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ARHI FF : Life and its twists !!! *On Hold* (Page 37)

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Posted: 17 October 2011 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anita_21492

whoa!!!! that was a twist
i can't wait til the next update


glad u liked the "twist" WinkWink

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Posted: 17 October 2011 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pri12

very gr8...iss confusion ko  kya nam dooon...lolzzz


Thank you soo much dear ...

Kya naam de ?? Nishi's mad FF ?? WinkWink

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Posted: 18 October 2011 at 10:26am | IP Logged
atlast i got what i want... but i never ever expected that this much earlier you will make arnav to realise his misunderstanding of kaajal and  khushi... how come this time you became so so generous that you fulfilled our wishes without any twistsLOLunexpected things only will usually happen in your ff rightLOLLOLloved the part so much... as usual khushi falling into his armsSmile
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Posted: 18 October 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maghalakshmi

atlast i got what i want... but i never ever expected that this much earlier you will make arnav to realise his misunderstanding of kaajal and  khushi... how come this time you became so so generous that you fulfilled our wishes without any twistsLOLunexpected things only will usually happen in your ff rightLOLLOLloved the part so much... as usual khushi falling into his armsSmile

Lol ... u din get it i guess OuchOuchOuch ... no twist in the update was the twist EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedLOLLOLLOL
yaar don tell all unexpected things happen in my fic ... thou a LOT does happen WinkWink
Glad you liked the part Smile

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Part 14 :

Arnav - Khushi ...

Kaajal - Kaajal ...

Khushi - (turning to face him) ... Jiii ...

 

Ok now Arnav was sure there was something wrong with his head.ConfusedConfused He thought he was hallucinating. LOLhe remembered he hadn't taken his medicines in the morning. Not a good day to mess with diabetes he thought.Ouch But , the doctor never told him that he would hallucinate if he didn't take his medicines, he told he would faint if the sugar levels decreased in his body. ErmmErmmUnhappy

Arnav - (not knowing what to say ) ... What the ... ??? Confused

Khushi - Kya hua ?? ... Shocked

Kaajal - Iski sui "What the..." pe atki hui kyun hai ?? ... Kuch aur bolna nahi aata kya ?? LOLLOL

Arnav - What ?? ... (making his weird face)Wacko

Kaajal – And Now ... "the" goes missing ... cool ... aisa hi karta raha toh shaam tak bolna bhool jaayega ... (totally annoyed)LOLLOLLOL

Khushi - (to Kaajal) Chup kar ek minute ke liye Ermm... Arnavjii(takes a step near him) ... aap ko kya ho gaya ?? Aapne aaj dawayi toh li hai naa ?? ya phir se bhool gaye ?? ConfusedConfused

Arnav - Khushi ... woh ... (not understanding whom to address. )ConfusedConfused

Kaajal - Eh ?? ... Tujhe kaise pata isko medicine leni thi ??Confused ... mental patient to waise hee lagta hai LOLLOL... kahi mere cabin main girte waqt iske sar pe chot to nahi aa gayi ??ShockedShocked (she whispered to Khushi) ... aur bhoolne lag gaya ?? ... LOLLOL

Khushi - Kyaaa ???ShockedShocked ... aap gire the ?? ... (panicking asked Arnav ,now both her hands were on his shouldersEmbarrassedEmbarrassed) ... Kahi chot toh nahi aayi aapko ??? ... sar mai dard ho raha hai kya ??

Kaajal - Laga bhi hai toh main theek kar deti hoo ... ek aur baar girega toh theek ho jayega ... (she added sarcastically) ... LOLLOL

Arnav - what ?? ... tum mujhe ?? ... mujhe ... Arnav Singh Raizaada ko maarogi ?? ... tumhari himmat kaise hui yeh bolne ki ... AngryAngry

Kaajal - kyun ?? ... kyun nahi ho sakti himmat ?? and FYI cabin mai meri himmat ki demo toh de diya hai ... AngryAngry

Khushi - Shaant ho jaayiye dono ... Stern Smile

Arnav - (pointing to Kaajal) ... dekho Khushi !! ... mere patience ko test mat karo ... AngryAngry

 

Both at the same time :

Khushi - hum ne kya kiya ?? ... ConfusedOuch

Kaajal - Kaajal ... aur waise bhi main koi school teacher nahi hoo jo test loongi ... aur waise bhi tum toh school kids se bhi horrible ho ... LOLLOL

Arnav - Khushi !!! ... just ...

