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Posted: 12 years ago
Aditee.. u updated.. thnx a lot πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
and what an update... this guy is direct... asks abt Prad's dating interest and Khanak ... the moment i read the Bunch.. i just opened my mouth.. it took me some time to realise that and close it...  ab to pakka maar daalega use... waiting for the evening update from now itself...
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by aditee


Mere bete ne mere naak mein dum kiya saari raat soreee
Aaaj ka update saam ku


And you updated despite a tough nite...Hugs!!!!

You are something else...πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Alright, I like it, get her Shaan...shuru ho ja...and yes lets start with Prad!!!

The shock of Khanak's reaction on his question tells me that maybe Khanak was thinking on same lines...Prad was behaving creepily...she knows Prad likes her and Prad will not ask ask but it must be on back of his mind? Khanak's intuition must have been telling her Prad is just trouble and Shaan just figured it all out...

This is gonna be so much fun...glad that they are roomies now...
Posted: 12 years ago
wow adi..
wat a blue line..
direct to the point..
n her shocked reaction to that..
thanks for giving this update inspite of ur son seeking ur attention..
thanks a lot to ur son too..
will wait for the update tomoro mrng..
waiting to hear her reply..
Posted: 12 years ago
Thx for the update aditee

loved it

i liked the part where he was talking abt amogh

hmmm i was surprise how he hasn't talked abt prad yet

but he is direct... finally he asks

i donno wht is more annoying for him he's staying at her place the whole day or they goin out

the blue line was too much... itna direct

he will kill prad or the better way is to I must plan something grand and theatrical! Abduct her, or hold her captive at Vasant Vihar"...or... Wear her down with sex and when she is unable to speak, get a commitment out of her"πŸ˜‰
 
as he thought before

update asap


Edited by IF_rida - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by rbo_d_best


Hahaahha !!
 
The first thing he TALKS to her about is Pradyun !!!!
 
LMAOOO ... Hope Pradyun doesnt get beaten up by Him !!!!
LOL !!!!!
 
 
He is never ever going to forget this ... LMAO !
Dukhti Nas par haath rakhaaa hain ... LOL

@Shals: Look at the positive side dear... they both are Together under one roof in "His" house and all becoz of Pradyun!! 

Shaan ko Thankful hona chahiye Prads ka instead of beating him Black and Blue (maybe with his words as he is more powerful with words rather than his physical power) πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
Edited by candy84 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
awww...u updated. THANKS. 

both talking about amogh...sigh!!!!

and here comes prad...baksh do use. Jab prad ko pata chalega ki both living together...ainvayi heart failure hone wala hai. 

waiting for next update.
Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Aditee πŸ˜Š
Awesome updates 202 B, C and D loved all the 3 parts β€οΈ

202 B
Its Navaratri time Khanak is doing Pooja and Shantanu does not know anything about it
I too felt very emotional when i read about her interaction with little kid who supplied milk its difficult to leave the place where u had been living for long time
Lovely Pink and Blue lines πŸ‘


202 C
OMG 20K rent πŸ˜‰
@bold superb πŸ‘
Loved these lines πŸ‘

Shaan: Aaah! The rent... I havent thought abt it, lets say 20k a month? (bland)

She looks shocked
Shaan: Too low?
Khanak: Oh! No... I mean... if its the right...No... its not... too high I mean (shocked)
Shaan: 20K it is then? (expressionless)
Khanak: i will get my check book?
Shaan: Sure!

She returns with her check book
He shows unnecessary curiosity as she begins to write in beautiful elegant strokes  writes the date the amount... crosses it and pauses after "S"
Her hand trembles but she continues "Shan tanu" "Gujral"
She says it in her mind or almost, he has not heard it in 9 months, he sees it and it arouses him...

Fabulous part loved their convo beautifully written πŸ‘
I am curious to know whether she signed as Khanak Gujral or Khanak Mistry  πŸ˜Š

Awesome blue and pink lines πŸ‘

Shaan: Except my room (husky) (challenging)
Khanak: I shall remember not to lose my way then... again (husky)


202 D
Wow Aditee u posted 202 D
Lovely surprise for us thanks a lot
Superb part
Khanak starting the convo asking about Amogh  and Shantanu asking directly about Pradyun 
Perfect blue line
Shaan: Does he want to start dating you now?😑😑

Every part is very exciting feel like reading more and more...
Thanks a lot for the lovely parts πŸ˜ƒ
Love u πŸ€—


@All
Good neend / Good Morning to all friends here πŸ˜Š



Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Aditee awesome updates its high time these lovers got together how much more will they fightπŸ˜”...loved the last line so Shaan is insecure of prad i guess this will speenden up his process to get her back😳...thnx for giving Casa and such lovely updatesπŸ˜ƒ...
Posted: 12 years ago
Shaan: Does he want to start dating you now?😑😑<------ yeah,,, and i will support her:)😳

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