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maaneet ss:Shringaar (Page 9)

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Read both parts and are awesome!!! waiting for updates, do pm me plzzz...

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18 cmmnts ...i wnt least 22 next tym n den nly will i updateCryd update is lng so cmmnts shud b long too...

Part 3-

Geet-maan ,dev bro ,naintara bhabhi it was very nice to meet all of you…………………after years though……………but I have a lot of project works to do……………….and my prelims are also coming up so I gotta go

So byeeaaa to all

As maan saw her diminishing and then slowly vanising …………………he flinched and clenched his fist

Dev-it has been 4 years bro………………….forget it

Maan holds dev by shoulders suddenly-dev tumhare liye ye kehna aasaan hai

You have naintara with you…………….you know she will always be with you…….but me

Naintara-veerji she is a child……………..how will she understand your feelings

Dev-bro it was just your crush

Maan-this is where both of you are wrong…………………….

Naintara though she iwas a child,she is not now she is 17 and according to me a 17 year old knows human psyche…………………and dev please don't demean my feelings by a mere word like crush

He started walking and sat on a nearby bench

Maan-dev and naintara you both don't even know what you both have got and its value

You both love each other………….are married and thus have a social tag to your relation

You both own a business firm of your own and you work with co-operation

You always have somebody for you

I know you both are always there for me but…………………………..

Ddeeevvv and he choked

Dev took him in a hug as he slowly sobbed

Dev-I do understand you mann bro

Maan-I live in dust dev……………my life has never seen sunlight……….even I want to feel the happiness

Mom passed away and it took me a lot of time to come back and focus on my studies

Dad was so busy infact loss of mom was one immportant reason which kept him better busy that he never could find time for me

You and naintara were always there beside me……………….but you both had a space of your own and I didn't want to interfere

I was living in darkness dev…………………yes I was

I had no friends……………….and the few that wanted to be my friends were because of my money which I strongly protested

And to make myself busy to understand self worth I joined the business in early days of my life and also to give dad rest

I feel like work is only thing…………………infact I am numb…………I just cannot feel anything

Dev saw his brother breaking down…………….slowly but beyond improvement and he was helpless

Naintara always respected her veerji………………though he was younger than her still she respected him

He was a man of words…………………his inner strength was worth compliments………………..but she saw a new side today he was breaking down,shattered that he was crying badly in her husbands embrace with people out of curiosity peeping from the park boundries with a question tag on their face

"their builder………………he was famous industrialist……………….always known to be a perfectionalist was crying?????"

Naintara got the grip over the situation and pulled all the three of them inside the car………………………    ………….as the driver parked the car outside the building maan saw a lady of middle age hanging clothes on the window sil for them to dry

Maan and dev at once whispered with a smile-mummy ji

Rano handa was not only a neighbour but a maa to motherless dev and maan

Maan-one day they entered our life naintara

That day my life changed

We  got a mother……………….dev was so happy to see mummy ji………………….

Nainatara-who mummy ji???

Dev-geet parents mohinder uncle and rano aunty…………………..aunty is our mummyji

Our life was filled with happiness………………….

Days that they were………………………

Maan-she was an angel………………my geet was my angel

My feelings ,emotions,desires all were for her

I started to feel again…………………….feelings that made mockery of me as the handas left without a word

Dev patted maans shoulder

Maan facial expressions changed from soft to hard

Maan-no dev not anymore

Never ever will I allow this to happen again

My happiness was always snatched away from me and I suffered like a good man but not this time

She came conquered and left me that tore me apart

But no not again yhis time I will fight……………..i wont let my happiness go let her happiness suffer

Dev and naintara senced the determination in his voice

Dev-maan bro what are…………………

Maan-dev lets go up and meet them…………………..

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precap-maan-geet get this that you are mine

shhh dont even try geet you will hurt yourself if you try to hurt meBig smile

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Wow seems i am the first to press like button and comment also.
Loved the update.
Liking the characters.
Pls continue soon.
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