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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
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    one thing u love about this ff? Offcourse story..
        a thing u hate or doesn't  like abt this ff?    its pace and long Povs irritates me sometime but it was good.
           wht u want to see apart from romance n his confession..?you have showed almost everything so now i want to see Mayur cute moments n romance and as well as some moments which show us they are trying to understand their unspoke words and feelings.
               wht actually u felt with the turning of this story n my approach f changing my writing style'?
                well Fiza ji,you get succeeded to create the suspence.you are successfully portraying the story what you have thought in your mind..
                turning point..well firstly i too thought Mayank's has feeling for Gunjan but after two or three updates i read again your introduction of this story and read the poem again which is the soul of your story
                "Gar mujhko yaqeen hota"
                and then i got it,Mayank loves Nupur,i got the point but i was waiting for your story to progress as i wanted to see how you will show Mayank expressing his love for Nupur and i m still waitingLOLas Mayank is a person in your story who is not expressive about his feelings while Nupur,she wants to listen his words of affection,wants to see his act of love and affection ,in simple word she believes in "express your feelings,love"
                 
              1. do u understand the poetry I put at the end.? not only in this one but in every update

              yup!!i understand



              Edited by Maria. - 29 December 2011 at 12:50pm

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              Posted: 28 December 2011 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
              hey fiza,...
              most amazing update...
              now she actually realized her mistake to misunderstood him...
              best part...

              so about your ques:
              1) vaise to your whole ff is best but the most i feel is that you describe the feelings of non living things and pretend that they are talking...Clap
              2) no dislikes about this ff...seriously...Big smile
              3) i can't think on that ki apart from these two what else is left...but for an answer let it be song sequence...Wink
              4) well i didn't notice that you changed your writing style...sorryTongue
              5)actually didn't understood it yet...Embarrassed


              Edited by Mudrika25 - 28 December 2011 at 1:43pm

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              Posted: 28 December 2011 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
              1. one thing u love about this ff?
              suspence kunki mujhe bhi nupur ki tarah lag raha tha ...mayank and gunjan you know...
              1. a thing u hate or doesn't  like abt this ff?
              pure 14 update ka  intajar ...meri patience limit bada di tune is baar..
              1. wht u want to see apart from romance n his confession..?
              2. sochna padega ..but i prefer romance of mayur.
              3. wht actually u felt with the turning of this story n my approach f changing my writing style…?
                          to good aap  to suspence creat karne mein mahir ho gai hai...
                  do u understand the poetry I put at the end.?
                

                      time lagega ...

                  

                      

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              Posted: 28 December 2011 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
              It ws utterly beautiful dii...
              First time she realized that how wrong she ws regarding mayank...all his unspoken words wr for her but she mistook his every gesture...but it wsnt completely her fault...the way gunjan used to mingle to mayank and reacted his every actions certainly made up her mind to get things in a wrong way...Even we readers wr in this illusion...
              But im so glad that mayank somehow cleared that fact though unknowingly...im really happy for sajan...they also meant to be together...
              And the last part ws so beautiful...i felt utter happiness reading this...
              Loved this update loads...

              Now ur ansers r one thing that i loved in this ff is obviously the twist or can say shock that u brought for us with mayank's confession..lolz...and the unspoken words and gestures that says love is there for u and only u...i dislike nothing at all...
              Apart from romance want ROMANCE...lol...confession na bhi ho toh chalega par romance toh honi chayie na...
              And i dont always understand the poems but can somehow get the meaning of it...
              Cont soon dii..Love ya..

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              Posted: 28 December 2011 at 5:39pm | IP Logged
              I liked this update Fiza.. silently they conveyed... nicely written Smile

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              Posted: 28 December 2011 at 6:17pm | IP Logged
              Oh wonderful... I loved it...
              will answer your questions soon...

              Edited...
              I'm so sorry for being late... was caught up with some work...

              I love the plot of this story... It had many suspense...

              I liked almost everything in this ff... except Gunjans character... According to me she was too intervening

              I loved both of that... The turning point was amazing and your writing style was not less than that.. Smile

              Would love to see them understanding each other more... Nupur helping Mayank to be a bit expressive...

              No... I dont understand it much because I am not that good in Hindi or Urdu...

              Hope it helped...


              Edited by aysha1989 - 29 December 2011 at 7:25pm

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              Posted: 28 December 2011 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
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              amazing update fiza jii...
              i like the story although sumtimes long POVS made  me bore but coz of story i remained stick to it...
               
              in starting i dont lke mayank characters or u can say behave which made us confuse...
               
              i want to see their relationship growing stronger and give feelings to their unsaid words either...
              and ofcoarse mayur moments...
               
              loved it dear...
               
              cont soon
               


              Edited by drmaha - 30 December 2011 at 9:28am

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              Posted: 28 December 2011 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
              amazing updt fiza
              loved whole realization of nupur ...you expressed it beautifully
              i don't like mayank's behavior at starting ...but now i undersood him...main problem in this mayur story is mayank does not express his feelings ..so its take time to understand him...to strengthen their relation i want him to  open up & share every thing with nupur,..its take little time  to understated poems..but you write them beautifully
              thanks for the pm


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