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MG SS: Silent Suffering (LAST CH, pg.136) sept 28 (Page 45)

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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 8:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -bansi-

Reya...HugBansiii Hug
hmm...update was not bad...LOL...so u r saved...Wink..oh really...just okay Shocked..when i made geet talk...that was just okay ? Shocked
ok coming to the update..!!
it was superb..!! thank u love Big smile
pari knows maan better than himself...n she understood that he has fallen in love with the unknown girl...how sweet...Embarrassed..like she said...she knows him too well..and she will help understand the unknown feelings..Embarrassed
so he named her payal cz he had also found her payal in the hilltop..LOL..accha naam hain..i like it too Tongue
they all tried to make her talk but all in vain..Ouch..she is so hurt n disturbed mentally that she refuses to talk also...poor girl...sh went thru so much...n seeing her in pain maan's heart wrenches in pain too...aur maan ko dukhi dekh kar...i feel pain..Ouch...yup..they are both in pain...their pain may be different but seeing Geet in pain hurts maan as well Ouch
maan wud talk to her in the form of his daily routines n all...she wud jus blink...
n finally she spoke..yaayyy...she said her name is geet n not payal..n maan was lost in her soft musical like voice...he was lost because he heard the same voice in his dream Embarrassed
n did u have to stop there reya...Angry Angry Angry...grrr...Angry.yup..makes for a awesome cliffhanger Wink
u got this point only to stop ur writing...Angry Ouch...
but all in all i totally loved the update...it was awesome..Embarrassed Embarrassed
cont soon...Tongue thanks sweetie Hug

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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nazmaa

Arghhh Reya!! LOL
Why Do You Always Stop At The Crucial Point ..
It Was Getting Interesting !! Big smile
Update Real Quick x
hahaha...i left you all hanging cause i am so awesome like that LOL...gonna try to update by tuesday..hopefully Embarrassed

Originally posted by preethia

loved the update...
finally maan got to know her name well payal is also not bad he can call her that...
so maan has already fallen waiting for more to know abt our mystery gal...
Thanks hun...
Payal is a special name because they are connected through her anklet...maan falling for her and he doesn't seem to know it yet...Embarrassed
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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 3
Reya sweety i hope u will make this a happy one in the ending...
nice part...
so Geet finally spoke and also told her name to MAAN...
shes not comfortable with men examining her...
comfortable with Maan and Pari...
and Maan is getting so closer to Geet...
Yash and Pari are quite interesting...
cont soon dear...
i shall try Deepa...i shall try...Embarrassed
she is comfortable with Maan and Pari because she spends a lot of time with them...Embarrassed
Yash and Pari will get even more interesting Wink
Thanks for liking it Deepa :)

Originally posted by mchopra

wht a discovery REYA..but Maan is tooo cute...the way he is taking care her of her and all..and woman incraese the size of the update..this hardly looks to me like 5 6 pages,...thts too darn short...
heheh LOL..it was quite a discovery...u all finally know it's geet for sure...
oh come on sheryu...be easy on the girl...this is all i get done Ouch..
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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
I love your ff. it's simply amazing.

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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mandymore

Wow...superb geet boli
Luvd it,thnxs 4 pm
Fir gyab mat hojana..bahut tadpate ho
yup..finally she spoke up LOL...but torture inflicted intentionally...university is my enemy LOL..but i will do my best Embarrassed

Originally posted by -Nilam-

Beautiful update...loved it...Clap
So finally she speaks.. ...her nameTongue
eagerly waiting for your next update...
we are making some progress...slowly Embarrassed...thanks for liking it hun :)

Originally posted by londongirl95

you had to stop when geet finally said something?!?!?!?!? i hope you update soon coz im DYING to know who hurted geet and why!!!! this was an amazing update!!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!
what a cliffhanger it was Wink..the best place to stop...thanks for liking the update hun 
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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lil.mizz.smexii

OOOMMMGGG
I FREAKIN LOOOVEEED IT WOMAN!
god that DAYUMMM awesomeee
i loveeed every little bit of it
from Pari's concern to him calling her Payal to her trusting him and then her talking to him
their silent relationship ALL OF IT!
cont soon
thanks for the pm
awww..thanks a ton hun...*reya grins like a idiot* Big smile..i am glad u liked it ..

Originally posted by hopehot

res---

why doesn't she speak...Confused 

Dreamgirl???.Confused..that actually reminds me of Deepika P from om shanti om..LOLWink
 
she spoke!Shocked
 
LoVeD It!! Embarrassed
she doesn't speak because she is traumtized...and unwilling to share her past Ouch...but yes..she does break her silence...
i never thought of it that way...but now that u said it...i will be thinking of Deepika P LOL


Edited by maankigeet4ever - 17 October 2011 at 12:58am

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Posted: 17 October 2011 at 5:23pm | IP Logged
Amazing update!
Totally loved it...!
Love pari and maan's friendship!
She knows that he has fallen in love with geet!
Aww maan named her payal...so cute!
They all tried to make her talk...
But at least she trust maan!
Loved how maan was talking to her!
Telling her about his day and all... 
And finally she talked to maan..!
Cant wait for the next update!
Please continue soon...!



Edited by kooliio - 17 October 2011 at 5:23pm

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Posted: 17 October 2011 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by $ara_$hachi

reya, what a fab update Thanks Sara :)

loved it ... totally ... so, finally she opened her mouth just in case to tell him her real name but i love to hear "payal" from his mouth ... you know, the comfort & bond with this name, that he have from last few days ...Even after she told him her name, Payal will hold a special place in his heartEmbarrassed
 pari & Maan are really worried for her ... poor girl, have gone from so much pain ... i know eh Cry...you will know more as she reveals her story..Ouch
so, finally pari said what actually he was denying to himself ... Dr. Maan Singh Khurana is in love ...he is...he just doesn't want to accept LOL
 i just love the way he understand her silent language ... and when he touched his hand after seeing yash ... omg, she is so comfortable yet silent towards Maan ..they have their own connection :)
 as she have opened her mouth & the title says so, i don't think she will tell him anything yet but glad that things  are turning good as of no worse than ... amazing...yup...u are right...the truth will come out in bits and pieces...
thanks hun...glad u are liking it...Smile

do cont soon & do PM me

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