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Prada_176 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 January 2012 at 9:26am | IP Logged

Chapter 16

Beautiful update rather an eye opener for Nupur it was much needed finally all her illusions are broked and she can see things with new sight. Sometimes his too caring nature towards nupur felt that he has been very formal to her.

Poor Nupur cursed herself for misjudging him according me its not only her fault as anyone can think like that, they are  too close and open with each other.

I wish samrat would have shared this earlier itna sab drama hi nahin hota

So it's a sigh of relief, no more misunderstanding and my mayur can be together foreverSmile


Thing I like about this FF his different story the way you decribed their POVs and the communication between non living things it was cute and reader just go with the flow

Thing I hate is Majan are too close which I really cant tolerate  not only nupur but anyone else seeing them this close can judge the way nupur thought. Infact I was not able to tolerate them in MJHT also as I m  die hard mayurian can see Mayank and Nupur with anyone else than each other.

Thing I want see apart from romance and confession is how he will feel when he come to know about nupur's thought about him and gunjan and she was actually going to leave him secondly how he will take this I mean I want him to understand while thinking this what nupur had gone through and she was actually going to sacrifice eveything for his happiness because that is the gesture from her how much she loves him, she was leaving him knowing  she don't have anyone in her life apart from him

I loved you approach of story and the way you handled frankly I really like whatever you write.

Well about poetry I do understand sometimes but sometimes its totally bouncer sorry for that.

Prada_176 IF-Rockerz

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Chapter 17

Morning part was so cute with slight tint of romance

It was beautiful as well as painful update my eyes got moist after hearing about Mayank parents and childhood.

I felt good when he let her handle pooja arrangement and also ask her to join him

Loved the way nupur made him pour his heart made him believe that she is there to hold him to listen him

Finally Nupur realised its not the lack of trust but communication which he is unfamilier to…

Their hug was magical,  loved to see development in their relationship


Prada_176 IF-Rockerz

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Chapter 18

True, words can never explain perfect expression of feeling

Loved the way Nupur taking care of him, understanding his silence. The way she pleaded him to have sandwitch and though he hate it still he had it gripping her hand, so cute…    

I cant believe mayank actualy teased her.

Totally adorable update like mayur, loved it

Prada_176 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 January 2012 at 9:53am | IP Logged

Totally adorable update like mayur, loved it

Chapter 19

Aww this is best update till date I loved their soft romance I was smiling ear to ear while reading it. It seems like you compensating for tears we shed for first 10 chapters.

Thank you fiza for this utterly cute and soft romantic update,  I still visualise them cuddling in eachother arms. I read that part 4 to 5 times *besharam me*.

First time I felt their communication like hubby wifey. Dono line pe arahe hai..  

So now nupur know how to handle him "Itna to chachi bhi nahi data" lols

Please update soon

And thanks for the PM

CONGRATS FOR 100 pages

MyInspirationz IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 January 2012 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
very nice updates Fiza.. I like the way you are trying to build the relationship between them.. Smile Smile
drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 30396

Posted: 19 January 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -moona-

wonderful update. i was so much lost in the update while reading i didnt knw when it ended. update Soon plz
thnks a lot mona darling..hey thnks alot
glad u liked it
Originally posted by vinan2050

read  bth the updates awsm dear lvd it & thanx fr PM
thnks a lot dear
Originally posted by Mudrika25

wow...most beautiful update yaar...
too amazing...they both looks so sweet in this...
update soon next part,,,,
thnks alot dear
glad u enjoyed it
Originally posted by arjunratirocks

so cute and romantic update
thnku so  much
Originally posted by mayuloveu

wow, beautifu. amazing. plz plz continue
thnkuuu so much dear
Originally posted by kheya-mayur

it was so sweet ,so beautiful ,so romantic ClapDay Dreaming hayeee

intezaar k phal sacchi mai mitha hota hai yr ...

but intezaar k phal kuch bhi ho next ime i dont wanna wait ...plz next time update soon.
thnkuuu so much
lolz...nhi baba ab k intezar nhi kero will be update pretty soon
Originally posted by shria19

thnks alot
drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

Subhanallah di apne yeh kya kiya...Mayank aur teasing, mayank aur romance goshh i never imagined mayank can tease also...
That too for making her closer...So muchhh in 1 update...
Uff main toh mar jaungi aise update dogi toh...

That ws sooo lovely, heavenly, beautiful, dreamy and what not...
I loved how u said what we feel can never define in words how much we try to always feels something is missing bw the just can feel...i so loved that gesture of them...the hold, the warmth the way u portrayed everything Mashallah...

And then the concern of nupur, mayank's acting weird ws cute..this guy never let anyone take care of him...but now no more...
And the morning incident...That ws heavenly...i can surely imagine mayank's gesture here...

And the best part ws mayank's teasing at u managed to make him do this..u r unpredictable dii...I so love when nupur slowly make her way to his arms..And then the kiss...Hayee main mar jawan...
Loved these two parts to core...
Plshh update jaldiii...
lolz...there is far much there in mayank that is still unknow, so slowly u will get to know him
hay hay...islyan do update mein split kiya wanra kitny heart attacks hotay socho
thnku so much, actually personlly i hate but its true...
hmm tht is wht he is doing evrything for other not leting do other so
she is the only person who can do it
thnku so much jani..
he is unpredictable as nupur n u all donot know him as himself..
will cont soon

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tasnim.

It was fab uPdate.Very very soothing and beautiful part.They just complete each other.U know-it was a peaceful update.Loved it.
thnks alot..
aw thnku so much for calling it peacful thnks alot
Originally posted by --Ruchi-- was simply romantic,lovely,soothing and pta nahi kya kyaEmbarrassed
Mayank teasing was unexpected,I mean in this FFLOL
just loved it,the care Nupur showed made me awww...
awesomely written.
cont soon
thnku whn u all are calling soo romantic...ur feeling it thts wht is imp
lol...there is loads more of mayank cuming up
will cont soon
Originally posted by shafyyy

amazing update

loved both the parts...
thnks alot dear
and belated HAppy birthday..sorry i saw my dash board late
Originally posted by crazymayurian

ufff kya kahainBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing
ap ne tu humein in k pyar ki purity dikha kar speechless kar diya...
luveddd it
ab kesi hain jnab ki tabiyat hmm????
take care
and once again osom
hay hay..bus kya kero aplogo ki hi demand thi...fever mein asa hi kuch likhaWink
thnks alot
yes i am perfectly fine...thnks
thnks for liking tooo
Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Awesome update.
thnks alot
Originally posted by parul_bansal

part a
awesumestt part
loved it a lottt
they r truly adorable
awww both eating bread LOL
n nupur feed him on her own...aww
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
thnks alot dear...
glad u liked it
will cont soon
Originally posted by dreambig

Beautiful update. Loved itSmile
thnks alot dear

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