God ! I just logged in to say I am loving the parts ! I caught up with this during my stay at aunties on my crap phone internet and sigh it is awesome !
I'm over at a cousins house now and I saw that someone talked about a song that is suiting your ShaNak right now. I think it was Isha ? The song 'Dont Go' by Wretch 32 ft Josh Kumra ! I SO agree with you ! That song DOES suit them ! People, do listen to it ! It is a kinda big hit in the UK !
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bj1BMpUnzT8[/YOUTUBE]
Don't go
I don't know where you come from
But you're everywhere I go
I don't know why you chose me , (why me)
But as long as you're here I don't need to know
So don't' go
Yeah, when I got introduced to ya, I knew I'd be true to ya
Everyone wanted a piece you whispered to me that its sweet 'cause its me you love
And I feel it in my soul
It's like you're always with me on the road
Phone in my hand while I listen to you moan
And everybody in the car want to try and get involved
Yeah, then you make a silly tone puppy love now I'm like give a dog a bone
Shut me up how I can breathe another flow
Our loves concrete we should leave a setting stone
Yeah and whenever I'm in doubt, you forever calm me down
And sometimes I'm a dummy and I know would've crashed if you never was around
Chorus:
So don't go
Don't leave
Please stay
With me
You are the only thing I need to get by, get by
Yeah I spend a little change on you
But you always give it back
thats how I know you ain't here for the money
you just wanna see me be the man
so I earnt my respect like a true gentleman
all the rumors were capital irrelevant
we should get three two emblems
and I give my life to you that's a street settlement
yeah I feeling ever so emotional
'cause I never had nothing when approaching you
Sitting with a straight face on a poker move
That's why a song like this has been over due
Due over time, time over
Love drunk you and I would die sober
I'm in this for forever and a day
That's why anywhere I go, they've got to put you on a plane
Chorus:
So don't go
Don't leave
Please stay
With me
You are the only thing I need to get by,
To get by, to get by, to get by.
Uhh.. See I swear I ain't ever seen a sky so clear
Together we're gon' make history
Why would you wanna be elsewhere?
See I swear, I ain't ever seen a sky so clear
Together we're gon' make history
Why would you wanna be elsewhere?
Don't go leave me now
Don't go leave me now
Stay right here till my dark days in to light years I'ma shine yeah
Don't go leave me now
Don't go leave me now
Loosing you is one of my fears
But I ain't selfish I share if I have to
LOL ! I'm not really big with songs like Vandoo is (which I think you have a great thing going there ! How do you do it ?!) but like Isha says this song does remind me of them. Especially the parts that I've highlighted.
Regarding you saying your going to finish this I was like 'No ! Please no !' but glad your not going to. But then again I wouldnt want you doing so if you dont want to anymore. Its entirely your decision ! 😊 But I do LOVE this story ! And plus like Neha said this story has SO much potential ! Like I really liked the pregnancy part she mentioned. I would SO like to see how they react when she does get pregnant since before you kinda showed that Shaan wasnt into it yet. Then how they deal with the days throughout the pregnancy. It would be SO fun to read about ! And I also agree with Tina too ! I love this story because of the conversations going on every where. It seems SO real !
Eee ! But I have a shakait ! I havent read the last part but I SO want Shaan to say something to her to reassure her ! Shes admitting stuff and I'm sure he is as well but like I would like to see him admitting like she is ? LOL I dunno if its only me but my heart goes out to Khanak more than Shaan. The 'can we be friends' was like 'OMG' to me ! 😲😆 but hes probably teasing her.
Anyways, I'm loving this Aditee ! Keep it going ! I wont be commenting much. Being shoved between houses and plus uni starting now but I am gonna comment from time to time ! 😊 I am always reading !
Btw hi Guys ! 😃
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