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NaKsH- A jOuRnEy TiLl EtErNiTy (ch 7 is @ pg 21) (Page 6)

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Read  both  part...very   nice  and   interesting...continue  soon Smile

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CHAPTER 3

 it is morning time and naitik wakes up at the sound of the alarm.. he finds akshara sleeping..
naitik :- inke liye bed tea bna lata hun or fir aakr inki koi light weight sari bhi nikal
dunga..

naitik comes back after a few minutes and finds akshara still sleeping.. he smiles a bit by looking at akshara's innocent but pale face while sleeping.. he goes closer to her and kisses her on her cheeks and forehead..Heart

he come towards the Almira to decide a sari for her.. he decides to take out her favorite sari.. now comes back to akshara n wakes her up..
naitik :- gud morning jaan

akshara:- good morning naitik... aj ap itni jaldi kaise uth gye??
 
naitik :- bas akshara.. alarm bja to meri neend khul gyi.. apko dekha to ap soyi hui thi.. fir socha ki pehle tea bna leta hun..

gives her the cup and few biscuits

akshara:- thank you naitik.. ap mera kitna dhyan rakhte hain.. i love you..
she kisses him
naitik:- wah jaan.. agar aise hi roz kiss mil jaye to main apke sare kam kr sakta hun..WinkLOLLOL
akshara :- dhatt..
they both laugh
akshara :- naitik doctor se appointment kitne bje ki li hai apne??
naitik :- 10 bje ki jaan..
akshara :- hey bhagwan.. 8 30 to yhi bj gye hain.. ap jldi se apna kam khatam kro tab tak main fresh hokr aati hun..
goes near the almirah but stops on seeing her sari on the bed
akshara :- naitik yeh sari...
naitik :- kyu?? ap hi meri help kar skti hain main nhi?? maine apke liye apki favorite sari nikali hai.. ab jldi se ready ho jayiye warna late ho jayenge..
akshara :- i love you naitik Smile..
as soon as akshara goes out of the room to take bath, naitik also comes out and bumps into g3 who is going to her room..
g3 :- naitik kya kr rha hai..?? dekh kr to chl lia kr!!
naitik:- maa...wo..sorry.. main ekdum se bahar aa rha tha to pta nhi chla ki samne se ap aa rhe ho..
g3 :- thik hai
she is very irritated and is about to turn and go when...

naitik:- maa
g3 :- ha bol
naitik :- maa mujhe apse kuch baat krni hai..
g3 :- ab kya bat krni hai tujhe? ab kya rehta hai??
naitik:- maa wo akshara...
g3 :- kya hua akshara ko?
naitik:- maa ap pehle andar to ayiye.. fir sab kuch btata hun..
g3 hesitates but moves in
naitik :- maa kal raat akshara behosh ho gyi thi
g3:- kya?? or tu mujhe ab bta rha hai?? abhi kha hai wo?? yeh ladki bhi na.. kabhi sudhregi nahi.. dhang se khati peeti bhi nahi hai

naitik:- maa.. shant ho jayiye.. akhara fresh hone k liye gyi hai.. kl jb wo behosh ho gyi thi to maine doctor ko ph kiya tha or unhone akshara ko routine check up k liye bulaya hai..

g3 :- chlo ye thik kiya tune.. ache se sb kuch puch lena doctor se..
she gets up to go but naitik stops her
naitik :- maa...
g3 stops and stares at naitik
naitik:- plz maa ghar pr yeh bat kisi ko nhi pta chlni chahiye or na hi akshara ko...ki maine apse unke bare mein baat ki..
g3:- thik hai beta..
  now naitik is bit relieved that somehow the members of the house know where would they be going and why
naitik is busy taking out his clothes when akshara enters...
akshara:- naitik kya kr rhe ho??
naitik:- arre kuch nhi bs kpde nikal rha tha..
akshara:- hmmm lao main nikal deti hun..
naitik:- lo jaan...
akshara:- ye blue shirt or blue jeans ap pr bohot suit krta hai.. yhi pehen lijiye ap...
naitik:- ok jaan..
naitik comes after a few minutes
he finds akshara near the dressing area..
he asks her if she is ready and they should hurry up..
as she is ready..akshara gets up and moves near naitik but she again feels dizzy and falls on naitik..
naitik gets scared but has no option but to carry her to the car..

he lifts her up and moves downstairs but stops on seeing everyone ... he is worried but finaly move straightaway to the car and to the hospital..
the doctor asks them to perform a few tests.. and then come back to her..


 after an hour naksh are in the doctor's cabin and she is looking at the reports with a tensed face..

naitik :- kya hua doctor??

dr :- mr singhaniya.. ur wife is suffering from anemia.. her hb is very low..

please tell me is there any tension at home?

naitik remains quite..

dr.. dekhiye mr singhania.. apki wife ko rest ki bohot zarurat hai.. inhe jitna ho ske tension or stress se dur rakhiye..

naitik :- ok dr..

the dr gives them a long list of medicines and precautions to be taken..

naitik takes akshara back to ss and is stunned to find the whole family gathered in the hall..
 precap :- g3 and bm r preparing food for akshara and r shocked to find her standing on the main door









Edited by jasminedayal18 - 07 October 2011 at 2:09am

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jasminedayal18

Originally posted by Naitik04

Really nice ff jasmine... Clap
do write the next part soon!
It made our weekend grt as we were missing our Naksh n coz of ur ff we were lyk in an imagative Naksh land LOL & imagining Naitik calling Akshara as 'jaan' is jst sooo wonderful Day Dreaming Hope he calls Akshara as 'jaan' in the episodes also...


 awww!!! thanks a lot  Smile i want to hug u for ur comment . if i am able to take you to an imaginative naksh land.. that means.. i am doing a good work..  Hug       biggest hugs to you!! i will try my best to keep ur expectations high and not disappoint you!!      

*HUGS* to you too jasmine Hug
yea realli u r doin a grt job...
Even the third part is so sweet Day Dreaming eager to read more of ur ff Smile


Edited by Naitik04 - 18 September 2011 at 5:15am

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 7:38am | IP Logged
nicely written continue soon 

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awesome update Clap
continue soon...

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 7:51am | IP Logged
hey jasmineSmile
nice part cont soon Tongue
thanks for pmSmile
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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 8:03am | IP Logged
wow jasu awesome part AKSHARA KO srif anemia huwa may tho pregent he karli lolLOL
and cont soon Tongue
yaar mujay pm karo yaarSmile

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Thanks for the pm. Once again an awesome update. It was unexpected. Ur ff's starting is very nice. Continue soon.

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