 

Kaajal and Khushi at the same time :

Kaajal - For the last time ... it is *Kaajal *... Angry

Khushi - aap humse baat kar rahe hain to hume dekhkar baat kijiye ... OuchOuch

 

Arnav - what kaajal ??... Confused

Kaajal - mera naam ... my name is Kaajal ... (she almost yelled)...

Arnav - what ????ShockedShockedShocked Kaise ??ShockedShocked ... kabse ?? ... kya bakwaas kar rahi ho ?? ... (with a bewildered expression) ... Nuke

Kaajal - what do you mean kaise ?? ...

Khushi - (now completely losing her patience )... CHUPPP !!!! ... EK DUM CHUPPP !!! AngryAngryAngryAngry

Arnav and Kaajal - woh ...

Khushi - ek baar bolu toh samajh mai nahi aati ???AngryAngry Maine kaha CHUPP !!! ...(now turning to the workers) ... koi circus chall raha hai yaha pe ?? ya mai naach rahi hoo jo aap sab kaam chodke hume ghoor rahe hai ... jayiye ... jaake apna kaam kijiye ...AngryAngry (now turning to Arnav and Kaajal who were a bit surprised by her behaviourShocked) ... aur aap dono (pointing at them) ... hum dekh rahe hai ... bacchon ki tarah lad rahe ho ... actually bacche bhi aap dono se better honge ... Kaajal tumse mujhe yeh ummeed nahi thi Thumbs Down... hum kabse keh rahe hai ki hume bolne toh do ... lekin nahi ...Angry.

Kaajal - par ... tu ... Unhappy

Khushi - chup !!! maine kab kaha ki meri baat khatam ho gayi ?? ... aur aap ... (turning towards Arnav ,placing both her hands on her hips) ... hume laga tha ki do saalon main aapko thodi si toh akal aa gayi hogi ... lekin nahi ... lagta hai kuch log kabhi nahi badalte Ouch... hum aapse 2 saal baad mil rahe hai ... aur aap humse yeh poochne ki bagair ki hum kaise hai ... paagalon ki tarah humari behen se ladd rahe hai ??AngryAngry ... (after a moment of silence)Hey devi maiyya !! ...pata nahi duniya ke saare namoone hume hi kyun milte hai ... (she stomped her foot)LOLLOL

Arnav – (now in full ASR mood after Khushi's bashing)Khushi Kumari gupta ...in 2 saalon main tumhare paas sabse baat karne ka time tha , lekin sirf mujhse nahi Unhappy... aur kal us award function main aise baithi thi jaise ki mujhe jaanti tak nahi ... aur aaj subah bhi anjaan jaise tumne baat kiya ... kya matlab nikalu iska ... gussa nahi aayega toh aur kya ...

Khushi – Gussa !!! huh !!! D'ohhume samajh jaana chahiye tha ki gusse mai aap dimaagh lagana bhool jaate hai ...aapne kabhi bhi yeh socha ki jiji ke paas mobile tha lekin hum aapke ghar phone kyun karte the ... aap hi nahi uthate the toh hum kya karte ??UnhappyUnhappy ... aur kal ... main toh yaha thi hi nahi ... toh hume dehkne ka sawaal hi nahi uth tha ...  (after a few seconds )oh haan ... Kaajal ... D'oh

Arnav - Kaajal ?? (confused)Confused

Khushi - haan Kaajal ... humari behen ...

Kaajal – Sirf Behen hi nahi ... hum twins hai ...(going and standing next to Khushi) agar english samajh main nahi aayi ... toh hindi mai *judwaa* ... got it ?? LOL

Arnav - What ?? Ouch

Kaajal – (again irritated)Phir se "What" ... isne toh "What" "what" kehte mere dimaagh ki watt laga di haiROFL ... seriously Khush tu iske liye mujhse naaraaz hai ... (pointing at Arnav) ... Thumbs Down

Arnav - What the ...

Kaajal - again ?? ... tumhe "What" aur "The" ke alawa aur kuch nahi aata kehne ko ?? ...

Arnav - how dare you !! ... tum ...

