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Short story Journey of Life (maaneet)pt4 at pg9 26 (Page 5)

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
awesome update
who s brij?
 

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Awesome update
continue soon
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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 8:56am | IP Logged
NIce..
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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 11:06am | IP Logged

Early next morning

Maan woke up she saw Geet sitting placing her hands on her ears , he knock her back "what happen?"

Geet: pointed at Mama ji

Maan: what ?

Geet: he is snoring  i thought there is a wolf  out side whisper

Maan: there must be a wolf  too

Geet: like a kid  "really i want to see "try to get up

Maan: grab her arm and pull her back she landed on his chest " are you mental it is 5 in morning it will be freezing out side "

Geet: looked at him  and blink her eyes

Maan: you will wake every one he just ignore her looks .

Geet: shhh listen some one is out side  can you hear ?she pointed at a shadow out side the tent

Maan : removed his coat collar from his ears and look in the direction she pointed ...there was a shadow

Geet: see

Maan placed his hand on her mouth  "chup"

Geet: looked around  whisper "that dangerous man is missing"

Maan"you stay here i will go and see"

Geet: "jee nahi no need to be a hero "

Maan: looked at her " what?

Geet: "he look like a ...Maan placed his hand on her mouth as they heard him talking..

Brij was whispering "hello hello 3478"

Maan: just pull Dev arm who was sleeping next to him whisper in Geet ear "dont make noise"

Dev: shouted "Kya huwa "

Maan: just bang his head ..quickly lay down

Geet; had a laughter ... she hide her self in sleeper

Brij :just hear Dev

Dev was sitting he looked around found everyone asleep.he again lay down

Geet: poke in Maan chest

Maan: whisper" kya"

Geet: is he a terrorist ?

Maan: knock her the way she poked him "go and ask him if you have that much courage "

Geet: na baba na she hold his coat  tight " mein na tou kuch nahi suna "

Maan: pagal you know you are cartoon

Geet: jee nahi

Maan:didnot reply her as he knew it was useless to argue with her... time passed


it was 9 when every one woke up

Lucky: uff it is too cold

Mama ji : go out and see are they here

Dev no one arrived yet

Sasha : how we will stay ? they should come to get us.

Geet:relax they will find us for sure till then we all should keep our moral high if we will be sad we will get frustrated

Maan:pat her back Wow are you a lecturer ?

Geet: yes i am any problem

Maan: no problem

Dev lets go again to the plane debris may be we search few more things ..

Geet: pull Maan coat i will too come may be i find my I phone 5

Maan: had a laughter ..you are really a cartoon yeh lo mera  iphone lalo  ...he looked at Brij who was looking at them ...

Geet:  oh really  i can have your 

Maan: yes  you can have

Geet; pata ha i  saved money form my salary for months to get it 

Maan: happy now 

Geet; ya hug he 

Maan : pagal ho tum 

Geet: thori thori 

Maan: ok i am going 

Geet: mein bhi chalo 

Maan:hmm looked around chalo 

Geet quickly got ready.

Maan and Dev went out

Dev kya huwa

Maan: there is some thing wrong with that tall guy Geet heard him talking with some one early morning 

Dev: what ?

Maan: we are not sure yet we have to keep an eye on him .

Dev: lucky you stay here with uncle with ladies  till we come back

Lucky ok caption ..

He started walking with romeo towards the debris .


Geet ran fast to Maan

Maan kya huwa

Geet i will take out his eyes if he will look at me again ..

Maan: wait let me go and talk to him

Geet;leave it

Maan: no it is high time

Geet: chora na lets go ,if he does again then you talk to him

Sasha : wait i am coming too

Geet: smiled good

Sasha : uff kya ha woh

Geet; ask her to be quiet "fight hojai gai .."

Sasha: shhh

Geet; kya

Sasha have you heard

ADi ran out of tent Plane  search team

Maan ran to Geet "scarf do "

Geet; gave him her scarf  they ran to the hill top to wave them

Dev  see they have trace us they have drop things  they all pull

Sasha they will come for us  soon yahoo she hug Geet

Brij came out and he just walk towards wood  , Maan and Dev looked at each other .

Maan  he is suspicious. let me follow him

Geet: hold his hand "no need of that"

Maan looked at her

Geet: see they have find us soon they will send search team, then we all will be back to Our life why you want  him to become your enemy?

Maan: looked back at her

Geet; see he is coming back  .

Maan:  you go in i will help Dev, Arjun , & Adi

Geet: walk to the tent 

Brij  hello 

Geet; stop looked around 

Brij: i like the way you smile 

Geet: what ?

Brij tum muhje ko achi lagti ho 

Sasha and Nt walk out as they heard his loud voice .

Geet: but i dont like you ? she try to move pass him ,he hold her hand 

Brij :suno tou 

Geet; please leave me  her delicate wrist was in his manly hand . "please chora mujhe ko"

Brji : tum baqi sub se tou bohot baat karti ho 

Romeo and Mami ji came out 

Mami ji: what are you doing ?

Brij: apna kam se kam rakho ...

Romeo : this is not fair ,

Geet: leave me you have no right to hold me .

Brji : twisted her hand that suited guy have right kon ha woh?

Geet: aah you are hurting me ...

Mama ji chore he come in between them  but brij pushed him ...

Geet: Maan 

 Maan who was pulling the parcel with Dev and co felt some one called him , he just left it and ran to the tent 

Brij : your hero is not here 

NT: yeh batameezi ha , chora iss ko

Brij :  why  ?

Maan: i will tell you why he just hit him . what you think of your self ?

Brij : how dare you? he wipe blood from his mouth.. he try to get up but romeo and Lucky hold him 

Maan: how dare you touch her.. he just hug Geet tight 

Brij : who are you ?

Maan: she is my ..he paused 

Brij: kon ?   if you can be her friend i can be too. he used abusing language.bolo no answer right?

Maan:  she is my fiance , he just picked her up as she was scared and shivering he just walk in to the tent ...


to be cont... i know the concept is very crazy , and may be i am not at all touching it properly and leaving loopholes please ignore it as my mistake comment and hit like button if you want me to continue 



Edited by naddiya26 - 20 September 2011 at 11:22am

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 11:25am | IP Logged
nice part maan is d most sweetest n geet d cutest

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maansi007

nice part maan is d most sweetest n geet d cutest
LOLlol and what about me 
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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Clap itz beautiful update... i Heart it

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nice update...i just wanna beat brij...

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