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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by -Roshee-

heyy
i just read all the parts of story,nice concept and story lineSmileGunjan character is hell irritating in this FF..why Nupur is trying to show herself being sweet and innocent??why dont she ask him the relation between both of them??she should raised her voice for her Rights..
 
there are lots of spelling and grammer mistakes in your updates which  feel sometimes annoying..please do correct them..
thnks aloot
ur all questions will be answered soon
 
i know dear there must be erors here...ths y PARDON ERROR is writen, plus its nt easy to chek these update with so much keen eye, for tht finding time is difiuclt...
will try to do it next...
 
i hope my all readers donot find it...they r use too...u will alsoWink
will wait for answers..Smile
"To Err is human" but there are lots of mistakes,speacially spelling mistakes that cant be ignored..
you are writer and you should do your work complete,spelling mistakes can loss the Esscense of
story...i feel sometime you left the sentence or statement incomplete due to spelling mistakes..
anyways it would be higly appreciated if you will correct and Re-checked your updates..

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
I look up to the lord helplessly, why me, u know I have no one to hold, no one to live for, than why your making my only relation turn into sour, my only dream in a night mare. Why r u snatching the person I depend my being on. Why you always make the people I love the most go far from me, why I am always left helpless. Why cant just one someone hold me near telling he cant live without me, why I just cant be something useful not unwanted in someoens life, why I just cant be perfect for him, why I cant get his love. N if u know I cant ,  y than y you u made me enter his lifeā€¦ when he frist time owe me I thought now I belonged to someone, sumone who cares, to some one for whom my existence matter, sumone who is not waiting for me to go away from his life, but someone who is waiting to hold me right inside





this part of ur update just killing me.i really hate bhajan of majan. fiza one day i;ll kill u for sure...

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 2:54pm | IP Logged
fiza u r brilliant writer i must say
the way u portrayed ups feelings- GOSH it was amazing
hats off to u
and abt majan- no comment..

loved ur update totally
u were rock as usual

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Roshee-

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by -Roshee-

heyy
i just read all the parts of story,nice concept and story lineSmileGunjan character is hell irritating in this FF..why Nupur is trying to show herself being sweet and innocent??why dont she ask him the relation between both of them??she should raised her voice for her Rights..
 
there are lots of spelling and grammer mistakes in your updates which  feel sometimes annoying..please do correct them..
thnks aloot
ur all questions will be answered soon
 
i know dear there must be erors here...ths y PARDON ERROR is writen, plus its nt easy to chek these update with so much keen eye, for tht finding time is difiuclt...
will try to do it next...
 
i hope my all readers donot find it...they r use too...u will alsoWink
will wait for answers..Smile
"To Err is human" but there are lots of mistakes,speacially spelling mistakes that cant be ignored..
you are writer and you should do your work complete,spelling mistakes can loss the Esscense of
story...

i feel sometime you left the sentence or statement incomplete due to spelling mistakes..
anyways it would be higly appreciated if you will correct and Re-checked your updates..


may be sometimes she left sentence incomplete but it doesn't mean that she is doing it intentionally to hide her spelling mistake
even if u check ur comment u'll find -u've also some spelling mistake which is not a big issue.

enjoy reading
take care




Edited by -Faria- - 02 November 2011 at 2:59pm

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
sorry for double post.


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 02 November 2011 at 3:09pm

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by -Roshee-

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by -Roshee-

heyy
i just read all the parts of story,nice concept and story lineSmileGunjan character is hell irritating in this FF..why Nupur is trying to show herself being sweet and innocent??why dont she ask him the relation between both of them??she should raised her voice for her Rights..
 
there are lots of spelling and grammer mistakes in your updates which  feel sometimes annoying..please do correct them..
thnks aloot
ur all questions will be answered soon
 
i know dear there must be erors here...ths y PARDON ERROR is writen, plus its nt easy to chek these update with so much keen eye, for tht finding time is difiuclt...
will try to do it next...
 
i hope my all readers donot find it...they r use too...u will alsoWink
will wait for answers..Smile
"To Err is human" but there are lots of mistakes,speacially spelling mistakes that cant be ignored..
you are writer and you should do your work complete,spelling mistakes can loss the Esscense of
story...i feel sometime you left the sentence or statement incomplete due to spelling mistakes..
anyways it would be higly appreciated if you will correct and Re-checked your updates..

u r absolutely right ... par kya hai na, she is very busy girl ...likhne ka time hi nahi milta to re-chk karna to dur ki baat hai...it really took time u knw...

so agar aap free ho to kya ye kaam aap kar sakte hai????

kya aap fiza ki proof reader banna pasand karege???





AGREE suja...and most importantly i would like to draw ur kind attention towards some spellings @ blue above please recheck before commenting dear...as it loose essence u know...and it will be highly appreciated if u please mention the statement or sentence that she left incomplete as in u felt soo Smile...!


Edited by valliyah - 02 November 2011 at 3:12pm

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
PLS GUYS..I'LL REQUEST U TO STOP DOING THIS..I KNOW IT HURTS U..BUT ITS OK TO ME...RELAX..PLSS..ITS NOT N ISSUE..ITS HER POV...

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
well i have no intention to fight with anyone here..i just read the story and as a reader i appreciate her work as well as i criticised which i think is the right of any Reader.but i dont understand why all of you  tried to defend her..
Anyways.i said what i felt as a reader but i think criticism is not allow in this threadSmile
 
if i would be writer i  re-check my work.
 
@sujallovesmayur..if you have time to defend her why not you serves little bit time in helping her to correct error..
 
 
Edited..
P.S...i feel really discouraging here to comment and liked the story.
 


Edited by -Roshee- - 02 November 2011 at 3:25pm

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