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FF: Iss Desh Mai Hai Mera Dil Chapter 24 Pg 49 (Page 4)

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 1:32am | IP Logged
update soon di

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 3:34am | IP Logged
hey sry 4 commtng late
1st nd 2nd chapter was nic but too short. i want long update.
cont soon
nd i've already added u in my buddy list
thanx 4 PM

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kiran_28

hey sry 4 commtng late
1st nd 2nd chapter was nic but too short. i want long update.
cont soon
nd i've already added u in my buddy list
thanx 4 PM
i'l try to give a long chapter next tyme...its just tht i'm new to the writing stuff so it wuld take tyme!
thanks for commenting!

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 9:44am | IP Logged
thank u for the oustanding response...!!! thanks for commenting n pressing the like button.

here goes the next chapter and a long oneWink...

chapter 3:

in the morning heer came downstairs at the breakfast table n told the family that prem will be cumin day after three days...

preet: judaiyee jdaiyeee...aur itna intezaar karna paray ga heeriyai ko apnay prem kaaa!!!
gayatri: chp kar, har waqt heer ko tag karta rehta hai!
kio baat nhi beta, zaroor kio kaam hoga iss wajah say nhi ayaa!!
preet: ha bhabhi, hum haina apko company daynay keh liyai waisay bhi jab PB aye gay tu kaha app hamaray sath waqt guzaaray gi
heer becumes shy!!
lalit cumes: chup kar aur jo mai nay kaam diya hai woh ja kar karr!!!
preet: ja raha hoo!!! sab meray he peechay paray hotay haii!!! ufff!!
everyone gets to their work.

gayatri: veera beta tum bhi chali jio heer ar meher keh sath shoppin par!
veera: me wid thm NO WAYYY MOM!! n leaves frm there.
gayatri asf forgiveness on behalf of veera behaviour bt heer said ma its okay...isko waqt lagay ga.

it was evening n heer, meher n kuldi were shoppin bt heer was missing prem coz he haven't called ya picked up her phone n it was noticed by kuldi.
kuldi: kio kissi ko miss kar raha hai?
heer: nahi tu...aisi kio baat nahi hai
kuldi: mjh say nhi chuppa sakti...jaisay prem mujh say kabhi kuch nhi chuppa sakti waisay he tum bhi nhi!!
heer: woh kyu?
kuldi: prem zada tar meray pass rehta tha...ma keh anay say pehlay prem buhat choota tha tu woh har waqt meray sath rehta tha...woh ma ka sab say ladla beta tu hai magar ma say kuch bhi chuppa lay magar mujh say nahii!!
pata hai jab meri shaddi honay wali thi tu prem buhat lartaa tha keh mai apni kuldi ko kahi nhi janay dogaa...buhat roota tha...tu pher iss keh baad kiran nay decide kiya keh hum yehi rahay gay!
heer was listening awl thiz wis a sweet smile on her face.

evening passed, nyte passed but prem didn't call. she was really worried n don't know wht to do. the family was used to thiz bt heer being new in the family n she cared for prem also. waiting for soo long don't know whn nyte passed n she was slept.

in the mornin heer was very upset which was noticed by everyboy.
meher: kiya howa di? app pareeshan lag rahi hai?
preet: judaiye judaiyeeeLOL
gayatri: preet!!!! kiya howa heer beta?
heer: woh aisay kio baat nhi hai maa, woh kal prem nay phone nhi kiyaa tu gabrahat ho rahi !!
gayatri: arayy betaa...prem aisaa he hai...jab farig hoga to zaroor  call karay gay.
heer : jee
meanwhile preet phone ranged, he started whispering n after tht started to leave.
heer: aray preet nashta tu kar ja!!
preet: nahi bhabhi buhat zaroor kaam hai.
lalit: kiya zaroor kaam hoga sivaiye girlfrnds say milnay janay ka!
preet: sab app keh jaisay nhi hotay n runs away!!
everybody start laughin bt suppress it whn lalit saw thm.

and soo the day also passed but prem didn't call. it was night n heer was sitting on the window, looking at the moon and was very worried n on the verge of cryin " kaha ho prem? call kyuu nhi ki?? mai itni pareeshan ho rahi hoo!! please wapis ajioo!!! mujhay buhat dar lag raha hai!!

and suddenly heer heard a loud sound n got sacred. then slowly she left the room n came in the corridor. she saw nobody was there n thn she saw the the terrace door open, she said: kaun hai waha par??
heer started her steos towards the terrace n again said:
kaun hai waha par?? kio haii!!
preet kiya tum andar hoo?? preet kaha ho tum!! heer was getting sacred but whn she entered terrace, nobody was there n whn she turned to go back in the house 

suddenlyyy

aaahhh!!!!!!

precap is suspense!! hah

i hope  guys like it n its a bit long alsoWink
do leave ur superb comments n press the like button

see yaaa


Edited by repunzell - 18 September 2011 at 9:54am

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
awsum..!!
dont make us wa8 2 lng!
i noe its prem! <3333333

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by divya4salmanyk

awsum..!!
dont make us wa8 2 lng!
i noe its prem! <3333333

thank u for comenting!
lets see who it isWink!!
n if tyme permit i'l update later tonyteBig smile
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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 9:59am | IP Logged
is prem has come...
pls tell the suspense...

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
di di di sorry i cant give a long comment nw.. coz bio practicals na tmrw... so i wannna gv a long wala comment tomorrow fr sure... really sorry di...

hope u understand... reallly really really sorry so sorry di
but right nw can say onethng it was an awesome update loved it... super duper hit...

love u.. thnkx fr updating

love vrushika

i wont comment here on next page


Edited by vrushika - 18 September 2011 at 12:16pm

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