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FF :kabhi alvida na kehnaa chapter 31, page 33 (Page 2)

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by priyahmt

omg...
i'm totally in shock...
lovely ff yaar...
pls write more...
i'm sure u will become a wonderful writer...

aww thank u soo muchh :)!!

hopefuully i'l be able to write it :)!!

i'l update soon

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
chapter 15:

prem, heer n priya reached raj's house. priya ringed the bell n raj's mom (i'll name her seema) opened the door.

seema: jee app kaun?
prem: jee aunty, hum raj keh dost hai, woh aj raj nhi aya tha na tu iss say milnay agaye.
seema: ohh...aoe aoe beta...raj apnay kamray hai tum loog jio mai kuch khanay keh liyai bhejtay hooo.

in raj's room:

heer: hey raj, tum aj skool kyu nhi aye?
raj: woh heer aisi kio baat nhi, woh meray sar mai dard ho raha tha tu socha araam karlo.
prem:dekha heer mai nay kaha tha na pareeshan honay ki kio baat nhi thi...tum bhiii
raj: heer tum pareshan ho rahi thi ?? (raj being very happy n priya notice it bt ignores it at tht tyme)
heer: woh aisay kio baat nhi...woh bas tum meray dost hona tu socha keh pooch lo aur priya nay bataya keh tum phone bhi utha rahay thay.
priya: ha raj tmharay phone ko kiya howa?
raj: woh switch off tha!

and thn they randomnly talk n after a while they left.

premeer's house:

heer in kitchen n prem in tv lounge.
heer: (shouts) prem aj khanay mai kiya khao gay?
prem: kuch bhi nhiTongue!!
heer cumes in louunge;
heer: kyuu nhi khaoe gay? shaddi mai ayee ho?
prem: woh tu tum say hogi tu kaisay kissi aur say hogi.
and prem pulls heer on his lap.
heer: prem!!
and heer starts playing wid his button.
prem: seriouslyy heer aj kuch bahir say order kar layaty hai...i don't want to stressed my wuld-be -wifeWink!
heer: aj bharay romantic ho rahi ho? kiya baat hai? hhehhe
prem: bas kiya karoo...!!! piyaar araha hai!!

and after sme flirting, they had their dinner n thn went to sleep.

i know its not up to mark...bt i'm trying to get in the story. n its also a bit short bt give me sume tyme i'l get into story n thn give long update!

bt still do comment n press the like button if  u wish!!!

see yaaa!!!

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 1:00am | IP Logged
awsum update..!!
gud goin..!! luved premeer scenes..!
thnx for d pm! :-)

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 1:04am | IP Logged

?????


di u seriously updated?????


okay okay no more bak bak.... 




i m so very happy... that u updated...

u r very sweet one...

u know i was waiting fr u 2 update this as i was realllyyy excited...


the update was just awesome... from start till end...'

it was really wonderful...

also cute...

but y is that raj is coming in between he likes heer but dont he knw that heer loves him... i'll kill him if he comes in between...

and prem is so naughty... jaha dekho vaha romance shuru...

hehehehheh...

it was a greaty great update...




for the beautiful update and also di thank u fr the pm...
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We could play them through the week, and then the weekend we could play the black joints. I learned to be very versatile and learned to love it. So it stays with me even up to now. 




Edited by vrushika - 18 September 2011 at 1:28am

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 1:04am | IP Logged
awesome update ...
loved it...
please add me in ur pm list

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
nice update...
pls don't make raj as villan...
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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 8:50pm | IP Logged


Just read the ff!!!!

It just awesome...


loved all the characters... i haven't read this one before... but its really good!!!
thank u for continuing this ff

Do PM me whenever u update!!!!

Continue soon!!!




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continue soon!!!..

Waiting!!!!

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