Gar Mujh Ko yaqeen hota .MN link2 next thread 145 - Page 21

Originally posted by: -Roshee-

will wait for answers..😊

"To Err is human" but there are lots of mistakes,speacially spelling mistakes that cant be ignored..

you are writer and you should do your work complete,spelling mistakes can loss the Esscense of

story...

i feel sometime you left the sentence or statement incomplete due to spelling mistakes..

anyways it would be higly appreciated if you will correct and Re-checked your updates..

may be sometimes she left sentence incomplete but it doesn't mean that she is doing it intentionally to hide her spelling mistake
even if u check ur comment u'll find -u've also some spelling mistake which is not a big issue.

enjoy reading
take care


Edited by -Faria- - 12 years ago

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

u r absolutely right ... par kya hai na, she is very busy girl ...likhne ka time hi nahi milta to re-chk karna to dur ki baat hai...it really took time u knw...

so agar aap free ho to kya ye kaam aap kar sakte hai????

kya aap fiza ki proof reader banna pasand karege???

AGREE suja...and most importantly i would like to draw ur kind attention towards some spellings @ blue above please recheck before commenting dear...as it loose essence u know...and it will be highly appreciated if u please mention the statement or sentence that she left incomplete as in u felt soo 😊...!
Edited by valliyah - 12 years ago

PLS GUYS..I'LL REQUEST U TO STOP DOING THIS..I KNOW IT HURTS U..BUT ITS OK TO ME...RELAX..PLSS..ITS NOT N ISSUE..ITS HER POV...

well i have no intention to fight with anyone here..i just read the story and as a reader i appreciate her work as well as i criticised which i think is the right of any Reader.but i dont understand why all of you  tried to defend her.. Edited by -Roshee- - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Roshee-

well i have no intention to fight with anyone here..i just read the story and as a reader i appreciate her work as well as i criticised which i think is the right of any Reader.but i dont understand why all of you  tried to defend her..

Anyways.i said what i felt as a reader but i think criticism is not allow in this thread😊

 

if i would be writer i  re-check my work.

 

@sujallovesmayur..if you have time to defend her why not you serves little bit time in helping her to correct error..

 

 

Edited..

P.S...i feel really discouraging here to comment and liked the story.

 

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago

Nice update Fiza

SUJA VALIYAH N FARIA...UR NT GONNA ANSWER IT NOW..PLSS...ZIP IT NOW...FOR MY SAKE...

really love this part u bescribe nupur emotion so well loved it to the core

this is still a bit confusing. samrat being this concerned isnt making any sense yet. i guess theres a behind story. but from what is clear so far, i feel nupur should leave. she doesnt deserve a living hell and her relationship right now is a living hell no matter how much she tries to ignore this fact.nupur is an extremely unfortunate girl but its time for her to hold her hand and tell herself that she's not unwanted to herself and she wont  let someone make her feel unwanted too.
and the fact that she loves him from the bottom of her heart actually increases her pain. it hurts beyond imagination to not have your love reciprocated. but still, it doesnt make your love unworthy or a mistake. but once in a while you just have to ask yourself, is the man worth the love? because if he isnt, then you are just doing injustice with your life and your love. and from where i see it, mayank isnt worthy of the love nupur has for him, at least not yet.

 ps:i hope you dont mix me up with the newbie  -Roshee-. the names seem so similar and i even tried to change my username but the new system wont let me do so.
Edited by -roshnee- - 12 years ago