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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
U made me cry again sweetaish!!!!!!!!Unhappy ur dialogues and facial expressions are sooo sensitive and mindblowing!!!!!!!
 
BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!Hug keep rocking girl!!!!!!!

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 4:52pm | IP Logged
mysti...thnx swetheartHug...
tu itne compliments ek sath de deti he ki muje chad jati heLOLLOLLOLilu meri jaanHug
 
nd dis one s 4 all my darlins...
 
 
Nikli thi me prequel likhne...
Phir ane lage ideas itne...
Ki I had 2 writ, had 2 writ
Lagvadi thappad left n right,
 
                                               nope, uske age abhi likhungi to tumhe clues mil jayengeWink
 
had fun guys...?
 
loads f smilSmiles,
 
aish
 
 
ps : part 3 s on pge 4 btwSmile


Edited by sweetaish - 27 September 2011 at 4:54pm

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetaish

mysti...thnx swetheartHug...
tu itne compliments ek sath de deti he ki muje chad jati heLOLLOLLOLilu meri jaanHug
 
nd dis one s 4 all my darlins...
 
 
Nikli thi me prequel likhne...
Phir ane lage ideas itne...
Ki I had 2 writ, had 2 writ
Lagvadi thappad left n right,
 
                                               nope, uske age abhi likhungi to tumhe clues mil jayengeWink
 
had fun guys...?
 
loads f smilSmiles,

 
aish
 
 
ps : part 3 s on pge 4 btwSmile

Wow too good Babes... Big smile waiting for the next round of jhappads... 

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetaish

PART 3 :
 
Aku comes to after an hour or so, and asks for daksh.
Daksh, majorly worried because Naina hasnt answered any of his calls, rushes in when called.
D : Akruti...ab kaisa lag raha he?
A : Dada...me theek hu [ she tries to get up, he pushes her down gently ]...Bas ap meri bat suniye...
D : Ha, kaho...tum kya keh rahi thi mujse?
A : Naina...wo ghar chod ke ja rahi he.
D : Kya? Mene usse kaha tha ki-
A : Dada, mene bhi koshish ki thi...Wo rat bhar pack kar rahi thi, aur...
D : [ shocked ] wo mere calls nahi utha rahi he...
Aku is shocked too..."Kahi wo..."
Daksh looks torn between his need to go to her and wanting to be there for Akruti, as only he knows what blow his sister had been dealt with in the morning...
Akruti understands. "Pls dada, me theek hu, ap Naina ko mana lo...roko use..."
D : Akruti...
A : Me sambhal lungi...ap jake ao...
He stands up, undecided still.
"Jao na..." she urges him gently.
 
 
Psycho is pacing outside, fearing the worst. If Aku opens her mouth...
 
She sees Daksh rushing out, and runs behind him.
S : Daksh? [ekdam hi-pitched, typical psycho tone]
He doesnt stop to turn even, and keeps walking.
Sanket sees him and walks up to them.
Snkt : Chintu...?
D : Dada, Akruti ka khyal rakhna, me bas ghar jake ata hu...
Sanket nods; doc calls Sanket and he walks off.
Daksh resumes; psycho yanks him to a stop [ i kno, gussa mujhe bhi aa raha he, but wait a little... ]
S : [shrill tone again] Tum aise nahi jaa sakte Daksh.
D : [dark KP mode] ROK KE DEKHO MUJHE.

ROFL Loved this dialogue..taliya taliyaClap
S : [as if she cant believ] Tum us Naina ke peeche-
D : [ grabs her arm and gives her a hard shake ] Meri Naina ka naam tak mat lena apni zuban se, warna...Jo mene ghar par diya, uska bacha hua bhi yahi de dunga.

ClapClap..loved it...
 
Psycho gets the tear-gas ready, expression f shock nd disbelief in place. [ekdam wounded tone me] "Daksh..."

D : Shut up Sonakshi. [tightens the vice like grip; psycho squirms but he doesnt let up] Hospital he, yaha apna tamasha shuru karne ka sochna bhi mat. [murderously low tone] Tumhe andaza bhi nahi hoga ki tumhara kya haal karne ka man he mera abhi. 

Iss diialogue pe tho do teen whistlesDancing ( seeti) bajane mann kar raha hian..but  I cnt

[oh i kno, wud hav luvd ek aur thappad in this part, but dat wud b so unlik dakshu na...dats y...]
She opens up her mouth again, and he cuts her short.
D : Aur ek bat tum kaan khol kar sun lo. [ leans in, eyes speaking murder ] Me na kabhi tumhara tha, na kabhi rahunga. Mene kisi se pyaar kiya hai, to wo Naina se he. Mujhe rokne ka, datne ka, mujh par rok jamane ka hak bhi sirf, aur sirf Naina ka he. [ pulls back ] Mujhe yaha koi natak nahi chahiye jab tak me lautu. Samjhi tum? Agar akruti ko kuch hua...[ek aur squeeze - ab to us psycho ka arm tomato red hogaya hogaLOL]

Wah mere sher..I cam imagine dakshu saying this..ROFLkp style..mazzaa gaya..iss dialogue pe tho cahr ..paanch seetiya ho jaayeWink

He turns to leave, jate jate ek aur dialog marta hai Daksh;
he turns one last time. "Ye mat socho ki tum abhi bach gayi...Ayush ko to me chodne wala hu nahi. Uske bad tumhari bari he."
He walks off with that.

Psycho stares into space, paralysed, worried her game is up now...
 
 
                                                                              ... contd..
 
 
 
ps : sry i hav 2 cut it up in2 sooo many parts...i'm puttin it up as i go...


Aish..loved it..dakshu ke dialogues aur tappad..wah wah..,Clap what an idea sirji..Clap.


Edited by lucky.m - 28 September 2011 at 12:44am

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DakshnaFan


Wow too good Babes... Big smile waiting for the next round of jhappads... 
 
thnx jaanHug...nd jhappads thoLOLLOLLOL...i kno dear...pehle tho bas do kheech ke lagvane the mujhe, den i'd focus on ayi's emo atyachar n all nd a bhaari emo reunioun f dakshna lik my last oneTongue...ab lag raha he thappad kuch kam pad gayeWink...i'm tryin 2 fit the right ones in yar...thoda time lagegaSmileSmile bt i'm njoyin evry minut f tLOLLOLLOL


Edited by sweetaish - 27 September 2011 at 10:09pm

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 12:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetaish

mysti...thnx swetheartHug...
tu itne compliments ek sath de deti he ki muje chad jati heLOLLOLLOLilu meri jaanHug
 
nd dis one s 4 all my darlins...
 
 
Nikli thi me prequel likhne...
Phir ane lage ideas itne...
Ki I had 2 writ, had 2 writ
Lagvadi thappad left n right,
 
                                               nope, uske age abhi likhungi to tumhe clues mil jayengeWink
 
had fun guys...?
 
loads f smilSmiles,
 
aish
 
 
ps : part 3 s on pge 4 btwSmile


Poetry...hmmm..Hug..mazaa aagaya..kya kavitha likhi aapneClap huzoor..wah wahWink

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 1:40am | IP Logged
lucky thankuHug...dos dialogs wer my fav parts 2de vaiseLOL...glad u lik 'em...
age thoda atak gaya he, so wil put up jitna hua he utna...rest cominWink
 
 
 
ps : seeti...kya yar..yaha tak sunayi di mujeLOLLOLthnku againHug


Edited by sweetaish - 28 September 2011 at 1:40am

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Cant wait for the rest aish!!LOL 

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