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FF :dakshna reunion,versn 2.0 (Page 2)

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetaish

Originally posted by lucky.m

Yaar..tune tho mujhe ruladiyaCry...itna senti.seedhe dil pe lag gayi.Clap. lved itWink

Ek dum full emotional FF aur  poetry . ka...kya kehna.wah wah. sirji.Clap.a..next part kaha hai?Shocked
 
 
huhConfused...nxt part...gimme a breather yar...ye wala has bn...ummm...thoda toughieTongue.
poetry? thanku, dat dept s my baby. mera weaknes he, i'd evn writ poems on chocolat wrappersLOLLOLLOL
vaise i thot d nxt part was ur dept, in ur DDLjSmileSmile...luvd t vaise.did i say dat? i'm sayin t again...absolutly fabClap bt yar i'm out f ideas rite nw...time lagega sweetsLOL...
 
ps : Dancing101 posts...yay!!!


Congrats for crossing hundered mark dear..Time lo lekin iss baar aur rulana and I Lved u calling PH AS P-ZOOLOL...scahi yaar..alag alag kisam ke log hain uss zoo mein and if u permit mein aaj se apne FF mein PH ko p-zoo bhulavunga..Wink

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lucky.m


Congrats for crossing hundered mark dear..Time lo lekin iss baar aur rulana and I Lved u calling PH AS P-ZOOLOL...scahi yaar..alag alag kisam ke log hain uss zoo mein and if u permit mein aaj se apne FF mein PH ko p-zoo bhulavunga..Wink
 
 
LOLLOLLOLbula le yar...P-zoo is P-zoo afte all.vaise maine copyrit nahi li he, idea kisi aur ka thaTongue...came acrs t in sum1's post, bas yad nahi aa raha kaun he. jo bhi he, genius heLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Yaar Aish kitna senti hai... Tu ne to Bahut hi touchy touchy wala scene lekha hai yaar... Aakhoon se aason tapak gaye Cry Par kya karo dakshu aur Naina ka itna dard bardash nahi hota hai mujshe...
And that poetry too good... what's next stored for us... Waiting for the next part... Day Dreaming
I loved the way u have expressed all the emotions... I could imagine the whole scene while reading...
Loved it... Loved it... Clap

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Congraulation, for making a century.

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 2:02am | IP Logged

I'l hav to hear the chocolate wrapper one

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 2:04am | IP Logged
yaar, ur thinking is correct, unfortunately
 
[don mind d poetry pls...i jus had 2 get t out f my systm...felt so bad 4 naina bechari.LOL]
yaar the poetry was so touching, says wat naina's feeling at the moment perfectly and remined of a song broken strings by James Morrison. Your FF was beautiful written and I could imagine it all but i'l be honest it made me cry but not in a really bad way, didn't ruin my mood.  If CV's are showing this track they should show this scene and glad I read it. plus it ended well and as Shakespeare said 'All's well that end's well'. Mybe u should put this up a a separate post but provide a link on DakshNa FF, so u give them the choice. maybe write on where Naina is convncing Daksh that there is no way he could have betrayed and asks for time to get the truth out. 

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 3:10am | IP Logged
U did gud job...Thank u soo much...

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Oh Sweetaish! Of all the ppl i never thought YOU would make me cry!!!Cry
 
but man! that was such a wonderful story!!!ClapThumbs Up

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