet reached the flat n the man again carried Geet while Pari brought in the luggage n the doctor arrived in 5 mins n he checked Geet n said "Woh kisi shock ke wajhe se faint hogayi hai. Minae unhe ek seductive de diya hai woh ab 2 ghaante ke liye soyegi uske baad unko khana khila dena aur main kal aake unko check karunga"

Man "Thank u doctor"

Doctor "Koi baat nahi mr. khurana. Ab main chalta hu aur main kal aake inko phir se check karunga"

Maan "Ok doctor. Chailye main aapko neeche tak chod aata hu"

Pari in the meanwhile changed Geet's dress. Maan came n said "Acha main chalta hu aur yeh mera no. hai agar koi problem ho toh tum mujhe call kar sakti ho." n patted her  cheeks n left.

Khurana Mansion,
As Maan entered the Mansion he went to his room n pulled open a drawer n took Geet's pic n said "Geet mujhe kyu laga ke aaj tum yahi kahi thi??? Aur jab maine uss ladki ko pakada toh mujhe kyu laga ke tum mere baho main ho. Kahi tumhi toh woh ladki nahi thi??? Maine tume panch saal se nahi dekha lekin mujhe kyu laga raha hai ke woh ladki tum hi thi"

Flat,
After 2 hours Geet woke up n rub her eyes slowly n remembered the news Prithvi gave her but she didnt react n she went to the washroom n freshened up n came out to see Pari sleeping on the sofa. She carressed her face n then went to the balcony n stood there thinking about her moments with Omi.

As she was lost in her thoughts she felt a hand on her shoulder n she turned n saw Omi standing there. She smiled seeing him n said "Omi tum theek ho na dekho na Bhaiya kya bol rahe hai ke tum nahi rahe."

Seeing Omi not replying to her she said "Omi plz tum bolo na kuch bolte kyu nahi??? Theek hai main tumse koi baat nahi karungi" n turned away from Omi.

As she turned back to see what Omi was doing she saw no one there n felt pain in her heart.

She went inside n pulled a blanket over her head n slept off to keep all the thoughts away.

Next morning,
Geet woke up n prayed to babaji n freshened up n went n sat near the window. Pari entered her room after 5 mins n she felt like crying seeing her Di in this condition. She was looking like a lifeless soul n her eyes were blank n there were no emotions on her face. She took a deep breath n went n kept her hand on Geet's shoulder n said "Di chalo aap breakfast karlo. Phir doctor arahe hai aapka check up karne"

Geet "Mujhe kuch nahi khana Pari. Tum mujhe todhi der ke liye akela chod do Pari plz aur mujhe kuch nahi huva toh doctor ko bulane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai"

Pari just left the room n as she went to the living room she broke into tears n called Prithvi n told him everything n Prithvi told her to call the doctor n tell everything that has happened n he will try to come to India as soon as possible.

Precap - 
Geet in pain.
So here is Part 12

hope u all like it *fingers crossed* 

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Love,

Hinal

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Hey guys Im back after my exams.

So u will all get regular updates. Ok now this is a shock for many people I know but it is needed very much n now that Maaneet have met though Geet was not in her senses but now u will see more Maaneet scenes. Plz do wait for the updates.

Love,
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poor geetCry

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omi dead geet unconscious maan restless do next soon

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