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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Dear
this was so emotional n touching update
mayu boring his heart to Nupur
n Nupur consoling him was really touching made my eyes moist
loved to core
n u did well job n beautifully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi all, thanks a lot for all the replies. please scroll down for individual replies .

PART 10

MN house

samrat and gunjan walked in through the open door , gunjan looking bugged and samrat trying to hide his smile.

They stopped little behind the sofa where nupur was sitting and mayank was lying down on her lap, nupur stroking his head and mayank holding her other hand in his with a soft smile on both their faces. Gunjan looked at them and then at samrat embarrassed but samrat grinned and cleared his throat loudly . Nupur turned back and saw them.

" hello! Mrs Sharma- aapki husband ko kitne baar bolna padega ki front door ko close karke romance karna chahiye." he asked her teasingly.

Nupur turned red and tried to push mayank aside but mayank made a face which said- agaye!?!

and didnt move from nupurs lap. He just closed his eyes and stayed put.

"samrat! Gunjan! Aao na" nupur called them.

"yeh tumlogon ka phone switched off kyun hain?" samrat asked walking and sitting across them on the opposite sofa and as usual put his feet up on the arm rest.

gunjan followed him and sitting down herself ," di tum isko chodo. Tumne phone kyun off karke rakha hain? Mujhe kitni important baat karni thi tumse."

"yeh lo maine kya poochan tha? Waise chashmish , woh question ka answer tho hamaare saamne dikh raha hain" he replied again with a naughty smile.

mayank sitting up on the sofa gave a groan and made a face at him. nupur thought ,- isine mobile off kiya hoga! And smiled .

Gunjan looked at the three of them and started off-" samrat , tumhe hamesha mazaak hi soojtha hain. Jo kaam tumne aaj kiya na ..." and turning to mayank , continued "jiju, aap samrat se kuch bolo na. Aaj tho isne... di yaad hain kal jab hum college ke taraf gaye tho wahaan light dekhi thi," nupur nodded," aaj students sab pakde gaye . Wo kal college mein friendship day party karrahe the. Aur jab aaj shukla sir ne unko punishment ke liye bhulaya tho unhone ek signed permission letter , jiju..signed permission letter dikhaya- woh bhi samrat ke signatures ke saath . Bolo koi aisa ..."

"chashmish tum kitna bolthi ho. Maine galti se sign kiya tha mayank tho students ko sazaa kyun milni hain"

Nupur smiled though she felt a slight jealousy that she couldnt take part in their conversation.

"par unhone tho cheating ki thi na samrat. Shukla sir ko gussa dilaane ki kya zaroorat thi."

"please chashmish shukla sir ko gussa har baat pe aatha hain. Tumhi bolo mayank...kya wo kabhi bhi tumhe chodke koi bhi student ke saath achha bolthe hain?"

"tho students.."

"CHUP . Tum dono ," mayank looked at nupur as if to say see thats why I switched off the mobile," tum dono ko bahaana chahiye hota hain jagda karne keliye. "

" haan . Pehle tho itna jagadthe nahin the na. Aaj kal tho kuch zyaada hi hogaya. Waise hum itna jagda nahin karthe haina mayank " nupur said and got up ,moved towards the kitchen asking," kisiko kuch chahiye?"

all three of them looked at her ." kya?"

"waah nupur! Tum dono jagda nahin karthe? Waah yeh kehne ki baat hain!" samrat said stressing on the words. Gunjan smiled and mayank grinned

Nupur ," samrat woh jagda thodi na hota hain. Wo tho bas aise hi..."

"haan haan samrat wo tho bas iska pyaar hota hain. Jaise ki aaj subah isne knife leke mujhse bai ke baare mein poocha, woh sab iska pyaar hain" mayank.

nupur blushed but said," achha? Wo tho bread knife tha. Waise mera pyaar hain tho kya tumhaara nahin hota ? "

" of course mera bhi hain."

"hamara bhi  wahin hain" gunjan said

now the remaining three looked at her , she looked embarrassed and all of them burst out laughing.

