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Maan took her in made her lay down NT and Pinky quickly gave her water to drink
Maan: Geet are you ok?
Geet: didnot reply she remain her eyes closed .
Maan: pat her cheek " Geet"
Pinky: i think she is shock let her rest for sometime.
Maan: ok he walk out
Geet: why he took me wrong ? she just had a self thought and cried silently.
Maan: straight walk to DEV
Dev: i am really sorry for what all has happen ?
Maan: not a single girl is save he is a beast ...
Dev: we cannot help it
Maan: ask him to stay some where else
Mamaji :son i have warn him he will not do it again.he just kept his hand on Maan shoulder, Maan just look at him
Arjun : we have open the aid there are few things in it we can make partition, ladies side and gent side .
Mamaji that is a good idea.
Arjun i need help from you guys so we can build .
Lucky :bro i am here
Romeo too came to help him.
time passed it was after noon
Sasha : are they coming to get us
Dev: there is a note in every parcel,they are coming on foot as helicopter cannot reach this place ,and it might take 3 to 4 days .
Sasha :what 3 to 4 days ?started crying ..i am fed up
Dev: sorry we cannot help it ...
Mama ji: beta they have trace us they will come as soon as possible , hum ha na
Dev: we have food ,medicine and warm clothes now ..you just relax think you are here for camping
Sasha :with a terrorist no way.
Lucky : he had promise he will not harm any one
Sasha: he had scared her so much that now she is having temperature.
Maan: who was busy with Arjun heard her
Sasha : .the girl who had cheered me yesterday is scared just because of that guy pointed at Briji who was sitting far from them
Maan: can i see her ?
Sasha: no she had said she doesnot want to see any one .
Maan: why she is angry from me?
NT:please come in Dr is calling you
Maan: me ?
Maan walked in
Adi: you are her fiance right.
Maan : looked at Geet"ya"
Adi: she is running temperature, i want to give are an injection so it does not get worst ,but she is not cooperating , please will you help me?
Maan : sure he just sat down next to her
Geet: "i dont want injection"
Maan: "you will get more sick"
Geet: hona do
Maan: you dont want to go for hiking, like yesterday you plan
Geet: looked at him
Maan: trust me it will not hurt you.
Geet: it does hurt i know ...
Maan: this time it will not he hold her arm.
Geet: bola na nahi
Maan: bola na ha ... just pull her sleeve up.
Geet; nahi try to push him
Maan: give me back my I phone ..with eyes he asked Adi to inject
Geet: nahi do gai woh it is mine now
Maan : jee nahi ,if you will not have the injection then i will take it back...
Geet; so rude "Dr kya koi apni de wohi jee wapise lata ha "
Maan: ha lata ha jab koi baat na sona...
Adi: now dont take Maan she took injection ...
Geet: kab bit shocked
Adi when you were fighting on I phone? had a laughter
Geet; looked at Maan
Maan: pata chal
Geet;shake her head in no
Maan: ok now Go to sleep , pull her sleeve down
Maan: pehla thek tou ho?
Geet: if they come to take us
Maan: they are not coming in next 3 days ,so you chill.
Geet: hold his had as he was about to get up..
Maan: what ?
Geet; thanks for helping me
Maan: whisper in her ear " my pleasure "
Geet; shyly moved her face her lips brush his cheek.
Maan: you can... wink at her froward his cheek
Geet: sorry by mistake ...
Maan: keep doing such by mistake.
Geet: just hide her self in sleeping bag...
Maan: silently pray that she had not taken the incident serious ..walk out
Dev: how is she ?
Maan: smiled she is better.
Dev: thank God.
Lucky : why don't we find way Our self
Dev: it is thou good idea but if we get lost we will not be able to come back...
Maan: but we can try ,it is useless to sit here like this, we will be back before sunset
Arjun 3 of us should go & remain stay with girls...
Maan: i am coming with you.. he quickly got ready
Arjun: let take that guy too
Maan: why him?
Arjun: he should not even left here too.
Maan ok ..they took required things & walk towards hill..
Geet woke up in evening, she was feeling better.
Pinky: how are you?
Geet: i am fine
Pinky: have your soup .
Pinky yes don't your remember they drop goods
Geet: oh yes... wait let me go out
Pinky why? it is very cold out there.see everyone is in
Geet; Maan tou nahi ha?
Pinky he has gone
Pinky in search of way
Geet: what? she open the door of the tent chilly breeze came in.
Mamaji : beta close it
Geet: why nobody stop him?she said bit loud..
Dev: he will come back by night,
Geet:it is night. i am going she just picked up a torch
Dev: hold her arm "pagal ho it is dark "
Geet; what if any thing happen to him? i will go
Dev : no wait for some time ..
Geet: just removed his hand over her arm..she started walking in the passage ... everyone was looking at her..time flies ... they heard noise ...
Lucky & Dev went out with flash light...Arjun & Briji was coming ...
Geet: went out where is Maan..she just pull his coat..
Arjun: he is there? she just ran in the direction .."he is too heavy we can't care him more" ..Dev & Lucky ran too...
to be cont...today it is mostly in english :) dont forget to leave comment as it help in proceeding. i will update once a week ..may be some time twice as having alot of load shedding so i apologized in advance ...
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