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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 3:24pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Evee

awwwww cutest story I have ever read!! I LOVED it! I love stories just about A and K and NO prithvi, misti n others.. even tho prithvi was mentioned, he wasnt really in the story.. thanks for that LOL

yes 2 months... I am sooooo glad you are back!! Keep writing, you are only getting better!

thanks evee comments are making me feel a whole lot better!!!EmbarrassedBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 6:39pm | IP Logged
not a lot of you liked it??

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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
Natuuuu omg .. after such a long timeEmbarrassed

First of welcome bakkkkkkkkkk...Hug Missed ya....
how r u and howz everything... Smile

As far as the story goes it was awesome superb EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed i could go on  n on... LOLLOLLOL i thought it was a sad story but till the end it brough the smile bak.. Smile

keep it up

Glad ur bak Doc... we needeed our meds for long time LOL

lots of luv
samia

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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
Awesome Natasha! Your style of writing simply mesmerizes the reader with it's etiquette description! You can actually picture an image whilst reading phrases, and is enticing, and touching! I especially liked this phrase you wrote!

"The sky overhead was slowly turning from its deep purple to the pitch black that matched how he felt that night; broken and crushed and left to nothing. Random bright specks gradually started to light the empty mass of heaven above. His back was set against the trunk of a large tree and his knees were brought up to his chest while his face was buried in-between. He let out a huge sigh and brought his head back up to meet with the tree trunk. A silent tear fell down his cheek while his eyes turned up to gaze into the night sky."

Emotions, and the backdrop of the environmental description, enveloped reader's into a charm, and it blended so well!

Continue soon!
Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
Hey Natu, too bad you has flu, anyways how you feeling now ? How is your friend now?

It was really good to read a story written by you after a long time, you style is something very peculier and different, Awesome story.

Takecare

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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
omg that story was so BEAUTIFUL! im happy it didnt have a sad ending! i luved this happy ending! plz cont. soon!

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Posted: 12 March 2006 at 7:45pm | IP Logged

Awww that was soo wonderful, i think i really needed ur to read u writing!!! LOLLOL and welcome back! Big smileBig smileBig smile 

That was truely amazing..as always of course! Embarrassed

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