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Posted: 03 October 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Right back at u!!!Hug

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Posted: 03 October 2011 at 8:54pm | IP Logged

ok this ones from me to u dear TongueThanks a alot for giving us such a beautiful prequel of Dakshna Union Wink 
Har ek dialogue ke liye Clap Har ek expressions ke liye ClapEmbarrassedHug Aur har ek tappad ke liye Thumbs UpHug
Aur thanks for giving us just a lovely head butt again HugDay Dreaming
kal nite to sahi gayi thi news padkarDancing Party... aaj ki subah tera Dakshna union ka last part padkar aur aachi jayegi Dancing... Thank u bud Hug

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Posted: 03 October 2011 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
thnku darlinHug...vaise dats nws s worth celebratin aint t...finali bhag ke shadiDay Dreaming...haaye...i jus hop its truLOLLOLLOL...

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Posted: 04 October 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetaish

ah...guys, ye raha d last part...i think i'v givn t my best shot...grand finaleLOL bahot lamba he, don mindTongue...sit back nd njoySmile...
 
 
note : jitna ho sake, emo+romo dono balanc kiya he...bahot bar tinkering kar li, lagta he i'l nevr b satisfied...hop kafi heSmile
 
 
So Daksh has finishd d story, nd they r stil out in the patio lekin standing under this tree ka shade now...
 

N : Acha to vakil saheb, ek din me sab solv kar di apne...

D : [ smiles ] Ha.

N : [ tweaks his nose ] Kal tak kaha the aap?

D : Kal tak tumhe khone ka darr nahi tha...tum mere sath thi.

N : [ chokes up ] Daksh...

D : Pata he Naina, wo train jab choot gayi...EK pal ke liye mujhe laga ki mene tumhe kho diya [ strokes her face gently ]...aise laga jaise...jaise dhadkane ruk gayi ho meri...

Meri bhi...Wink..

Naina ke ankhen bhar ati he, and she cuts him off. "Pls daksh..."

He takes her hand down, laces his fingers with hers.

D : Tabhi mene thaan li thi ki tumhe vapis le aunga, 24 ghante mene usike sahare kaat di...Lekin Naina, us ek pal ke liye me kitna khudkars ho gaya tha...[ takes her face in his hands ] Mene ye nahi socha tha ki agar meri jaan nikal rahi he, to meri Naina ki...

ahh..ye dialogue dil pe lag gayaHeart..dakshu kaClap

Ab to daksh ke bhi ankhen r all brimmed up...

Naina closes her eyes; the tears run down. He brushes them off, infinitely gentle, infinitely tender...drops a kiss on one eyelid, then another...And they are lost in each other's eyes...

I am dreaming...I can see dakshnaDay DreamingDay Dreaming

 

The maid comes and calls them in for dinner; Naina urges her and her mom to go ahead.

Anjali comes out to call her then, sees them in the same posture...and she comes up with this brilliant idea...Dakshna eat out in the patio...[ ho sake to candles bhi lagva deti meDay Dreaming...chalo, starlight se adjust karva dengeSmile ]...

Naina and daksh are out in the lawn after dinner. Daksh has his head in her lapDay Dreaming, eyes closed.

Yaar tera ye walo tho copy hojayega..WinkLOL

N : [ runs her hand through his hair ] Daksh...

D : Hmm.

N : Ayi se sach me tumne char sentenc se zyada kuch nahi kaha...? Yaha akar bhi...?

D : Nahi. Flight se utar kar mene akruti ko ph kiya tha, usne bata dia hoga.

N : [ chiding ] Kp.

D : [ laughs gently ] Tumhare bina to me KP hi hu. Vaise bat to mene kisi se bhi nahi ki thi...

Very true yaar..Tongue

N : Sivay sonakshi aur mr. Joshi ke.

D : [ laughs again ] Ha.

N : tumne use thappad mara...?

D : Ha... [ no replies to that, so he looks up ] Kam pad gaye na...me janta tha. Ek kam karte he, kal subhe ki flight pe vapis jate he, aur baki ka tum de dena use...

Ye mera sabse fav line hain..loved loved itROFLROFLROFL

N : Nahi daksh.

D : [ frowns ] Kyu?

N : [ smiles ] Vapis jayenge to train me jayenge...

D : theek he...[ closes his eyes again, content to be ]. Naina...

