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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
superb!!!
shaan in angry young man avtar!!!! Smile
bt dis is wrng man... u hang out wid ur friends so frequently... dan why can't she?? Angry ab weekends pe bina bataye chhod ke aane ko kisne kaha tha??Angry
for d first tym i m feeling sorry 4 pradyun...Ouch  he can't be held responsible 4 watever happened dis tym... 
cnt wait 2 see him landing in delhi... pata nhi kitno ki shaamat aayi hai??LOL
chalo shaan its high tym 2 execute ur "train of bizzare thoughts"
continue soon... 
nimisha


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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 11:36am | IP Logged
omgee...poor khanak...wid three men...ab to gayi yeh kaam se..shaan to nehi chorega...
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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
being d last i guess but never too late



a big big big big big big big big big big big congo to u aditee fr d15th thread...it is a journey of a lifetime wid this beautiful FF...


thnks fr giving us CASA...


wishing u n us many many many many many many more threads to come:)


pls pls pls keep it going on freverSmile

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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 6:04pm | IP Logged

Prad ki to khair nahi...wrong time wrong place...bhai tujhe to Neha bhi nahi baccha sakti...

So Shaan pahucne wala hai dilli raat main...ab to usse padosi ko utha ke, jaga ke jaana chaiye Khanak ke ghar...Waiting for the next twist after Prad gets a dose of Shaan...
 
Or will Khanak bear the brunt and gussa for both, Prad to hoga nahi waha...
 
ok they need to start living together again and be civil to each other...ab office main kab pata chalega?
 
uff ho...too many questions LOLLOLLOL
 
Ab jaldi update kar...

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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 7:34pm | IP Logged
too many possibilities...thinking constantly about casa. 

plzzz update.
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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
Part 201 D
1:48 AM
21st Oct 2012
Sunday
Vasant Kunj
 
Her phone rings, she wakes up startled, she looks at the number, she knows who it is...
Khanak: Hmmm?
shaan: i am outside... can you open the door (completely normal tone)
Khanak: Abhi?
Shaan: Haan abhi (patient)
She springs up from bed in shock, terrified... she has no idea why he is here, wonders if Dadi sent him
She looks for a scuncie and ties her hair...
Runs to the door, turns on the outside light, the steel grill door, creaks and makes a lot of noise as she unlocks...
He is standing there in one of his six pocket knee length shorts and a AX tee i  white, looks like he is ready for a pool party... someplace
She lets him in, half asleep
She had just fallen asleep after ossing and turning, worrying about her fate. and her place of residence...
 
He walks in calmly, he has a duffel bag and his laptop bag, strung on his shoulder
She had no idea he was in Mumbai until he intercepted Dadi's call
 
"Aap Mumbai se a arahe hain? (curious)
"I think so" (expressionless)
Khanak: yahan?
Shaan: Dadi told me... (curt)
She goes to the divan and sits down, outwardly calm...
Gets up, turns on the kitchen light and gets him water...
"Dinner?" she asks courteously, as if nothing's wrong between the two...
"I ate on the plane"
"Oh!"
She fidgets and later walks back to the divan and sits down, he leans on the wall, hands in pockets, one sandaled foot on her wall
"Do you want to tell me your version?"
She is quiet...
He just stares at her...
He admires her courage, her guts, her  will power, she had been through so much already in life, yet
Khanak: This is not a drama
Shaan: I realize its not...
Khanak: Some one has complained...
Shaan: did he give you a notice
Khanak: Nahi...
Shaan: What do you plan to do?
Khanak: Abhi socha nahi...
She is quiet and withdrawn, her eyes are puffy as if she has cried a lot...
Shaan: enjoying your freedom so much?
Khanak: If thats how you see it
 
Shaan: I have promised myself I wont let us come to blows... (cold)
Khanak: I have no such expectations of myself (bitter)
 
Shaan: Did you say you would sue him for unlwaful ouster?
Khanak looks at him shocked, some things are so simple for the wealthy she thinks...
Khanak: I cant afford a lawsuit... I cant (shakes her head)
Shaan: You are just going to let him slander?
Khanak: pata nahi...
She leans on the wall and shuts her eyes...
Shaan: Ive spoken to a moving company, get what ever you need in the morning, we are getting out of here...
Khanak is horrified, her heart beat intensifies... "WHERE?"
Shaan: Vasant Vihar (blunt)
Khanak: I CANT... I cant... (chokes on a lump in her throat)
 
Shaan: You see it as a game? Feels like having lost? (rubs it in)
Khanak: I dont want to move in with you...
Shaan: Dont worry, you are not... not in my bed... (disgusted)
She is apalled
Shaan: You can pay for food... you can pay for room and board if it hurts your pride so much...
She looks at him stunned
Khanak: Room mate? (shocked)
Shaan: If thats what you want to call it...
Khanak: That is crazy...
Shaan: I have to make weekly trips to Mumbai. I will hardly be home
Khanak: You were hardly home (anyway)
Shaan: Lets not start digging up dirt (sarcastic)
Khanak: I cant go live with you
Shaan: i spoke with your landlord
Shaan: Wont be too difficult, we can each live our lives... you arent allowed to bring male guests I wont bring females
There is a lengthy painful pause as she understands the implication...
Shaan: i wont lay a finger on you, Khanak "Mistry" (biting, cold)
Khanak: I dont care for intimacy...
they stare at each other like they would claw each other's eyes out...
Shaan continues " Ive promised Gupta you will vacate  in a week and as a reward have also promised to drag his sorry ass through the courts for the slander" AngryAngry(furious)
 
She looks at him stupified... rage, sadness, irritation that he interefered, all bubble up simultaneously and egg her towards yet another showdown...
 


Edited by aditee - 25 September 2011 at 9:30pm

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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 10:03pm | IP Logged

Great updates Aditee. Loved on how u presented the whole situation. Out of all this mess it atleast shows that Shaan cares for Khanak, hope Khanak realizes it. Prad is going to be a dead meat.

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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Amazing aditeeClapClap

wow he's reaches at 2 am directly to vasant kunjSmile

i liked that he's calm and still admires her courage and will powerBig smile
 
taking decision widout talking to her was nasty but the decision is right Thumbs Up

but if he had talkedWink to her she must 've rejected right away ... and he knows how to get his way so its gud

finally she'll be moving to vasant viharParty
Embarrassed
he has talked to her landlord...   i guess he wont spare him so easily

but wht abt prad's visit he hasn't said anything to her abt it... he cant let it go easily... it really not like himConfused

i wont lay a finger on you khanak "mistry"... OMG y he called her mistryCry

waise we dont care abt a finger he shd lay himself on herWink

n she doesn't care abt intimacyWink

the blue line was superb... each and every word shows that he was really furiousAngry

update soon

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