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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Hey dear.

U are back.TongueHug.how was ur day?  padke acha laga...zor ka zatka hai zoro se laga..dono wamps koLOL...just wanted to check..ayi just knows ayush thing till now ..Am I right?

Baaki psycho ka sins ke baare mein ayi ko kab pata chalega?..jaldi batana..aur slaps..thoClap..mast mast hainWink

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
lucky...thnx sweetuHug...misd u vaiseSmile
nd u r rite wit ur assumptn regrding ayi...baki ke parts comin upTongue...


Edited by sweetaish - 02 October 2011 at 8:52pm

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                                          LOLDISCLAIMER RELOADED LOL:
 
botch up tho as predicted mene kar hi diLOL, full on dialog bazi frm here on...and am makin a BIG assumptn ki Mr. Joshi posesses the requisite amnt f grey cells nd thoda common senseTongue so dat our darling lawyer can prove the case in one fell swoop...
 
note 2 lucky : yar, in ayush ka angle,
                       me ho gayi thi tangle,
                      henc frm ur story ka line,
                     borrow kia mene thoda, hope its fine...Tongue
                            ["kan pakad ke" sryBig smile]
 
 
PART 12 :

This white car screeches to a halt right in front of the door. Ayush comes out.

Psycho flings the car door open and is about to start her rant-

A : Andar chalo.

She follows him into the front room, fuming.

S : Kya zarurat thi tumhe subhe phon karne ki? Ha?

A : [ sits down on the couch; she remains standing ] Kyu? Kisi ne sun liya kya?

She is thrown for a second, then ploughs on.

S : Mene tumse pehle bhi kaha tha ki me tumhe call kar lungi. Tumne call karke kya tamasha khadi ki pata hai tumhe? Akruti ne sun li !

Psycho's pitch is rising word by word.

Inside, in another room, Joshi is seen talking to someone [ he's not happy about it btw ], stops when he hears the unmistakably shrill tone of his daughter. "Sona...?"

His companion [ back to us ] signals him to listen.

In the front room, psycho continues..." Mene kaha tha akruti ko me dekh lungi..."

Joshi frowns. They hear ayush yell back at her.

Front room me, meanwhile :

Psycho wins the yelling competion hands down, then calms down some.

S : ...Tum samaj gaye tumhe kya kehna he daksh se? Uske bad ka me dekh lungi. akruti to peeche hatne ki soch bhi nahi sakti, me jo rahungi waha. Bas ek bar meri shadi hone do daksh se.

Someone claps from behind.

It's Daksh.

D : wah, Sonakshi. Wah! Manna padega. Tum kabhi haar nahi manti ho.  Ab bhi tumhe lagta he ki tum jeetogi.

Joshi is all confused.

J : Sona?

S : [ flabbergasted ] Shocked Papa !!

J : Kya ho raha he yaha?

psycho is busy trying to assemble her scrambled brain, so Joshi turns to his fav target : Daksh.

J : Ye sab kya bakwas ho raha he Daksh?

D : Agar itna sab kuch sun kar bhi apko kuch samaj nahi aya, tho shayad apki beti ke sath apko bhi therapy ki zarurat he.

J : [ furious ] Tum kehna kya chahte hoAngry ?

D : [ humorless laugh ] Miliye apki beti Sonakshi se. Actor/Lawyer/MAnipulator.

Joshi gives this mega frown...

D : Ji bilkul. Logo ki zindagi se khelna iski hobby he, aur sabse favourit pastime tho suicide he. Vaise Sonakshi, mujhe nahi pata tha ki cough syrup peekar bhi koi mar saktha he.

Psycho opens her mouth, and promptly shuts it again, seeing his expression.

J : [ thundering ] Daksh Patwardhan. Tum yaha muje isliye bula laye taki me tumhe meri beti ki aur insult karte dekhu? Mene tumhe warn kiya tha ki tum usse door raho ! Tumhari himmat kaisi hui--

Daksh holds up his hand calmly, halting Joshi's tirade.

