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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 update
congo on 100 page
Posted: 12 years ago
Thanku u all...v completed them rather quickly...Thnks aloot..
 
PS..like ko pata nhi kiya hua ..its isnt working
 
thnks for the coments tooo
Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful parts fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm
Posted: 12 years ago

kb update karein gi?

mein is ff k liye bohaaat zada excited hon...😛😉😳
jaldi update karna plshhh😊
 
Edited by crazymayurian - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice FF
PM me when you will update next part 😊
Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry for late comment Fiza

I loved the concept its beautiful and different.

It is very difficult for me to comment on first ten chapters as I cant see nupur in pain also I cant tolerate majan and their closeness he is too much into gunjan that it feels he ignores nupur and she still cares for him,  ready to sacrifice everything for his happiness, I just wish mayank understand once what she is going through I know shows care or concern for her but it is not reachig her. After reading these chapter it is difficult to know where this story heads

You have beautifully decribed nupur's pain through her POV

Edited by Prada_176 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 11

I read this update thinking he is talking about gunjan but somewhere I felt he cant love gunjan c'mon fiza can be so cruel with us then when I read last part I was shocked then surprised ki  thank god he loves only and only nupur

And he loved her from teenage and only thought about her this is next shock but happy one..

Still how can he say he hate her when he love her so much...

After reading nupurs name I have to read this update gain to feel his love for nupur

Kya jhataka diya hai manana padega

Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 12

Nupur's pain is killing me, she is unware of his feeling but her love for him that she is sacrificing everything for his happiness

You have beautifully potrayed his feelings of her

As ususal wonderful update loved it

Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 13

They loved each other so much but its sad to see how they misjudge eachothers  actions

I felt Nupur has always taken initiative to lessen the gap but mayank has increased it in the name of giving her space.

Nupur is feeling so lonely at her place rememberiung about her father, its painful to see her like this when the fact is completely opposite of her thoughts.

Beautifully expressed mayank feeeling about their first morning, blessing and samrat teasing

Lovely updat beautifully expressed their POVs

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