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mjht revisited 3. last part /page 69 (Page 17)

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 7:20am | IP Logged
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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Beautiful update dear
loved Mayur Moments
sweeet part
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 9:43am | IP Logged
u r just too gud...Big smileClap
i read the last 3 parts just nw...n i luvd reading it..Embarrassed
GOD..i wish is ka adha bhi MJHT mein dekhatay...pr nahi they didn't showed a single scene like this...DisapproveOuch
well...SOOO thank u 4 writing this...EmbarrassedClap
Luvd it...n nw they r opening up...Embarrassed
i really wanna read next...Do continue soonBig smile
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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 9:50am | IP Logged
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PART 9

 continued

"....mere wajah se tumhaare kaam par bura asar pade yeh mujhe bilkul pasand nahin hain by god!"

she glared at him.

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"tum sach mein nahin jaanthi ki tum bol kya rahi ho...nupur main aisa kya bada kaam kiya hain in teen saalon mein ? Jo bhi kiya hain sirf isliye ki main sab kuch ...tumhe jaanna hain ki main kyun itna kaam kartha tha? kaise maine kaam ke saath saath MBA bhi kiya? "

he pulled her next to him. She fell on the sofa and was surprised to see him so upset.

"mujhe aur koi chaara nahin tha nupur. Agar main padhai nahin kartha, agar main kaam nahin kartha, main apne aapko 24 hours busy nahin rakhtha, tho main paagal hojaatha. Meri zindagi main koi maqsad nahin tha. Apne liye kuch nahin -

"mayank.." she interrupted aware she had unlocked whole range of suppressed emotions. He continued not heeding her interruption.

"agar main kaam nahin kartha tho mujhe tumhaari yaad aathi thi, main office se ghar pahunchtha tho tumhaari kami mehsoos hothi thi. Tho main kya kartha? Padhai! Tum hamesha se mujhpe hasthi aarahi ho na ki mera pehla pyar kitaabein hain! Tho main unike paas jaatha tha. Kabhi apartment mein itna akela lagtha tha ki gussa aatha tha. Kyun main tumhaare saath nahin gaya.meri zindagi mere liye jaise punishment thi nupur. Aur tumhe tho pata haina mujhe punishment ki aadat bilkul nahin thi."

He smiled grimly. his voice was shaking when he spoke of his time without her. Nupur was shocked to hear him voice out his pain. He stroked her cheeks gently and looked at her as if he couldn't get enough of her.

"tumhe kaise batao nupur. Kabhi kabhi yakeen nahin hota tha ki tum mere saath nahin ho, raasthe mein jaathe jaathe has letha tha aur log mujhpe shayad hasthe the.office mein, class mein sab jagah tumhaare shadow jaise mujhe follow kartha tha. Aur neend nahin aathi thi nupur. Main darr tha tha sone se. Kitne baar us accident ka sapnon se darr ke utha hoon...first year jab main yahaan se gaya tho..."he swallowed a lump,

" sirf accident hi nahin . Us ke baad ke time ka bhi. Maa- maa kabhi bhi mujhe old nahin dikhi thi us se pehle..tumhaare saath saath maa ki smile main mujhe kami nazar aayi. Maine kabhi maa ko itna tootthe hue nahin dekha tha. Jab mere dad humein chodke gaye the tab bhi maa ko mere bare mein itne pareshaani nahin hui thi. Gunjan -maybe wo mujhmein tumhe bhi dhoondne lagi thi. aur tumhaare dad jiska guilty chehra aaj tak meri dimaakh se nikal tha hi nahin. Sab...dia benji sab...uday bhi.. "

He stooped to take a breath.the quiver in his voice had by now increased. It was as if he was reliving the whole time he was alone... Nupur sat still taking in all words- said and unsaid- she knew if she stopped him now he would never speak again about that time..main kya boloon? main kya boloon ki uski dard kam hojaaye.

"mayank , bhagwaan ko pata hota hain ki hum kitna dukh seh sakthe hain. Us se pata tha ki tum sab ko sambhal sakthe the, sambhal sakthe ho."

"maybe. Tumhaare aur bhagwaan ki zyaada banthi hain shayad. Mujhe sambhalne waala kaun tha? Gunjan ne mera bohot khayal rakha par pata nahin kyun nupur tumhaare ilaawa main kisi aur ke saamne dil se baath karne mein hesitate kartha hoon...par ismein shayad meri galthi thi. Mere gusse ki , bewajah gusse ki ...apne kismat ka gussa samrat ke upar.. Samrat ! Jo mera dard ko baantke usse kam karsaktha tha usko maine koi chance nahin diya...uski galthi hi kya thi? " he sighed .

