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maaneet ss:Shringaar (Page 18)

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Posted: 03 October 2011 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
part 13 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Posted: 04 October 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
loved the update...
though short but eager to know wat happens to maan

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Posted: 04 October 2011 at 7:06am | IP Logged

hii my dearies

missing u all a lot
acha by d way today is saptami so may durga maa bless all of u
abt d ss shringaar
well all of u r interested tht wat happens a month latr
i will say im dere to give u all a biiiggg surprise
also im thnkfull 2 all my frnds n fans 4 2 pg cmnt n 34 lyks support
im blessd 2 get u all

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Posted: 06 October 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
omggg

u r also an awesum writer...
hav just read d prologue now...
but vil complete d ctory soon n den vil again comment...
loved s intro...

keep it up dear...

love
MISHTY

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 7:01pm | IP Logged
plss read d note in the next post Part 14-

She placed her head on his chest and cried …………………first it was sobs and then it turned into hysterical trails of cries

Geet-why maan why???how could you …………….tell me how could you ever………….

Days and night I prayed to get you back ………….for that one word of yours ,the manner in which you used to take my name,your touch ,your smell ………………YOU ARE IN ME MAAN

How could you ever think of leaving me

Tearing my heart apart

Shattering me into broaken pieces giving me no time to realize your love and its loss

Where breathing hitched ,life didn't prevail ,maan your love is that extreme land of wonder where with you heaven seems less a bliss and without you let hells be broaken down…………………

I died a million death and guilt had chewed me into millions

All thought I was guilty……………..that your love was not reciprocated by me was the reason of my sobs and guilt……………………but no when I thought you would be lost all feelings drained out of me and in that second I wrote my life to you……………………if you are there im there……………..else im not even ready to be a living dead

The poison that instilled in my heart againt you in a momentum of fear of loosing you washed away all agony replacing then with a beautifull smell of yours

Your eyes…………………your eyes speak a lot

They spak love ,concern……………..

MAAN

Kill me with your own hands im ready to surrender but never think of leaving me cause ill live not a second more

Yes that now im desperate answer my thirst

Let me drown in you and aceive a death where im reborn to be a part of you

Khuda bhi agar mujhse shikayat kare

Dariyaan bhi agar apko lehron me bahana chahe

Ye dharti agar apko khud me samana chahe

Ye asmaan agar apko pukarna chahe

To mai khadi do jaungi baadha banker sab ke beech me

Ya jeevan maut ke har raah chalungi apke saath

Aa aaj khud ko mujh me samale

Aa paas aake mujhe tu chura le

main aaj beh jaana chahti hoon tere sang

Tujh me khoke paana chahti hoon khudko

Khuda bhi agar mughse aaj shikayat kare

Ki aap ko main unse door kyun rakhti hoon to kah dena us uparvale se ki

Jaan apki mujh me basti hai

Aatma meri aapme

Churana hai to hame churalo

Varna parinda ek pankh ke bagair jee na payega

Aaj mai apki hona chahti hoon

Khuda ko bhi shikayat ka mauka nahi dena chahti hoon

……………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

He had seen her broaken from inside………………….he pained to see her tears but cherished to know it was for him……………..4 days before from this night when she had held him ,supported him to climb up the stairs to his room …………………the look in her eyes had shocked him beyond repair followed by the words…………the only words she spoke after  he had gained conciousness

"maan make me yours……………….give me a chance ………………….or ill not have strength to return back  from conditions worse you had"

Ultimatum was given

Proofs of trust and love were placed when he had filled her forehead this morning with crimson colour making her appear beautifull like the view at the time of sunset when sky is shying and turning into night to lead to final unite of two body and one heart

She was  clad in a beautifull salwar of red colour a perfect match to her blushing cheeks and full lips

But when he sat opposite to her on the bed she had cried her hearts out leading themselves to turn up in a comfortable position………rather her suiting into best place in this world on his chest listening to their heartbeat and secured in his cocooning arms

After complains and cryings he finally couldn't hold himself more and looked deeply into her eyes which promissed  back equal love and stopped her narration of hindi poem for him

Maan-jaan…………….geet

It was a mere whisper and had a seductive touch to it that could snatch the hearts proud

Maan-mai tumhare saath zindagi ki har pal bitaunga …………pyaar ke har ek labz ko hum nayi arth denge

Jaan  ab aur nahi

Shone hai na meri geetu rani

Kitni badi ho gayi hai meri baby geet

Shayarani bhara andaaz leke apni ankhon se baat karti hai

Aaj hum vo bachpan ki dosti ko ek naya makam dene jaa rahe hai

Pyaar ko hamesha ke liya gaanth se bandhne jaa rahe hai jisse ki

Ham ek ho jaye

She nodded and touched his cheeks

He then brought his face down and her lips parted to feel him

The feeling was beyong explaination as she now felt him in her

A part of her

They were finally one

One to be never parted

'Thy werst together to applause the shine of love and create a silver aura  around to shown  the light in their darkness and let the dark bask in sunlight glory"

They were one

One for all time in a rhythm that describes the limitless  bounds of period……………………

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precap-morning afterBig smile

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
sumthings wrong wid d site d links are not directly connecting
byd way i think im gonna hook up tym 2 update d odr ff n ss also
mera fb accnt:http://www.facebook.com/#!/profile.php?id=100002952946788&sk=wall
though d name is kasturi myself ischandu
so plsss requst 2 all my readers add me in fb so tht u cn get d link frm dere which will directly cnnct u until dis prob is fixed
dont kno wt got into my head bt hv screwed up d update wid a lot of eng and hin ...plsss bear wid mine literary attacks


Edited by chandreyeeroy - 09 October 2011 at 7:24pm

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 8:17pm | IP Logged
Chandu it was a fabulous upd. Thank u thank u 4 this part.
Loved ur both the poems. It were so deeply written. Oh i just loved it.
Pls pls i beg u , give next upd soon

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
It was one of best parts written by u

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