N : Ha daksh?

D : Phir kabhi mere sath aise mat karna.

N : [ still playing with his hair, thodi si lost ] Kaise...

D : Akele. Train pe. Agli bar muje sath nahi liya, to dekhna...

N : [ smiles ] Daksh...kal waha jaye...?

D : 16 A ?

N : Ha. Tumhe yad he, us din hamne kaha tha ki sab theek hone ke bad ham waha jayenge...

He sits up. "Tumse judi koi bat me kabhi bhool sakta hu? Ham kal jayenge. Tumhari fav seat par hi baithenge. Ticket iss bar bhi me lunga. Kyu?"

She smiles at that. He holds out his arm for her, she ducks under it, then scoots in closer, the better to listen to the beat of his heart, and they spend some time that way, not needing words now, completely in synch with each other...

Clap absolutely fabThumbs Up

After a while, Daksh speaks up again.

D : Tare gin rahi ho?

Naina gives up staring at the night sky and smiles at him.

D : Answer galat niklega. Ek kam hogi.

N : [ smiles; she knos whats cominSmile ] Kyu?

D : Kyunki ek yaha mere pas baithi he [ head-butt...Day Dreamingah, i kno. i misd t 2...]

My fav,,,Day DreamingDay Dreaming..thanks yaar..ye dalne ke liyeHug

But the smile goes too soon.

D : Akruti ki fikar ho rahi he.

N : [ nods ] Ayush...Mene tumse pehle bhi kaha tha ki uss rishte me kuch to khatak rahi he...

D : Janta hu. Ye bhi janta hu ki ek din me koi sudhar nahi jata, lekin ek akhri mauka to hum ayush ko de sakte he.[ half to himself ] Agar kuch aur hua, to Ayush ko me dekh lunga.

N : [ takes his hand ] Hum dekh lenge.

He places his hand over hers; eye lock, and a smile...

The breeze is cooler now, its tipping towards cold, and its getting late...

N : Daksh, andar chale...? Rat bahot ho chuki he.

He nods. Gets up, offers her his hand.

N : Daksh, tum ab bhi ayi se naraz ho...?

D : [ slowly ] nahi.

N : Phon kar lo...ayi pareshan hogi...kab se tumne theek se bat bhi nahi ki he ayi se.

D : [ smiles ] Kar lunga. Ab chale?

He raises their joined hands to his lips, kisses hers. She smiles into his eyes, nd Naina ke naino me he all her love for her Daksh...He smiles back.

And so, the cool breeze and the assorted music of a beautiful night, the starlit sky for a backdrop, they walk in hand-in-hand, a silent promise to be together, humesha nd forever..

Already last FF mein expression ke liye jaan qurbaan kardiyaLOL..ab iss line pe  kya karu.LOL.lo phir se qurbaan karte hainWink..superbClap expression..LOVED IT..HugHug

 
ps : oh don wori, kahani kaha khatm hui...humne to dono ki shadi kabki karva di thi naTongue...honeymoon bhi manva rahe heLOLLOLLOL...
pps : kat ke chota karne ka man nahi kar raha tha...i hop der r no complntsSmile

Tho finally happies endings.Wink.awesome work dearThumbs Up..I loved ur dialogues esp dakshu's...Hug and Ur expressions I dnt have words for that..Clap...I am speech less...HugHug

Sry yaar late padne ke liye..maaf kardeConfused ya naina ki tarah kaan pakad ke maafi maanga padegaLOL
Whole FF was rocking...ClapClapClap...Loved it to infinityThumbs Up and thanks for such beautiful FF..Thumbs Up..so back to rom FF.Embarrassed..??



Edited by lucky.m - 04 October 2011 at 10:52am

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Posted: 04 October 2011 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Smilelucky...tujhe na...dhamki deni padi padhane ke liyeTongue...bechari me.
thnx jaanHugHugHugHug...ws reali, reali waitin dose hilitesSmile...copy karle darlin...jo bhi copy karna he. lekin ek shart he...u promisd a pillo fightWinki'l hold u to it...LOLLOLLOLLOL
 
 
ps : Romo...? ha kyu nahi...afte all, dats our hme dept naLOL...baki sab sub-franchises heTongue


Edited by sweetaish - 04 October 2011 at 11:07am

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