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FF :dakshna reunion,versn 2.0 (Page 6)

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 3:41am | IP Logged
PART 4 :
 
P-zoo:
Daksh ka car screeches to a halt in front. Ayi hurries out.
A : Chintu...Akruti kaisi he?
D : [blank tone] Wo theek he.
He walks in purposefully; Ayi follows him in.
Lekin wo rukta nahi he, goes straight upto Naina's room.
 
Bechara is in for a shock.
Na hi Naina he waha, aur na hi uski cheeze...
D : [ soflty ] Naina...
He rushes down the stairs. Ayi stops him mid-way.
A : Chintu, tu-
D : Abhi nahi Ayi.
 
He storms off to her office. Yes, the office is bare too. Everything has been boxed up; no address labels lekin.
[ She's gettin d packers-movers guys to do dat.clues nahi chodna chahti na, idiot. ]
 
Daksh is livid now, and back in the front room.
 
Ayi looks up from d sofa, with an I-was-right expression, busy convincing herself ki she's indeed right [next idiot].
D : [killer look] Ayi. Naina kaha he.
A : Wo chali gayi.
Daksh stares back with an oh-really expression. Baba [ sad ] looks up now.
B : Beta, uski dopeher ki train thi, nikal chuki hogi...
D : [shocked] Kya?!!

 

 
[hospital]
 
 
Psycho recovers from her paralysis, whips out her cell. [u kno wo kisko ph karegi..Angry]
S : Vahini..
R : Ha Sonakshi..
S : Daksh ghar aya?
R : Ha shayad...Gadi ki awaz suni thi mene.[ happily ] Naina chali gayi...
S : [ mega excited ] Sach...? Wo uska phn nahi utha rahi thi, to muje laga tha ki wo ja chuki hogi...
R : Ha, jaise hi tum log nikle, wo neeche ayi-baba se bat karne ai thi, aur phir nikal gayi...Waha kya ho raha he?
S : [ worried ] Pata nahi vahini. Akruti ko ab tak hosh nahi aya he. [ i kno, but dats wat dey told her...wait karo. ]
R : [ confused ] Par sanket ka to ph tha ki wo theek he, bas kamzor he...
S : use ab tak hosh nahi aya he.[ irritated ] Mujhe usse kya matlab...me wo nahi keh rahi thi...Me to ye keh rahi thi ki usne muje ayush se phn pe bat karte dekh liya...
R : [ worried ]Kya...?Akruti ne sun liya?
S : Ha, aur daksh ne bhi...Ab kya kare?
R : [ mildly shocked ] Kya? Kitna?
[ iske liye bhi rakha he mene ek...trust me. ]
S : [ more irritated ] Kaafi kuch. Daksh aya kya? PAta nahi wo kya karne wala he abhi...
R : Sonakshi, tu Akruti ko dekh, Daksh ko me dekhti hu. Ayi waise bhi gusse me he. Muje Ayi se bat karni he bas, wo uski nahi sunegi.
S : [ not convincd ] Theek he.
She cuts the call and sits on one f d chairs with a set expression.
 
 
                                                                 ... contd ...
 
 
ps : overdose of psycho...? pls remembr certain characters r only here 4 d slapsWink.rest is under construction...
 
 
 
 


Edited by sweetaish - 26 October 2011 at 10:16pm

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PART 5:

back to P-zoo:

D :[killer look] Ayi. Naina kaha he.

A : Wo chali gayi.

Daksh stares back with an oh-really expression. Baba [ sad ] looks up now.

B : Beta, uski dopeher ki train thi, nikal chuki hogi...

D :[shocked] Kya?!!

He looks at his watch; its almost noon.

D :[ determined ] Nahi. Me use aise nahi jane dunga.

A : chintu tu use vapis iss ghar nahi layega.

D : Nahi ayi...Me nahi. Tu vapis layegi use.

Ayi is shocked!

D : Ha ayi. Tu layegi Naina ko vapis.

Daksh storms off to his car; Ayi stares after him, still shocked.

Daksh is on his way to the station...

 

[hospital]

Psycho gets a call in between from a hyper Rohini who tells her Naina's train s due any time now and Daksh has only started from P-zoo just then...and that ther's no hope of him catching Naina at this rate.Psycho prays to all gods ki Daksh wont reach on time.

She gets up and starts pacing the halls once again. No news of Aku for her as yet.