D : Ap chup rahiye kuch der ke liye. Samajh lijiye ki me apke liye ek favor kar raha hu. Ayush se to meri bat ho hi gayi thi. Baki ka iska  drama khud apne dekh bhi liya. Soch ke dekhiye ki ye jo bhi kehti he, usme sach kitna kam hota he.

J : Tum--

This time ayush cuts in.

A : Apki beti kitni khatarnak he ye shayad ap bhi nahi jante. Mujhe achi tarah se pata he, ki apne fayde ke liye ye kaha tak ja sakti he. Phir chahe raste me kisi ki zindagi bhi ho. Apne thodi der pehle sun bhi liya hoga, lekin me ek bar aur keh deta hu apke liye. Isne mujhe dhamkaya tha, gunde bheje the yaha-

Psycho starts her drama again, all teary eyes and trembling lips D'oh

S : Papa, mene-

Joshi looks at her dubiously. Psycho ki ankhen ab saucer se bhi badi he Shocked.. Daddy dearest ko doubt jo hone laga he...

Ayush continues.

A : Me nahi mana to dhamkiya aur badhi. Kabhi case to kabhi meri job. Aur phir isne track change bhi kiya, yeh keh kar ki shadi ke bad me Akruti ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hu... Me sochta tha ki me galat hu, lekin ye...[ looks at her ] Tumse to behtar me hi hu. Me janta hu ki me ne hadh kab par kar di thi. [ turns back to joshi ] Mujhe iski dhamkiyo aur chalo se ab koi farak nahi padta. Me akruti se hi shadi karunga, aur wo meri marzi he iski nahi.

Joshi is boiling up but is doubtful now. Khud jo isne suna tha psycho ka ranting...

D : Dhamkiya to muje bhi milti thi, bas suicid ke roop me. Us din me bat karne aya tha, to hath katne ka natak kiya tha isne ghar par. Yad hoga apko.

Joshi's brows are all screwed up now [ flashback of psycho's excuses over the cut on her wrist ]

D : phir fractur ka natak. mere ghar ayi aur waha kya kya tamasha khada kiya...ayi se itne jhoot bole, kyu apse bhi to jhoot kitne bole. Kya zarurat thi use utne din waha rehne ki? Lene aye the na use.

Joshi thinks about the maid's dubious story of psycho falling and getting her arm fractured, and the major telling off psycho gave him nd supriya wen they went to bring her home.

D : [ sarcastic ] Entertainment shayad kam pad gayi thi, isliye meri behen ki zindagi se bhi khelne lagi. Kahaniya to aur bhi bahot he. Ghar le jayiye apni beti ko, baki ka wo bata degi.

Joshi looks at all of them turn by turn. Psycho is completely psycho now. Starts mumbling lekin nothing is distinct. None of her excuses coherent. She is completely at a loss, and real tears this time. She has lost the game now.

J : [ angry ] Ghar chal Sona. [ takes her hand and starts for the door ]

Psycho starts to say something, then looks to Daksh beseechingly. She even reaches out a hand to him [ totali nuts, told youTongue]

D : Mr. Joshi.

Joshi turns, irritated, holding back the derailed girl like you would an ill-mannered child.

D : Ho sake to apni beti ko samjha dijiye ki me koi trophy nahi hu jo wo baki sabko harake hasil kar le... Me Sonakshi se shadi nahi karne wala. Iss bar wo apni nas sach me kat le, seediyo se gire ya phir kahi aur se [ killer look for psycho ] muje koi farak nahi padta. Jaise apne kaha tha, door rahunga isse.

Joshi walks off, dragging psycho with him to her car.

Psycho keeps turning back, mumbling "Daksh" every few seconds.

She is bundled into the car.

Daksh  looks on dispassionately.

 

 

                                    ... contd ...

 

ps : guys don wry, only 2 more parts...phir happi eve afteSmileSmileSmileSmile... 