Kaajal - Wow ... is ne "what" ke alawa kuch aur bola ... isko toh award milni chahiye ... (she said sarcastically) ... LOLLOL

Khushi - aap dono phir se shuru ho gaye ?? ... Theek hai ... hum hi chale jaate hai yaha se ... kyunki aap dono toh humari baat sunenge nahi ... humari samajh mai yeh nahi aa raha ki hum aapse yeh sab kyun keh rahe hai ... aap dono ko ladna hai ...arm wrestle karna hai ... ya ek doosre ka khoon karna hai ... shauck se kariye ... lekin humare saamne nahi ... (and she started walking away) AngryAngry

 

Both Arnav and Kaajal : Khushi ...

Kaajal - tumhare bulane se nahi rukegi ...

Arnav - aur tumhare bulane se toh ruk rahi hai (sarcastically)... 

Kaajal - you know what ?? ... actually she is right ... main tumse behes karke apna time kyun waste kar rahi hoo ?? ... isse toh better hai ki main usse jaake baat karu ... kam se kam uske paas ek brain hai jo working condition mai hai ...

Arnav - NO !!! ... main usse pehle baat karunga ...

Kaajal - Kyun ?? ... waise bhi woh tumse pehle baat nahi karegi ...

Arnav - tumhe lagta hai ki woh tumse pehle baat karegi ...

Kaajal - obviously ... (rolling her eyes) ... Thumbs Up

Arnav - obvious kya ?

Kaajal - kyun ki mai uski behen hoo ...

Arnav - aur mai... ( he didnt know what to say) ... OuchCry

Kaajal - rite ... ur no one to her ... I bet you don even know how to manao her ... ARRE Khush rukk ...

Both rushed towards her and stopped her . Arnav as usual held her wrist and Kaajal had gone ahead and stood blocking her way . Knowing she would melt anytime soon , she tried her best to maintain a tough demeanour.

Khushi - hato ... (she said to Kaajal) ...

Kaajal - (nodding her head sideways ) ... No ...

Khushi - humara haath chodiye ... (she said to Arnav) ...

Arnav just gripped harder...  Wink

Khushi - yeh kya battameezi hai ... aap dono apne aap ko samajhte kya hai ... AngryAngry

Kaajal - (before Arnav could answer) ... Main toh apne aapko Miss Universe samajhti hooLOLBig smile ... but darling ...yeh toh tumhe impress aur manane se raha ...sweetheart ... tum itna nakhra kyun kar rahi ho ?? ... you know ...yeh tumhe bilkul suit nahi karta ... WinkWink

Khushi - Hum nakhre kar rahe hai ?? ... Angry

Kaajal - Aur nahi toh kya ?? itna manane ki koshish kar rahi hoo ... aur tu maan hi nahi rahi ... (Khushi glared at her ) ... accha baba ... sorry ... (holding both her ears ) ... ab toh maan jaa ...Big smileBig smile

Arnav - (with some difficulty) ... I am sorry Khushi ... Smile

Khushi - pehle aap dono humara rasta aur haath chodiye ... (both did as asked which surprised her a bit) ...(to herself)itni jaldi maan gaye ?ConfusedConfused? ... aap dono ko mujhse nahi ek doosre se maafi mangni chahiye ...

Arnav and Kaajal - what ?? ShockedShockedShocked

Khushi - haan ...

Kaajal - no ... no ... no ..no no no ... nooo ..no no no ... noo ... mai iss sadu se (Arnav glared at her) maafi nahi maangungi ... LOLLOL

Khushi - (took one look at Arnav and he didnt look like he was goin to budge if she didn't ) ... theek hai ... jo tere mann mai aaye woh karr ... (she stomped and turned to leave) AngryAngry


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End of Part 14

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Hey guys !!! SmileSmile

I have posted the 14th Part of my FF ... Smile ...
I know , it has taken a longer time to update this part ... but I was held up with work and stuff ... so cudn make time to write CryCryCryCry

Please do lemme know how this part was , through ur comments and any suggestions are more than welcome ... SmileSmile

Please dont forget to "LIKE" the part if you liked it ...


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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 8:36am | IP Logged
oh gosh hahahaha
cant stop my self
lolzz rofl
so funny
loved i
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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 8:46am | IP Logged
wow,,loved it..its awsome..loved triangle's nok jhok..and khushi as judge.

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