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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 18anila1

Awesome update API...
i loved it to d coreee...
uff!!! ab toh jab bhi iska koi naya update milta hain i feel like anything cant b better dan dis...bt wid every next update u proved me wrong...
it is such a beautiful part...
it was sooo Heart SOOTHING...Day Dreaming
API...u know hw beautifully u wrote abt Mayank's past...
i was feeling so bad yet so heart soothing Mayank's past was...
i loved it lodsss...
firstly d morning part was damn cute n wid a touch of romance...
den all d pooja thing i was really feeling good...
as d way Mayank let Nupur b a part of him letting her do all dos things whc he nvr let any1 else to do...
n wht Chahi said make me feel over whelmed...
i was sooo much feeling d peace n heart soothing feelings...
i loved it lodsss...
d way u described Mayank's past...
Hats Off to u API...Star
n d "HUG"...Day Dreaming
dat was "MAGICAL"...
u know wht i adore d most abt MayUr was der HUG...
uff!!! d way Mayank used to hug Nupur was something beyond description...
i jst loved dat feeling d most...
n here d way Mayank followed his heart was mindblowing n truly magical...
loved it lodsss...
loved it to d coreee...
love u API...HugHugHug


ps: Get well soon API...Hug
May ALLAH bless u always n save u from all d evil eyes...
love u...Hug
 
 
thnks dear.
aj tum kitan late hogi
 
hay thnks jani..n hope u contiue to feels so..itna tang kiya hai mein tum sab ko tu yeah tu banta hai na
 
aww thnk dear..u felt so much like mayank
 
thnks dear..for feeling each n evry part so much
hay kiya yaad dil diya yaar...i love there hugss..uff so magical use to be...zee ki tu...dont wanan talk on that
khir thnk dear for liking it so much
lov ya

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by daniella05

awesome update
continue soon
thnks dear
wil cont soon
 
 
Originally posted by love.mayurarti

Nice n emotional update

thnks dear
 
 
Originally posted by parul_bansal

awesumesttt update di...
n loved my mayur's 1st hugg
aww it was damm romantic
n i didn't knew mayank was so naughty when he was small
n i feel sad about mayank's past
bt thank god nupur is there with him ...
thanks 4 the pm
loved it
may god bless u
thnsk dear
glad u liked it
aaww thnks for saying it was romantic
lets see he can b naughty now to or notWink
hmm..evrything will be fine
thnks dear
 
 
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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tasnim.

Fiza ji
it was one of the best updates till date.
Amazing update..
ahh i felt so good after reading this part..
veryyy nice update
loved it so much

 
thnks dear..
so glad u loved it so much
thnkuu so much wonderrful tht u felt it
 
Originally posted by crazymayurian

luvedd it
beautifully written
felt bad for mayank...
do write soon and because u have to write soon
get well soon
take care
aj kal mausam bhi esa hain her koi beemar hain tu fikar not INSHALLAH thk ho jaye gi
thnks dear...
glad u liked i
lolzz...amber yeah acha hai..i have to write soon but i didnt..hahaa...yaar sorry have amost lost the tuch yet cuming back to it
 
thnks dear..
ya masoom bhi hai aur kuch aur bhi...ways now im prtty fiine
thnks
 
 

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayuloveu

beautiful. I love mayank sharing his pain. continue soon
thnku so much for liking it
 
 
Originally posted by .Divya.

Good that you are getting them close... update soon Smile
thnks Divya...
yup soon they need to find each other
 
 
Originally posted by --Sanchu--

just speechless...
thnkuu
 
 
Originally posted by shria19

beautifulBig smile
thnku
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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Ruchi--

Kya Fiza di..I have typed comment 3 times and each time when I pressed submit,my net got disconnected...hope this time I'll able to postStern Smile

About update

It is beautiful,really beautifully written.The way described non-living things reflecting inner feelings is so dreamy and imaginative.
I loved each and every bit of it.Feelings and love through gestures and then a sweet hug,it was all so perfect.

Plz cont soon.
aya hay meri jaan..koi baat nhi
 
thnku so much dear for liking it so much...thnk u so much
will cont ASAP

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

That ws mindblowing di...
This update had so many emotions, there ws shyness, love, pain, consolation and what not...
Loved how u portrayed all so perfectly...
And im so glad that he shared his past with her and poured his heart out...The last past ws indeed the best of this update...
Loved it to the core...
Plz update soon...
thnks dear...
thnnkus ..thnks to u who felt all that..so glad for tht
 
will update soon
 

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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged

Thanks for waitng and all the support and wishes for me….

