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Posted: 22 September 2011 at 12:04am | IP Logged

for the last update i got nly 10 cmmnts n 18 lyks m very upset...plss u all cmmnt or else ill update naina tore only

Part 4-

His love was deep…………………..no it was not facination ……………it was not just some mere crush but it was truee love

In early life people often believe in film romance…………………………they have multiple crushes but he was not of that league

He was the man himself maan singh khurana

As the two brothers got out of the car………………….naintara helplessly followed them…………….it was the first time that she was uterly confused about the khurana brothers behaviour and her womanly sixth sence was not working ………………………….(bechari aise hi she has to samahalofy her romantic husband n abhi veerji ka romance………….shock for her lolsss)

As mrs rano handa opened the door she was shocked to see two well grown man touching her feet

Rano-wwhhhooo aree youuu

As maan and dev lifted their heads up she was shocked and then she gave a tearfull smile

Rano-dev ………………maan………………oh my goddd

Dev-mummyji

Maan hugged her and said-I missed you

Soon geet peeked and said –are I thought you all must be busy………………..you have come home……….come come

Soon naintara was introduced to the handas and both the ladies were busy talking while maan was busy with geet and her assingment and dev was busy watching his bro and his happiness

Mr handa joined them after an hour or so

As it was time for them to leave ………………………suddenly maan said

Maan-mummyji,uncle aap log kab shift ho rahe hai???

Mummyhi-matlab

Maan-matlab last time aap bina kuch bole mughse door chale gaye ………………geet ko mugh se door kar diya ab mai ye nahi hone dunga

Dev-bro don't joke  ha

Maan-as if im joking dev………………..seriously uncle when are you three shifting to khurana mansion

Mr.handa –beta aise thodi hota hai

Maan- I don't want to hear a no and if you say you will not shift

Dev-bro stop it

Maan-geeettt geeettt

Geet came running from the room inside

Geet-kya hua maan aap chilla kyun rahe ho

Maan-geet tell your parents that in anycase you are going with me so its better they come too

Geet-huh what are you saying im confused

Dev-nothing geet he has lost it

Bro aap chaliye………………bro lets go

Maan pulled out of devs grip and held geets hand and said

Maan-geet lets go

Geet-whats wrong with you maan where are you going

Mummyji-maan geet ko chodo ye tum kya kar rahe ho

Maan-something that should have been done far before

And maan started pulling geet along with him and maqde her forsefully made her sit on the car

Dev ran behind him but maan sped away with a crying geet

Mr and mrs handa were deeply concerned and they sat in the next car with dev and naintara and drovr towards the mansion

The four elders were silent in the journey and the last sentence dev said was –he loved her

Mummyji gasped whereas uncle was caught by an unknown fear which had much chances of becoming true when they reached the mansion

All of them gasped to see geet and maan and were shocked and rooted at the dooor itself

Maan-dare anybody try to take any action against me…………………….you all know that nothing can tame me………………..im the maan singh khurana………power is my form

Geet came running and hugged her mother and father and then between her sobs the sentence she spoke stunned them all

Geet-maa …….. papa vo……………….

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precap-geets sentence to her parentsBig smile

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Posted: 22 September 2011 at 4:56am | IP Logged
 me first. Thumbs Up

kya yaar u left us on cliff hanger.
aisa kya hua jo sab itne shocked hai.
let me try to gues.
dnt tell me ki maan ne geet ki maang bhar di apn khoon se aur sumthing like that.
hope geet tthat she loves maan too. i dnt want maaneet separation



Edited by tinu.jindal - 22 September 2011 at 5:01am

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Posted: 22 September 2011 at 5:03am | IP Logged
awesome update..loved it

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Posted: 22 September 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
awsem but don't be a cliffhanger and please update naina tore

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Posted: 22 September 2011 at 5:41am | IP Logged
awesome, brilliant part
loved it

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Posted: 22 September 2011 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Nice update
Loved it

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Posted: 22 September 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4  d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Posted: 22 September 2011 at 7:07am | IP Logged
OMG you have really left us on a cliffhanger dear.
What happened to Geet that all are so shocked.
Pls continue soon the suspense is killing.
Thanx for pm dear.

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