 
 
 



Edited by sweetaish - 26 October 2011 at 10:29pm

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Posted: 03 October 2011 at 12:59am | IP Logged

J : Tum--

This time ayush cuts in.

A : Apki beti kitni khatarnak he ye shayad ap bhi nahi jante. Mujhe achi tarah se pata he, ki apne fayde ke liye ye kaha tak ja sakti he. Phir chahe raste me kisi ki zindagi bhi ho. Apne thodi der pehle sun bhi liya hoga, lekin me ek bar aur keh deta hu apke liye. Isne mujhe dhamkaya tha, gunde bheje the yaha-

Psycho starts her drama again, all teary eyes and trembling lips D'oh

S : Papa, mene-

Joshi looks at her dubiously. Psycho ki ankhen ab saucer se bhi badi he Shocked.. Daddy dearest ko doubt jo hone laga he...

Ayush continues.

A : Me nahi mana to dhamkiya aur badhi. Kabhi case to kabhi meri job. Aur phir isne track change bhi kiya, yeh keh kar ki shadi ke bad me Akruti ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hu... Me sochta tha ki me galat hu, lekin ye...[ looks at her ] Tumse to behtar me hi hu. Me janta hu ki me ne hadh kab par kar di thi. [ turns back to joshi ] Mujhe iski dhamkiyo aur chalo se ab koi farak nahi padta. Me akruti se hi shadi karunga, aur wo meri marzi he iski nahi.

@ bIue,
I hope ayush changes like this in real SSBN to help daksh bring out physco's truth...he may be a jerk but no one can become as bad and disgusting as physcoAngry and aku is carrying his child so he should feel for her even a little bit...and aku's case and the recording are the ones thats gonna mess up everything for physco and rohini...not the arm banage or the cough syrup story or anything else...
 
Anyways great dialogues again aish!Clap cant wait for the next parts!!!!!!Smile btw are the slaps on physco over or should we wait for more??Day Dreaming

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Posted: 03 October 2011 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetaish

                                          LOLDISCLAIMER RELOADED LOL:
 
botch up tho as predicted mene kar hi diLOL, full on dialog bazi frm here on...and am makin a BIG assumptn ki Mr. Joshi posesses the requisite amnt f grey cells nd thoda common senseTongue so dat our darling lawyer can prove the case in one fell swoop...
 
note 2 lucky : yar, in ayush ka angle,
                       me ho gayi thi tangle,
                      henc frm ur story ka line,
                     borrow kia mene thoda, hope its fine...Tongue
                            ["kan pakad ke" sryBig smile]

No probs dear..Tongue yaha phar bhi poetry.Wink.I am impressed as usualClapClap
 
 
PART 12 :

This white car screeches to a halt right in front of the door. Ayush comes out.

Psycho flings the car door open and is about to start her rant-

A : Andar chalo.

She follows him into the front room, fuming.

S : Kya zarurat thi tumhe subhe phon karne ki? Ha?

A : [ sits down on the couch; she remains standing ] Kyu? Kisi ne sun liya kya?

She is thrown for a second, then ploughs on.

S : Mene tumse pehle bhi kaha tha ki me tumhe call kar lungi. Tumne call karke kya tamasha khadi ki pata hai tumhe? Akruti ne sun li !

Psycho's pitch is rising word by word.

Inside, in another room, Joshi is seen talking to someone [ he's not happy about it btw ], stops when he hears the unmistakably shrill tone of his daughter. "Sona...?"

His companion [ back to us ] signals him to listen.

In the front room, psycho continues..." Mene kaha tha akruti ko me dekh lungi..."

Joshi frowns. They hear ayush yell back at her.

Front room me, meanwhile :

Psycho wins the yelling competion hands down, then calms down some.

S : ...Tum samaj gaye tumhe kya kehna he daksh se? Uske bad ka me dekh lungi. akruti to peeche hatne ki soch bhi nahi sakti, me jo rahungi waha. Bas ek bar meri shadi hone do daksh se.