Rplyd to u all..u all can chk it…

… It ended up into a huge chpter .so I split it into two..but I don't wanted to break the tempo, so I will be posting next chpter at …but doesn't mean ur not commenting in this chapter…

Love

fiza



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It seems eternity that he hasn't said so much to any one, not even to himself..yet right now he even do not want to say anything..mhhm..it was the moment he dreamed of yet today when he hold her in his arms close as much as he can..it seems ..forget it not always words are perfect expression of feelings…wht it seems can nevr define wht it feels…

Forgetting everything even the thought wht will happen when she will broke apart she was enjoying the warmth she was missing…she was so loving the hold on her skin..sqeezing her….the feel, the breath tickling her..shivering her..?..naa she was feeling her nerves relaxed clamed..being where they belong too

Alas the moment has to end..yet here are many cuming there way too…

The blushing flowers, n slightly moving swing, the moon that was sneaking from the cloud and hiding again all were celebrating…but one thing asusal was not patient….

The sound was made and evry one groan in anger

U stupid wind chime cant u just shut up for a while….

I didn't did any thing..this this…stupid wind…cant u be steady for a mins….why u hited with me…don't have eyes to watch

Sorry sorry …I was watching sumthing else and I literally wanted to hav glimpse at his face…shreak…I hope I haven't broke the moment..

Idiot ..bewaquf..

But it has…he opened his eyes..n moved them right n left…checking wht actually he is doing.where he was….and she was thinking thousand s of way to face him yet the best she came up with  was not to face him…..

Slowly with a smile on his face that he tried to hide yet was impossible to…. he broke away and found wht he expected..lowered eyes with a shy smile playing on her lips…a relief inside him..she likes his closness..isnt feeling awakrd at his touch….a moment that happened as an impulse..was not to be worried on…yet it was meant to be cherish….

The best thing she found was to get away from there doing wht she was thinking of when she was taking in his arms..she stod up and about to move …and a huge frown appears on his face…

Mayank: where r u going…

The disappointment was loud n clear…

Nupur: she turned smile and looked at him…two mins…getting the smile in return he leaned back on the swing and open his eyes to watch the moon..

Though he was feeling to cold here yet he want to stay here right here, he can still feel a soul touching his…her arms warming her still

Mayank: yeah…nupurr… I am not hungry sachi,…

Nupur: I didn't ask ur or not…eat it,…

Mayank: woh bhi bread sandwich…. He made a face…

Nupur: aur kuch available nhi is waqt…aur ap thora tu kah ker hi saony jay gay….subha se kuch nhi kahya….

Myanak: aray tu asa tu aksar hota hai…its okay mein so jata hoon

Nupur: hota hoga ab nhi pls thora so tu khalain…..she pleaded lovingly placing the sandwich near his mouth…his look …

so much penetrating inside her…": hota hoga ab nhi"…

Ahh this was a statement …and he felt like been filled with happiness, her gesture that even she didn't realize of feeding him herself….yet his such a passionate gaze into her eyes made her take it back ..yet he didn't allowed her to take her love back from him….griping her hand still placing his eyes on her face, he took a bite from the bread…bread that he hated all his life…today he actually felt like clamming it as the most delicious eatable today in universe

She placed the bread back on the plate ..

Mayank: tum ny kahan khaya tha

Nupur: ji woh chachi k sath lay liya tha

Mayank: good…..warna mjhy laga tumhhri wait kerni ki adat nhi gai abhi tak

Nupur: itni bori addat bhi nhi hai..

Mayank: itni achi bhi nhi hai..he said mimicking her….

Nupur: ap mera mazk ura rahy hain….she puted

Mayank: nhi…wasy u can share this….i am not at all eating it all..and I know chachi k sath sham mein kuch liya hoga apny….dinner per tu kuch tha hi nhi…

Nupur: nhi I am not feeling like

Mayank: tu I wasn't  also feeling like…when I m not allowed ..tu u aren't either….warna mein ny bhi wohi kiya jo tum ny… tu tum bhag jao gi…he said with a teasing tone. Mentioning to If he feed her himself…

And she looked at him surprised and than couldn't hold her blush with a huge grin…n smiling took her part…

…………………….

I KNOW ITS SHORT...JUST FEW HRS ANOTHER IS CUMING



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