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Short story Journey of Life (maaneet)pt4 at pg9 26

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hi readers  hope you all are fine .. as  few of you asked me to start a new story on Maaneet here i am with a character sketch .and prologue

Maan: a business man , always busy . dadi want him to get married but he always say " i dont have time for myself how  i will give her"

Geet: belong to a middle class family . her opinion about marriage is " if i will like some one i will only marry then . i dont want to spend my whole life with an anonymous like a reboot'


Prologue

Maan going on a business meeting to china  and Geet on a winter holidays ...


Geet: at airport ..fix her bag on shoulder  " uff again flight is late " she walk to the shop and buy  chips

Shopkeeper: madam 50 rs

Geet: damagh thek ha i will pay you 50 rs for this small packet ...  rakho  she turn back and bang in to Maan

Maan: just hold her  both look at each other

Geet: sorry...

Maan: sorry

Geet: aap bhi na la kuch yahan se chor ha ..

Maan: smiled ...

Geet; walk to seated in lounge

Maan: walk to the show bought news paper... look at Geet who was sitting chewing her gum and listening music... " pagal ha " walk and seated far from her


there was announcement  they both march to their class respectively...Maan in business and Geet in economy class.. the flight was smooth suddenly their plane came in air-pocket and it started shaking badly  ...all the         passenger frighten ...

Pilot announce " i sadly  have to announce our plane is damage and we have to make an emergency exit please do as the crew advise you, it is minus 5 out so wear your warm clothes..May God bless you all  "...


do tell me how it is if you all like it then i will proceed dont forget to comment..title yet to decide ... listen the track and tell me what suit


special thanks to Hasan Shirazi  for the track




Edited by naddiya26 - 26 September 2011 at 11:17am

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Chapter 1

passenger is plane ..

DEV : pilot

NT as air hostess

Lucky: crew

Mama ji: passenger

Nandini as passenger

ADI as DR

Pinky  as DR

Romeo as passenger

Sasha :as Passenger

Tasha  as Passenger

Brij  as culprit



Geet raised the volume of her  i phone: closed her eye "baba ji  yeh kya hogaya "

Nandini sitting next to her poke her " chalo"

Geet: nahi aap jai mein nahi jao gai ...Jump from plane no no

Nandini : left her and walk ahead...as there was crowed of people next to the emergency exit.. everyone was panic ladies were screaming with fear .plane crew was helping them to slide down

Maan: was also in lane of passengers he was coming toward the exit .. he saw Geet praying with close eyes and she was just moving .

Maan: bend over the seat and tap her shoulder

Geet: look at him

Maan: come

Geet; no no you go i will not jump . i have height phobia ...

Maan: do you want to die ? he seated next to her

Geet: look at him.

Maan: this plane will crash , he unbelt her

Geet: : i am not coming

Maan: pagal maath bano chalo ... he just  pull her up to stand ..  the plane had a jerk and the were back to seat

Geet: sachi mein yeh plane,,

Maan: nahi pilot was making us April fool , again made her stand  and push her in front of him in the lane


Mama ji: hello hello  that was my place ...

Maan :everyone will get their turn

Mama ji:: no you go back

Lucky: dekha it is not time to fight it is time to support ... see how he help her inn kai turn tou aaga thi...

Mama ji: acha acha  ..

Maan thank Lucky and he follow Geet

Geet: mujhe ko nahi jana she try to sit on a seat

Maan: pull her out of seat " you dont have time " the plane just swing she just grab his coat ...

Geet: look at him tears roll down her eyes

Maan: " maran ka kya shoq ha "

Geet: nahi

Maan: turn her around and push her to the door,,

NT: 1 2  3  and she pushed her out of  the door.

Geet: shouted but she was sliding down  and  after few second she landed in snow ...  with her head in ..."baba jee nahi chori gai mein iss ko " she look around there were other passengers sitting few were hurt and they were rubbing and screaming in pain..

Maan landed bit far from her ... .

Geet: try to get up but her feet stuck in snow...

Maan: look around it as it was evening time they could see each other ...

Geet: charo gai nahi mein aap ko she just taken out her foot  crawl to Maan

Maan: mein na kya kiya ..he just removed snow from his over coat

Geet: again stuck in and lost balance fall flat on snow ...

Maan: had a laughter

Geet: aap ko haasi aarahi ha ..

Maan: tou ro kar kya karo iss ka bhi kuch faida nahi ha .he got up and walk to Mami ji and help him to sit

Geet: ajeeb admi ha ladies first hota ha and he walk to a guy..

Maan gave him support and walk back to Geet.."chalo ga yeh abhi bhi yahan he bethna ha " he gave her his hand

Geet: hold it and got up" my legs "

there was a big bang and they all turn to see the plane crash ...

Geet: started crying loud holding his coat

Maan: look at her "aab kya huwa "

Geet:" i forgot my iphone5 how i will call mama to tell her i am here"

Maan: feel like banging his head he just push her to snow and walk with mamaji to others .

Geet: muhje ko chor kar kahan jarah ha

Maan: pehla tum rolo achi tarah phir mein aakar tum ko lagata hoon

Geet: acha thek ha

Maan: i was right she is pagal

Mama ji " kis ko bola pagal"

Maan: sorry sorry sir aap ko nahi bola pagal iss larki ko bola ha

Mamaji: ko se larki  he look at Geet.. thek ha thek

Maan:aik aur pagal  he just made him sit with others...

Geet: whistle  "hello i am waiting:"

Maan: iss ka baap ka nokar hoon mein  he started helping others ..

Geet: keep seating didnot move

Dev walked with Nt to other

Maan: woh nahi aai?

Dev: i asked her she said pointing at you  he said he will come to take me..

Maan: with made face and walk to her

Geet: kab se aap ka intazr kar rahi hoon ..

The sun was setting and its reflection was on her face she said so cutely that he could not take his eyes of her  .Maan: just bend and pick her up and walk to others  she just wrap her arm around his neck

Geet; pata ha pilot na bola ha may be my Iphone is not burn

Maan: could not hide his smiled and he at last smiled ... "pagal cheeze ha yeh"



i hope you guys like it as per subject it should be a serious  but i dont know why it is turning into a humor ss  ... do tell me how it is...waiting for comments..  oops ...jab itna crazy hoga to kya hoga... hope not like LOST




Edited by naddiya26 - 16 September 2011 at 12:15pm

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good one cont soon 

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Good start. Waiting for next part ...

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awsome continue soon

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Loved it.
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terrible accident to start with, but it seems they will find way to life in those unfortunate conditions

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