Jab tak main wapas nahin aaya, excel join nahi kiya tab tak main samaj nahin paya ki main kya karrahoon ?kyun karrahaan hoon?... yahaan excel mein samrat ki haalat dekhne ke baad jab meri galthi ka extent mujhe ehsaas hua shayad tab se mujhe jeene ka ek aur reason mila hain- samrat aur gunjan ko saath milane ka. Par tab tak maine tumhe bhoolne keliye kaam kiya hain nupur. Ab tum mere saamne ho tho main itna kaam kyun karoon? "

Nupur had forgotten what they had started talking about. she had held his shoulder tight and as he locked eyes with her, tears fell down her eyes. Atleast she had known they were alive and fine but...she couldnt even imagine what she would have gone through if mayank was ...she shuddered involuntarily and her heart contracted as she heard him opening up, saying things perhaps he didnt even tell himself.

" pata hain nupur ...main jo bhi kuch acieve karna chahraha tha wo sab ka koi maayne hi nahin rahi. Jo main das saal mein karsaktha tha wo maine teen saal mein kiya par kis liye? Kiskeliye? Nahin nupur...ab mujhe sirf tumhaare saath rehna hain. Har ek pal jo main tumhaare saamne  rehsaktha hoon, muhe wohi chahiye ...agar tum nahin rahogi..."


nupur  placed a finger on his lips , pulled him to her  and held him, his head resting on her shoulder. He let her hold him, let his guard drop. He had had no tears in his eyes throughout. his whole body had been stiff as he had spoken, his arms held straight at his side, his face grim..

She held him in her arms,placing his arms around her loosely. He had no thoughts but subconsciously he knew he was being consoled by her heartbeats that he could hear clearly, by the dried up tears in nupurs eyes , by the hands that moved slowly on his back.  He was aware of being rocked , his strength seemed to flow from the contact.He felt peacful as he had never felt since her disappearance

Nupur had forgotten everything , she had never seen mayank so vulnerable. She could only imagine how crushed he must have been then. How much he should have struggled to maintain normalcy in life. 


"ab bas  karo mayank. jo bhi beeth gaya hain, wo bhool jao."

"tum bhool sakthi ho?" he asked her back lifting his head up.

She didnt reply at once but as he waited for an answer, she said," meri baat alag hain mayank." her voice low.

"kaise alag hain nupur? Mujhe batao. Hum tho sochthe the ki tum nhain rahi par tum tho jaanthi thi ki hum sab hain...tumhe tho aur bhi mushkil hua hoga na."

nupur laughed ,grimly thinking she had felt the opposite . But as she looked at him, she heard someone inside her say- nahin nupur. Us se kuch mat bato. Wo seh nahin paayega. Aur jo beeth gaya usko yaad karke kya faayda. Aur tum kya bologi ?Dhruv chalagaya hain. Ab sirf mayank hain aur mayank ki khushi hain bas.

Mayank shook her," bolo nupur"

"mayank . Raat gayi so baath gayi. Abh main kuch yaad nahin rakhna chahthi." and when he made to interrupt," please...yeh exchange offer tho nahin haina ki tumne mujhe kuch bataya tho main tumhe badle mein kuch batao." she smiled

mayank smiled slightly but nodded uncertainly ," lekin yeh bhool mat jaana ki main ab tumhaare zindagi mein hoon."

"tum meri zindagi ho" she replied.

Their eyes met and nupur kissed mayank on the forehead.

"I love you" both said it together, the first time since nupur had come back. And smiled .

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hi , maybe this was disappointing in the sense that nupur was expected to talk and all that  and i did have  a lot of internal debate about it but somehow ----my dil felt i should write it like this.
and really  today i just felt so bad ki main hindi speaking nahin hoon- its not my mother tongue-  i couldnt find words enough!!! actually this whole ff has been a hindi learning experience for me.



Edited by np18 - 29 September 2011 at 11:52am

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
just read both the parts
loved it mayank saying his heart out and nupur consoling him was amazing wish we could see such scenes in mjht 
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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
this was wht i really wanted to see n feel...
 
this is so perfectly defined...there have been so much written on this but never mayank side was shown...always it was nupur..but thnks for giving this..
it was really...amazing
 
 

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