although i'm not in a mood to update today, don't know why (vrushu knows it ) bt still hav to update, so here is a bit little short update... hope u like it!!!
in the morning heer woke early then everybody, she saw prem sleeping peacefully wid not wid his usual smile bt still a bit of it. she knew the reason abt not smiling that way bt prayed to god tht it cumes back soon. she kiss him on his cheek n went to washroom to freshen up.
after a while she was doin pooja whn prem, kiran n kulraaj also joined them. awl of them were havin a sulking face, nobody knew wht to do. to lighten up the mood heer asked everybody to cume hav breakfast.
kiran: magar heer mai nashtay keh liyai tu kuch laya nahi tha na.
heer: pata hai magar aj subah colony mai nashta wala khud akar day kar gaya aur kehnay laga its a part of the rent.
everybody breathen a life.
kiran: chalo shukar.
then everybody was eating bt heer saw prem wasn't eating it.
heer: prem kiya howa? nashta kyu nahi kar rahay?
heer: preet kiya?
prem: iss nay kuch khaya hoga, woh kal itna ghussay say kamray mai gaya tha.
heer becumes quiet n so did kiran n kulraaj whn they heard it.
heer: kyu na tum iss say baat karo?
prem looks at heer.
heer: iss say baat karlo aur pooch lo.
rem: u're ryte...mai abhi ja kar baat karta hoo n he went to talk to preet in his room.
kulraaj: tu bhi ja heer, prem baat karta karta emotional hojiaye ga!!
heer went in the room n saw that prem is dialing preet's number. prem saw heer cumin so he put the phoen on loudspeaker.
sumebody picks up the phone
prem: hello preet, mai prem.
preet: app kaun, mai kissi prem ko nhi jantaa.
prem n heer both got shocked bt knew tht he is angry on them
prem: mujhay pata hai tu mujh say naraz hai.
preet keeps quiet
prem (a bit sad n tearing up) :apnay PB say baat nahi karay gaa
preet: app hamesha aisa kartay ho, pehlay mujhay naraz kartay ho pher aisi kio baat kar daytay ho keh mai emotional ho jata ho.
prem n heer smile a bit in b/w their tears.
prem: acha choor, ghar mai sab kaisay hai, maa bauji sab??
preet: mujhay nhi pata!
prem: kiya matlab??
preet: mai kal say kamray keh bahir nhi gaya.
prem n heer shocked, :kiyaaa
prem: tu tunay kal say kuch nhi khaya?
preet: apko kiya parwa, app tu mujhay choor kar chalay gaye naa.
prem culdn't control anymore n start crying n looks other way.
heer knows prem won't be able to talk anymore.
heer: preet aisi kio baat nhi hai, teray PB tujh say buhat piyaar kartay hai...sab say zada
preet: tu bhabhi woh mujhko choor kar kyu gaye?
heer: preet halat he kuch aisay thay, tu agar apnay PB ko nahi samjay ga tu kaun samjay gaa.
preet calms down a bit.
preet: waisay unko bool day keh mainay kal raat mai khana kha liya tha,
prem listen thiz n also cumes back to phone.
prem: kis nay khelaya/
preet: mai kio choota bacha nhi hoo
prem n heer smiless
prem: but meray liyai tu hamesha hai
preet also smiles: woh kal meher kamray mai khana laye thi tu kha liya tha.
heer n prem relaxes a bit hearing thiz. they gets to know tht meher is there to take care of him
after few seconds:
prem feels good after hearing from his mouth PB
prem: haa preet
preet: i misses u n criesss
prem (controliing himself) : preet ami bhi tujhko miss karta hoo, aur tu gabra mat yeh tension jald solve hojiaye aur hum sath hoga. aur aisa thora hai keh tu mujh say milnay nhi asakta tu jab bhi chahay asaktaa.
preet: okay, abhi bauji nay bolaya hai , mai shaam mai ata ho.
prem: okay, apna khayal rakhna aur khana tyme par khana
preet: okay byeee.
as soon as preet keeps phone down, prem knelts down n cries. heer also lies down n hold his face removing his tears bt she herself was crying.
prem: mai ek acha bhai nhi ho heer, meray preet ko meri zaroorat hai aur mai uss keh sath nhi hoo
heer: prem aisi kio baat nhi, sab theek hojiaye ga, app dekhnaaa
prem hugs heer tightly n hold her tightly as if his life depended upon her.
prem: heer n snobss.
heer: himmat say kaam lo prem plzzz...sab kuch sahi hojaiye gaa.
both were crying n consoling each other in their arms bt both didn't knwo how to solve thiz awl. heer looks up in the sky n ask God to solve their problem soon n make their life back to normal wid love n care.
precap: remain the same as previous one...
sorry culdn't update a longer one bt will try to update tomorww again wid a bit longer...it depends...bt will try to do n will also out teh truth.
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Edited by repunzell - 03 November 2011 at 11:17am