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FF :dakshna reunion,versn 2.0 (Page 10)

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Posted: 30 September 2011 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetaish

PART  10:
 
 
Daksh and Naina are out in the patio with their coffee...

D : Station se shuru karte he...
N : Station se...?
D : [ smiles ] Ha, tum jo mera dil leke gayi na wahi se...
N : Daksh pls...
D : Mazaq nahi kar raha.
N : [ tears in her eyes ] Janti hu. [puts her hand to his face] Me janti hu. PAr mere pas aur koi rasta nahi tha...
He takes her hand down and kisses it. "Hmm. Lekin ab theek he. Muje mil gaya jo mene kho diya tha..."
N : [ half smile ] Kaha kho diya...? Me humesha tumhari hu, aur mera pyaar bhi.
D : Ha. Aur mera pyaar akele Mumbai CST se train pakad kar yaha Darjeeling me aa gaya. Me bechara wahi station pe reh gaya...[ cups her face in his hands ] Dekho ab rona mat shuru kar dena...abhi tumhari momma se vada kiya tha mene ki rulaunga nahi...Chalo ab muje ek smile do...
N : Ek to tum ne muje rulaya, aur...[ thodi stubborn ] Nahi, pehle muje kahani sunao.
D : Pehle smile.
N : Daksh.
D : Naina.
They have a mini staring competition of half a minute, and then Naina breaks into a smile.
D : [ softly ] Ab lag rahi ho tum meri pyaari Naina...[ kisses her forehead ]
She hugs him then, and he smiles contentedly.
D : Ab shuru karu...?
N : Ha...
 
 

to yaha se previous day ka flashback shuru hota he guys...
 
 
[noon, outside Mumbai CST]
 

Anger has replaced shock by now, and Daksh opens the car door, fully intending to bash someone up.
His phone rings. It's Sanket. He listens in for a minute or so, replies in a few short sentences, starts the car and leaves.

 

[hospital]

 
Sanket walks out, finds Sonakshi and tells her they are leaving. He calls up a taxi.
En-route to P-zoo, he advises psycho to call home and get her car, since Daksh had some place to go to, would be back late and wont be able to drop her back. [ witch ne apni car vapis bhijwai thi, cos she'd intended to get ayi 2 convinc Daksh 2 drop her, part 2 f her day's plan. 1st part mene flop karvadi, ye bhi Evil Smile]
Psycho agrees, wondering where Daksh could be, and what her chances are of getting out of this one. She texts Rohini, gets no response. She texts Rohini again.

 

[Ayush's house]

 
Ayush is on his way somewhere; he sees Daksh's car coming up the driveway, and waits for him.
Daksh walks up, all controlled violence.
Ayush gives a mild smile as greeting.
D : Kahi jane ki jaldi he.
A : [ uncharacteristically calm ] Nahi, me wahi aa raha tha. Muje tumse bat karni thi.
D : Ha muje bhi, [ steps up ] lekin muje bas ek saval ka jawab chahiye.
A : [ frowns ] Poocho...
D : Tumhara Sonakshi Joshi se kya talluk hai?
 

                                                                  ... contd ...
 
 
 
ps : guys...sry...aj i hapnd 2 read sme topics nd Wus...lagta he CVs r gna bring in sme more emo blkmail in supriya's form, nd Naina ki kurbani me ek aur chaptr add hoga. damn. mood ud gaya mera...baki wil put up in sme time...
Im so excited to know whats nextBig smile and sweetaish,i like ur evil smile!!ClapLOL 

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Posted: 30 September 2011 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by LadyMystique

Im so excited to know whats nextBig smile and sweetaish,i like ur evil smile!!ClapLOL 
 
ouch...mysti...u cal me sweet nd den tel me u lik my evil smilLOL
thnx jaanuHug...wrking on d last partsSmile...get bak 2 u asap...
smilSmiles,
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Posted: 30 September 2011 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
guys...marna mat plsSmile...i hv sum place 2 go 2de, wil b bak super late...last minut decsn tha...aaj baki ka most probly nahi dal paungi, lots f editing left...sry sry sry...

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Posted: 01 October 2011 at 3:09am | IP Logged
No problem Aish kal ke liye wait kar sakte hai hum sab... Wink Enjoy ur day Tongue

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Posted: 01 October 2011 at 3:16am | IP Logged
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Thats fine yaar, U seriously desrve a brk..I am sure wapas aane ke baad..aur acha fiction milenge tumseWink..Enjoy ur day buddy but missing uConfused

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Posted: 01 October 2011 at 4:10am | IP Logged
We know that u r not gonna dissapoint us with ur fiction...so we dont mind waiting even foreverSmile have fun...take care sweetaishHug

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Posted: 01 October 2011 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
helo my darlinsHug...gud mornSmile misd u guys yestedeHug...
was really late wen i came bak, so editing marathon me ab start kar rahi huTongue
wil try ki aj hi khatm kar du, nd we can go bak 2 our simpl simpl chotu romo scenesWink
 
loads f smilSmiles,
 
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Posted: 01 October 2011 at 11:39pm | IP Logged

Ok my darlins...time 4 anodr big disclaimerTongue mene finali haar maan li. i did manag 2 botch t up, lekin CVs ke utna screw up to CVs hi kar sakte heLOLLOLLOL

 
pls ignore the loopholes if any in the plot, kyu ki hamara main agenda to thappad nd dhulai thi sohini ki LOL...[ which due to tim constraints i havnt been abl 2 perfectTongue, advanc me srySmile ] chalo chodo. hop u guys hav fun age ke parts meSmile...
 