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"waise tum log kya karrahe the?" samrat asked mayank when they were both alone.

"subah se yeh decide karrahe hain ki hume ghoomne kahaan jaana hain." mayank

"woh teek hain?"

mayank shrugged," teek hojaayegi. Par tum aur gunjan...kuch zyaada nahin hogaya?"

samrat didnt answer

"tum us se baat kyun nahin karthe samrat?"

"kya baat karoon mayank? Kya wo jaanthi nahin? Waise abhi abhi nupur waapas aayi hain tho us se shayad apni sister ke saath zyaada time spend karne ka mann hain."

mayank didnt answer but his face showed he didnt agree

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Dining table

"gunjan tu itna excited kyun hain? Tu mujhse kya chupaa rahi hain? "

gunjan shook her head like a small girl but it was clear she was hiding something.

"samrat ne tumse kuch kahaan? Batana "

"nahin di. Aise koi baat hoti tho main tumhe nahin batathi ?! Kuch nahin. Bas.." and hugging her waist (gunjan sitting on the chair and nupur standing next to her),"main bohot khush hoon."

nupur held her back and smiled.

" tu baat badal rahi haina. Par yeh bata tum dono ka patch up hua?"

"di...koi jagda hota tho patch up bhi hota ." gunjan looked about to change the topic again but nupur was seriously looking at her," yahaan tho...maine samrat ke saath ...matlab usko bina wajah itna kuch kahaan hain di. ab pata nahin kaise..."

"tho kya hua? Insaan se hi tho galthi hoti hain. Ab us se pyaar se maafi maang lena , waise bhi samrat ko tumpe gussa nahin aatha. "

"itna aasaan nahin hai di."

" itna mushkil bhi nahin hai. soch gunjan, zindagi ka teen saal tumne samrat se alag rehke guzaara hain. Abhi aur kitne din bina wajah apni khushi ko apni hi haaton se jaane degi. Aur phir, tum subah se shaam tak ya tho uski saath rehthi ho ya uski khayalon mein rehthi ho." gunjan blushed

"aise mein mujhe ek reason batao tum dono ke beech ke dooriyaan ki?" gunjan didnt answer

" zindagi mein itne aasaani se pyaar nahin miltha. Aur jab miltha hain tho usko kyun..."

" di...tumse kuch poochoon? Tum jiju ke bina itne din kaise rahi? Tumhaari tho shadi bhi hui thi?"

nupurs face changed, gunjan stared at her changing expressions. She seemd to have gone somewhere else- somewhere where gunjan didnt know ...

"di!" gunjan shook her,"tum kahaan kho jaathi ho di? Tumhe bura laga ki maine ..."

"nahin gunjan. Maine jo kiya so kiya. Shayd galat tha par mere liye aur koi raastha nahin tha. Tumhaare liye tumhaari raasthe tumhaare saamne saaf saaf dikhaayi de rahe hain..."

The doorbell rang .gunjan looked at Nupur---she went ,opened it and shouted- Mayank!!!

--------------to be continued----------


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...
loved it lodsss
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing
but END is πŸ˜•
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow dear beautiful...
it really goona be fun to read mjht revisited 3...
 
i although i havnt read ur previous 2 mjht but will surely read...
 
thanks for the pm
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beauiful update dear
thanks for the pm,
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Posted: 12 years ago

wonderful part...kiya shilpa anty agai

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Posted: 12 years ago
this was way too cute and love all the conversations...i wish they wouldve just shown general conversations like these between characters in the show...my favorite is when sajan walked in and mayank still didnt budge from his position πŸ˜†...waiting for the next update...i think i may know what the surprise will be 
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kirti123

just read both the parts

loved it mayank saying his heart out and nupur consoling him was amazing wish we could see such scenes in mjht 
thanks for the pm
continue soon😊 



thanks so much for always replying. and lm glad you liked mayank opening up!
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Posted: 12 years ago


thanks for replying- glad u liked it.