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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
so swt update u describe their emotion too welll
just simply loved ur ff and after reading this part im speechless

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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
wow so beautiful update
nupur ko bhi aoni galti ka eshaas ho gaya ... good

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 6:29am | IP Logged
APIII...
i edited my comment on pg.84 with all answers of ur qs.
love u API...Hug
now update jaldi...Embarrassed

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 18anila1

A deep sigh of relief!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
now m grinning like hell...LOLEmbarrassedBig smile

API...Hug
it was d best part of dis ff till now...
i loved it to d coreee...
it was sooo cute n adorable...Embarrassed
m sooo happy now der is no more misunderstanding...
n my MayUr r together now 4 forever...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
it was sooo Beautiful part...
Beautifully written API...
hats off to u for dis story...Star
its now proceeding so beautifully...
i loved it lodsss...
awww...
i loved d way Mayank was taking care of his WIFE...
n wen d way he came back home to share his happiness wid him..
uff!!! le...iss Samrat ne agar pehle keh diya hota toh yeh sab problem hi nhi hota..
waise phir yeh story kese hoti...LOL
jo bhi ho...now m sooo happy..By God!!!
loved dis part till infinity...Embarrassed
though was feeling bad for Nupur...
bt now m really very happy for her...
loved it lodsss...
now i jst want my MayUr to understand each other without anyone's interference...
waise now i dont wanna kill Gunjan ok!!!!!!!!!Embarrassed 
uff!!! d swing part was sooo peaceful n overwhelming for my heart too...
i loved dat part...
n den d head stroking part n MayUr lil convo was sooo damn adorable...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
awww...
i jst loved der silence confession...MashALLAH...
i loved it lodsss API...
love u API...HugHugHug


    1.one thing u love about this ff? 
    Bass 1 thing ...Ermm well...i love dis Story n d talking of all d things wid Nupur...dat is really adorable...n also MayUr's unconditional love for each other...sorry API...cant tell abt only 1thing as der r so many...Embarrassed
    2. a thing u hate or doesn't  like abt this ff?
    ermmm...Ermm d SUSPENCE...of dis ff...By God!!! 
    3. wht u want to see apart from romance n his confession..? 
    le...wht i want u already said apart from dat...Ermm well...in dat case...i wud love see MayUr sharing everything with each other der worry,pain n all...
    4. wht actually u felt with the turning of this story n my approach of changing my writing style'?
    u toh very well know i love wht evr n hw evr my API write...Embarrassed n d turning of dis story or d Twist is jst SUPERB...Mindblowing...i jst loved d way dis story turned...
    5. do u understand the poetry I put at the end.? not only in this one but in every update
    Yes...i do..well...sometimes it take a lil time bt i do understand...n d way u gv meaning of sm hard words it also heps to understand it...in short i love everything abt dis ff...Embarrassed
         
 
 

Shukar hai apny edit tu kiya ///uff I was waiting for this…specially the answers

..

So my all readers are smiling n im loving it

So finally evry1 is seeing real mayank im glad for that..

Samrat sab kha dayta tu maza kiya ata…..phir tum log majan k bhajan asay gatay

 

Yup now all will be smooth with mayur n ofcourse gunjan cant just disappear though she will be sided

With this ff I want the feeling of peace transferring rather than loud expression of love or romace.

 

I don't know til now im feeling like adding abit to loud romance or not…yet maybe in future as story progress…

 

Okay so u didn't like suspense…rfol…n I loved one all of u where thing the way I was making u….thanku so much for liking this ff so much that u cant point one thing..wasy im not at all humble as SRK say…I love praises…lol

 

Maybe mayank wont be that expressive but Nupur will read the expression. .sharing lets seee…

 After 16 chapters I thought mein add tu kerti hoon itna soch k kisis ko samhj bhi ati hai k nhi….initially I wrote myself than as im not Neela..so couldn't ..so add sum of lines that I like….