 

[Daksh in his car]

He's stuck in the traffic and trying to call Naina again, but she doesnt pik up...Daksh tosses the phn aside when the block clears and puts the car in gear, hoping he'll reach on time...

 

[hospital]

Doc calls Sanket in. Psycho looks up, Doc signals her to stay put so she returns to her chair.

Inside, Aku's sittin up with kaki at her side.Sanket walks up and sits on the other side. [silent dialogue; Kaki's nd Sanket's expressions not seen, both have their backs to us].

Aku asks Sanket to call home.

  

[station]

Naina is sitting at the window seat.Her mobile flashes again [silent mode]. Its the umpteenth misd call from Daksh...She swipes at the tears and puts the phone in her bag. Closes her eyes and leans back into the seat. The train is about to leave...

 
           
                                                             ... contd ...
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by sweetaish - 26 October 2011 at 10:16pm

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He looks at his watch; its almost noon.

D :[ determined ] Nahi. Me use aise nahi jane dunga.

A : chintu tu use vapis iss ghar nahi layega.

D : Nahi ayi...Me nahi. Tu vapis layegi use.

Ayi is shocked!

D : Ha ayi. Tu layegi Naina ko vapis.

Daksh storms off to his car; Ayi stares after him, still shocked.

Daksh is on his way to the station...


@[email protected] blue.yaar this part was rockingClap.I loved the way daksh said those linesTongue..I can actually feel daksh saying those lines.kya dialogue hain...Clap..lved themHug


So far FF is rocking.Thumbs Up..continue the other parts ..I am tensed about what's going to happen next..dakshu time par pahuch gayana??Shocked..post soonWink

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 9:43am | IP Logged
Suspense! suspense!! Love it aish!!!!!!Clap 
Dont keep us waiting!!!!!

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Aish superb yaar Clap... I am loving the suspense... Wink Killer dialogues of Daksh Tongue 
Loved it Hug

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PART 6 :
 
[Mumbai CST]

Daksh has reached the station.
Knowing he has no time to waste, he decides to get the platform number first and bee-lines for the enquiry counter.
They tell him the Guwahati express left the station 15 minutes ago...!
When fate conspires against you...
Somebody suppliments the info saying the 11.05 train which is late by half an hour normally, was dot on time this particular day, and that its the only train from Mumbai for the day.
 
Daksh, shocked, realizes Naina had lied about the train timings on purpose...
 
Some random guy jostles him; he apologizes, and steps back from the counter, still in a daze...
 

 
[the train]

 
Naina opens her bag; the screen is blinking furiously, and the bag is slowly closed again. She sits back, willing the tears in.
 
Evening, some random station halfway between Mumbai nd New Jalpaiguri :
[ dats d closest stn 2 drjlng btw]
 
The train stops. Someone is buying coffee.
Naina is jerked back from her reverie by the sound of laughter. She opens her eyes, dry now, and looks around; there's a family of three opposite her, a chirpy teenage girl and her parents, happily playing cards and teasing each other.
They smile at her. She smiles back with some effort, and goes back to staring out the window...
 
The train picks up speed.
                                               
                                  
                                                                  ... contd ...
 
 
 
ps : tum logo ko railwy timtabl padhane ka irada to nahi tha, bas likhte likhte wo sab bhi aa gaya, srySmile...
 
 
 
 


Edited by sweetaish - 26 October 2011 at 10:17pm

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 12:48am | IP Logged
yaar, ye kya hogaya?Shocked

Naina ko darjeeling ke paas tak  bej diya...ahhh nahi..Cry...Ab kya hoga? jyada parts mat bana..jaldi se bolna.Wink..aage ka kya plan hain dakshu ka?Question

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lucky.m

yaar, ye kya hogaya?Shocked

Naina ko darjeeling ke paas tak  bej diya...ahhh nahi..Cry...Ab kya hoga? jyada parts mat bana..jaldi se bolna.Wink..aage ka kya plan hain dakshu ka?Question
wait up dearie...next part ka thoda technical snag ho gaya he...comin up in a fewSmile...
nd i'm sry i'm cuttin it up so much, jitna hua he dat much goes onlinSmile...
i'm tryin yar. aj sham tak shayad ho jayega...nahi hua to tum log meri dhulai ke liye nikloge to nai naTongue...


Edited by sweetaish - 29 September 2011 at 12:54am

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