I knew from the kiss part that u can write romance in a very beautiful and serene manner...And u proved it...
From the starting to ending there ws love in the air...Something changed and more beautiful...All seemed so love-filled and beautiful...
And at last the way u portrayed them being to each other truly and solely was utterly beautiful...
Really dii u can write romance very beautifully..so plz try to add romance in ur ffs..Im sure all will feel the love through ur writing...
Loved it...
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