Thnku for ur lovly comments…

Thanks aloot

 

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kheya-mayur

i was just waiting for dis update though m too sleepy tonight ...

i loved ur writing tle .n d story too .specialy d swet soft lovefilled gestures n emotions.i actualy love such romantic story ...istead of wild physical expression of love.

n i did not understand ur poetry .as m not good in hindi or urdu so understanding such diff lines was not my cup of tea


 
 
 

Aww im so sorry for updating always so late at night kya kero mera timing hi asay hain

 

 

Thnks for waitng for this

 

Aww so love u for liking the way love is being portrayed….i am actually not found of too much of romance yet at time I have to add…thanku so much for this

Oops…so u didn't understand it…okay….

Thnks for liking it

 

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maria.

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    one thing u love about this ff? Offcourse story..
        a thing u hate or doesn't  like abt this ff?    its pace and long Povs irritates me sometime but it was good.
           wht u want to see apart from romance n his confession..?you have showed almost everything so now i want to see Mayur cute moments n romance and as well as some moments which show us they are trying to understand their unspoke words and feelings.
               wht actually u felt with the turning of this story n my approach f changing my writing style'?
                well Fiza ji,you get succeeded to create the suspence.you are successfully portraying the story what you have thought in your mind..
                turning point..well firstly i too thought Mayank's has feeling for Gunjan but after two or three updates i read again your introduction of this story and read the poem again which is the soul of your story
                "Gar mujhko yaqeen hota"
                and then i got it,Mayank loves Nupur,i got the point but i was waiting for your story to progress as i wanted to see how you will show Mayank expressing his love for Nupur and i m still waitingLOLas Mayank is a person in your story who is not expressive about his feelings while Nupur,she wants to listen his words of affection,wants to see his act of love and affection ,in simple word she believes in "express your feelings,love"
                 
              1. do u understand the poetry I put at the end.? not only in this one but in every update

              yup!!i understand

               
               
               

              Hmm so u didn't like the pace….hmm I know it was a bit slow yet u know I wanted to be clamed one..with closing of my all other ffs…that will be pretty soon..i will be able to update this one quicker….

               

              Ur wish my command surly will try to work on this

              Yupi I loved the way u actually truly define them…yes they r liking that…lets see how much love change them….

               

              Thnks for ur lovly coments

               

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              Posted: 02 January 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
              Originally posted by Mudrika25

              hey fiza,...
              most amazing update...
              now she actually realized her mistake to misunderstood him...
              best part...

              so about your ques:
              1) vaise to your whole ff is best but the most i feel is that you describe the feelings of non living things and pretend that they are talking...Clap
              2) no dislikes about this ff...seriously...Big smile
              3) i can't think on that ki apart from these two what else is left...but for an answer let it be song sequence...Wink
              4) well i didn't notice that you changed your writing style...sorryTongue
              5)actually didn't understood it yet...Embarrassed
               
               
               

              Thanku dear for liking his part….

               

              Thnku so much for liking this way of writing..

              Song sequence ..hmmm…I will try to add sum..if I can…

              No pls don't be sorry….u have joined me here…haven't read my previous works…previously my most of works are dialogue based more than the POV parts….here its opposite…

               

              Ooho..u also don't understand poetry …its okay enjoy the ff..

               

               

               thnku so much

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              Posted: 02 January 2012 at 11:54am | IP Logged
              Originally posted by raginisharma

              1. one thing u love about this ff?
              suspence kunki mujhe bhi nupur ki tarah lag raha tha ...mayank and gunjan you know...
              thnku for liking it...
              1. a thing u hate or doesn't  like abt this ff?

              pure 14 update ka  intajar ...meri patience limit bada di tune is baar..

              rofl...im so sorry...lolz...for making u all wait so much...


                wht u want to see apart from romance n his confession..?
              1. sochna padega ..but i prefer romance of mayur.
              romance k dewanoo...will add sum


              1. wht actually u felt with the turning of this story n my approach f changing my writing style'?
                          to good aap  to suspence creat karne mein mahir ho gai hai...
              thnku thnku bus ap khi pyar hai

                  do u understand the poetry I put at the end.?
                

                      time lagega ...
               
              hmm...lagao raho...wasy if need help can ask me

                   

                      
               
              rply at blue

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