 

PART 11 :

[P-zoo]

 

All inmates of P-zoo are assembled in the front room.

The taxi comes up and Ayi rushes out to get them. Psycho is ignored for the time being, so she troops in after them. Her car has arrived btw.

Aku is escorted indside.

 

Blank faces greet psycho; Rohini is nowhere to be seen ...

Ayi and kaki make akruti sit on the sofa.

Psycho is uneasy, and decides to go lookin for her partner in crime.

S : Vahini kaha he...? Dikhai nahi de rahi...

A : Apne kamre me he.

psycho is about to skip off to Rohini's room, when there is this roll of thunder from behind : "RUK JAO SONAKSHI."

Shocked, psycho freezes in her tracks and turns. It's Ayi...

Sanket goes up to his room.

 

[sanket's room]

Rohini is sitting on the bed with a defeated expression. [ uski dhulai round one has been alredi done by ayi,verbal dhulai cos she's pregoTongue; sry guys but i din hav d patienc to tolerate dis one charactr so much... ]

Sanket closes the door and walks up to her. She gets up.

S : Akruti ne jo kaha kya wo sach he?

R : [ looks down ] Kya kaha usne.

S : Tum janti thi ki sonakshi aur ayush mil kar ye sab kar rahe the?

R : [ defiant tone ] Akruti ko kuch galat fehmi hui hogi, wo Naina-

S : Bas bhi karo rohini. Naina chali gayi. Aur kitna dosh dogi use? Me ye janna chahta hu ki bahar jo ladki khadi he, uske fayde ke liye jo bhi mere behen ke sath usne kiya, usme tum bhi shamil thi?

Rohini looks up, excuses nahi aa rahe...Lekin her disgust for Aku, Naina and all things in P-zoo except herself is plainly written in her unrepentant eyes, and Sanket has finally had enough.

Room ke andar se ek zordar Slap ki awaz ati he Evil Smile..., and Ayi and the others rush up.

Sanket walks out of the room calmly, closes the door even more calmly and turns to ayi.

Sankt : Kuch mat kaho ayi. Muje ye bahot pehle kar dena chahiye tha.

A : beta, Rohini...

Sanket nods. "Akruti, Chintu sab sahi the. Rohini sab janti thi."

Ayi turns to psycho.

psy : Ayi, me--

Ayi gives one Phatak! to psycho...agla Slap...Dancing

A : [ thundering ] Tu muje ayi mat bula.

Psycho's jaw drops.

A : Tune to meri mamta ka mazaq banakar rakh diya...Mene tujhe apni beti man li, tumpar itna bharosa kiya, iss parivar ka hissa mana tumhe.kitna pyaar diya tujhe is parivar ke har ek ne...Aur tune hame ye taufa diya? Itna bada dhoka?!

Shyamal takes it up from there.

She yanks psycho towards her. "Tu kya acchai ki murat ban rahi thi iss ghar me...Akruti ke liye itna pyar aur sahanubhuti? Sab natak tha? Kya bigada he usne tera? meri beti ki zindagi ke sath khelkar tujhe kya mila? Aur kitne chal chale he tumne yaha?

psy : [ nautanki shuru D'oh] Ap log ye...ye kya keh rahe he...Ayush-

snkt : Meri Rohini se bat hui thi abhi. Aur jhoot bolne ki mat socho ab.

psy : [ turns to ayi beseechingly ] Ayi...ap to mera viswas karo...Me ne iss ghar ke kisi ke khilaf kuch nahi--

A : Bas kar sonakshiAngry ! Muje tumhari shakal bhi nahi dekhni. Nikal ja yaha se...

Psycho backs off slowly,mask of innocence in place, furiously calculating...Damage control karne ki soch rahi he [ obv, psycho he isliye...doesnt kno wen she has lost Angry ] her phone rings : Ayush's name is flashing on the screen...She whirls, flies down the steps, yanks the car door open and leaves in a cloud of dust...

Sanket gets his ph out and dials Daksh's num. "Ha chintu. Wo nikal chuki he yaha se."

He cuts the call and walks in.

Ayi is sitting on the sofa, dazed.

He goes and sits on the arm of the sofa, puts his arm around her.

A : Beta...Rohini...usne...

Sanket nods. Bechara has nothing to say to that. He sits down next to his mother.

Aku sits on the other side, and starts giving her a detailed update...

 

                                                                   ... contd ...



Edited by sweetaish - 26 October 2011 at 10:22pm

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