Someone claps from behind.

It's Daksh.

D : wah, Sonakshi. Wah! Manna padega. Tum kabhi haar nahi manti ho.  Ab bhi tumhe lagta he ki tum jeetogi.

Wah kya scene hainClap..I could imagine daksh's expressions while clapping.Tongue.ek dum filmiWink..lved it

Joshi is all confused.

J : Sona?

S : [ flabbergasted ] Shocked Papa !!

J : Kya ho raha he yaha?

psycho is busy trying to assemble her scrambled brain, so Joshi turns to his fav target : Daksh.

J : Ye sab kya bakwas ho raha he Daksh?

D : Agar itna sab kuch sun kar bhi apko kuch samaj nahi aya, tho shayad apki beti ke sath apko bhi therapy ki zarurat he.

J : [ furious ] Tum kehna kya chahte hoAngry ?

D : [ humorless laugh ] Miliye apki beti Sonakshi se. Actor/Lawyer/MAnipulator.

Joshi gives this mega frown...

D : Ji bilkul. Logo ki zindagi se khelna iski hobby heLOL, aur sabse favourit pastime tho suicide heLOL. Vaise Sonakshi, mujhe nahi pata tha ki cough syrup peekar bhi koi mar saktha he.

Taliya..taliyaClap.Clap.kitna khatarnak hobby hain iss psycho kaLOL

Psycho opens her mouth, and promptly shuts it again, seeing his expression.

J : [ thundering ] Daksh Patwardhan. Tum yaha muje isliye bula laye taki me tumhe meri beti ki aur insult karte dekhu? Mene tumhe warn kiya tha ki tum usse door raho ! Tumhari himmat kaisi hui--

Daksh holds up his hand calmly, halting Joshi's tirade.

D : Ap chup rahiye kuch der ke liye. Samajh lijiye ki me apke liye ek favor kar raha hu. Ayush se to meri bat ho hi gayi thi. Baki ka iska  drama khud apne dekh bhi liya. Soch ke dekhiye ki ye jo bhi kehti he, usme sach kitna kam hota he.

J : Tum--

This time ayush cuts in.

A : Apki beti kitni khatarnak he ye shayad ap bhi nahi jante. Mujhe achi tarah se pata he, ki apne fayde ke liye ye kaha tak ja sakti he. Phir chahe raste me kisi ki zindagi bhi ho. Apne thodi der pehle sun bhi liya hoga, lekin me ek bar aur keh deta hu apke liye. Isne mujhe dhamkaya tha, gunde bheje the yaha-

Psycho starts her drama again, all teary eyes and trembling lips D'oh

S : Papa, mene-

Joshi looks at her dubiously. Psycho ki ankhen ab saucer se bhi badi he Shocked.. Daddy dearest ko doubt jo hone laga he...

Ayush continues.

A : Me nahi mana to dhamkiya aur badhi. Kabhi case to kabhi meri job. Aur phir isne track change bhi kiya, yeh keh kar ki shadi ke bad me Akruti ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hu... Me sochta tha ki me galat hu, lekin ye...[ looks at her ] Tumse to behtar me hi hu. Me janta hu ki me ne hadh kab par kar di thi. [ turns back to joshi ] Mujhe iski dhamkiyo aur chalo se ab koi farak nahi padta. Me akruti se hi shadi karunga, aur wo meri marzi he iski nahi.

Joshi is boiling up but is doubtful now. Khud jo isne suna tha psycho ka ranting...

D : Dhamkiya to muje bhi milti thi, bas suicid ke roop me. Us din me bat karne aya tha, to hath katne ka natak kiya tha isne ghar par. Yad hoga apko.

Joshi's brows are all screwed up now [ flashback of psycho's excuses over the cut on her wrist ]

D : phir fractur ka natak. mere ghar ayi aur waha kya kya tamasha khada kiya...ayi se itne jhoot bole, kyu apse bhi to jhoot kitne bole. Kya zarurat thi use utne din waha rehne ki? Lene aye the na use.

Joshi thinks about the maid's dubious story of psycho falling and getting her arm fractured, and the major telling off psycho gave him nd supriya wen they went to bring her home.

D : [ sarcastic ] Entertainment shayad kam pad gayi thi, isliye meri behen ki zindagi se bhi khelne lagi. Kahaniya to aur bhi bahot he. Ghar le jayiye apni beti ko, baki ka wo bata degi.

Entertainment!!.outstandingly sarcasticLOLClap

Joshi looks at all of them turn by turn. Psycho is completely psycho now. Starts mumbling lekin nothing is distinct. None of her excuses coherent. She is completely at a loss, and real tears this time. She has lost the game now.

J : [ angry ] Ghar chal Sona. [ takes her hand and starts for the door ]

Psycho starts to say something, then looks to Daksh beseechingly. She even reaches out a hand to him [ totali nuts, told youTongue]

D : Mr. Joshi.

Joshi turns, irritated, holding back the derailed girl like you would an ill-mannered child.

D : Ho sake to apni beti ko samjha dijiye ki me koi trophy nahi hu jo wo baki sabko harake hasil kar le... Me Sonakshi se shadi nahi karne wala. Iss bar wo apni nas sach me kat le, seediyo se gire ya phir kahi aur se [ killer look for psycho ] muje koi farak nahi padta. Jaise apne kaha tha, door rahunga isse.

Iss dialogue pe tho..bajavo seetiWink..lved it..Clap

Joshi walks off, dragging psycho with him to her car.

Psycho keeps turning back, mumbling "Daksh" every few seconds.

She is bundled into the car.

Daksh  looks on dispassionately.                              ... contd ...

 

ps : guys don wry, only 2 more parts...phir happi eve afteSmile... 



Absolutely brilliantClap..daksh ke dialogues tho...Thumbs UpThumbs Up..Gr8 job aish..simple but superb powerful dialoguesClap and scene..psycho ka tho bajgaya bandLOL


Edited by lucky.m - 03 October 2011 at 1:20am

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mysti...thnx darlinHug...lekin aur nahi pls pls pretty pls...me sohini se tang aa gayi hu babeConfused...

ab to bas muje happi eva afte karvana he dakshna kaSmile...dhulai done, thoda sa emo left, phir...guesesWink ?

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Posted: 03 October 2011 at 1:47am | IP Logged
lucky meri jaan...thnkuHug...was waitin 2 c which ones u'd hilite 2deLOLLOLLOL vaise bhi muje lag raha tha ki psycho ki bajane ke liye dialogs wud b more satisfyin, thappad se bhi zyadaWink...nd joshi ko bhi sunane ko mila khoob saraLOL njoyd writin dis particular part...equal 2 d initial round f thappadsLOLLOL glad u did 2Smile
 
 
ps : poetry...cudnt resist as usualTongue


Edited by sweetaish - 03 October 2011 at 1:49am

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Yaar Sweetu... tu ne to sahi main zoor ka jhatka zoor se dilaya hai LOL...
I must say intezaar ka faal sachi bahut mitta hai yaar... Big smile
Dakshu ke har ek dialogue ke liye zor se taliya Clap muahTongue 
big jadu ki jappi dear...Hug
I like ki tune bhi Ayush ko +ve kiyaTongue... I too hope ki SSBN main bhi aaisa hi ho...Wink
Ur idea of revealing psycho in front of her don papa was very nice... Just loved it Clap
Each and every dialogue is superb Tongue Esp this one of Dakshu
D : Agar itna sab kuch sun kar bhi apko kuch samaj nahi aya, tho shayad apki beti ke sath apko bhi therapy ki zarurat he. ROFLROFLROFL
Joshi ki bhi aankhen khol di mast mast dialogues se... wah wah Clap Hug

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